FF 'Faramosh' by Yumna and Zen (Part-3 on pg 16)

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Sonali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

wow what a twist, Shaan Jeeju?

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-SYS-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

@Jess

Update?FF?

What are you talking about woman??😆

Thank you for the comment-yes it is a simple story.We are drawing inspiration from alot of people we know and see.

@Kari

Thanks gal! Umm we just posted the first part.Ab next ke liye wait ker!

@Sonali

Yes Jeeju-Anvesha's to be😃

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Jessica

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: zennn
@jess

thank you jess! first comment and itna encouraging. really thanks 😊 oh this khanak is very normal. just like you me or any other girl of today's. so is this shaan. nothing fairytale like happening in this story.

spot on bold : Humph.. kyun bhai what is wrong with fairytales?!😕 Was that for me?!!😲

j/k... 😆😆😆😆😆😆 Loved it re... It is very nice. Simple... yet intriguing. 😃

@Yumuna.. hence forth I am going to call you what I used to before Yumuna.. that is for pretneding!!! Just get your butt moving... and update both FF's!! Refreshing your short lived memory.. Dasht-e... one!!! Badi aayi what FF?!?!!!😡😡😡😃😃😃😃

Edited by jparker - 14 years ago

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Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: zennn

anki! you can go with whoever you like meri jaan. that's the whole point of giving the three choices! rofl! and hello why would rooj kill us? this is our FF. humari marzi jisko cast karein. ek ko karein ya teen ko karein! 🤣

seriouly zenny choces i reda chocos i thoght zenny kab se naughty nabb gayi ok...she will dnt u knw she ahte ksg and gk ah ah she will

dekh abhi apna chkku nkla kar chal rahi ahin teri tarf

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Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

omggg zenny i cant belive tu kuch aisa likehegi awsome yaar...r u seriouly lol...shaan jiju ha ha this gine be fun kahnak will fall for hsi ji ju dnt do this i have big sister u agiving me all wrong ideas ha ha🤣but loved the update awsome

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

@Jess

Woman.Go have a memory loss already.I did 😃

And I am not sure if you like simple or not🤔

@Anki

Go read the first part faltu woman

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Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: -SYS-
@Jess
Woman.Go have a memory loss already.I did 😃
And I am not sure if you like simple or not🤔

@Anki
Go read the first part faltu woman

abey faltu women padkar hi to commnt kar rahi hu belh! jija ji ah ha nice😃

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Urooj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

btw i haven't started reading...ill read in a second. lol

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Jessica

@jparker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: -SYS-
@Jess
Woman.Go have a memory loss already.I did 😃

Kya did.. abandon kyun kiya!!!

And I am not sure if you like simple or not🤔

Love simple or stylish.. yours is beautiful.. I liked it instantly...😳

Yamuuuna get cracking... you have zennn to help ya...😃

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Urooj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Beautiful Start!!!

OMG i can sooo see her sister either running away or something happening to her...or Shaan liking Khanak instead of Anvi...

btw Khanak is a brat...did one of u penned her character based on urself? lmfao

i know namoona is a brat coz she says it all the time. lmfao

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