ShaNak SS - Sathi Sath Nibhana:Pt11|Pg25 17Sep11

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mystory

@mystory

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#111

hay disha pls mention all ur parts on pg 1, i think i have missd 1 prt .coz i cant connect it . i mean there ws this prt where they faught in canteen (mera peecha kyun kar rahe ho) then there ws this prt were she cms to her sasural after marriage.nd nw in this prt they hv come together(kissd)m confused😕

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destinylove

@destinylove

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Hey dear loved the update shaan says no more advances and within limits😆😆😆😆😆 cute one😊

Edited by sshriyaa84 - 14 years ago

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Dish sorry re I didn't know u updated last night! I read all the chapters at one go y'day afternoon & so told u to update y'day night!!

No u r going very good!! Loved it! But u know I am a total sucker for details. I want to know how did they came close? What made them realise that they can be bf & gf? I read se went to London met him, went to that party but what led to their relationship? U know more instances, more meetings, more interactions, more conversations...the budding romance is the stage that always hooks me, that's the phase I die for. So pls pls pls in flashback give some more scenarios to show how they came close to each other.

Otherwise story wise ekdam fabulous jaa rahi hai!! 😃

Very enticing!! 👍🏼

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Aussiegal

@Aussiegal

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Chalo, my mission for the next month is to bug all the brilliant writers we have on this forum for updates. And to be honest, Dish, you don't have a leg to stand on as you're constantly asking for updates yourself.. 😆😆😆😆 So, now that the shoes on the other foot,,update kar!!! 😛

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Brilliant tha re... I know m late...but I was being lazy...abhi sab ff pe ek saath commenting before everyone kills me...I pester you all to post updates and then I m lazy to post comment...I think... I had reserved a post sumwhere in the front pages when you posted the part ...but m too lazy to go and find it...So m posting here...LOL !!

Part 7 -

Hayeee how sweet !!

She fell asleep on the window sill and he was looking for her everywhere...And when he saw her the sight left him mesmerized...How cute is that !!! Awww !! Ur Shaan is such a softie...He didnt wanna wake her up so that she cud rest !!

Tu hi meri shab hai...

Zubaan hai...

Tu hi din hai mera...

Tu hi mera rabb hai..

Jahaan hai...

Tu Waqt mere liyee..

Main hoon tera lamhaa...

Kaise rahega bhalaa...

Hoke tu mujh se judaa...

Part 8 -

Awww ...First Kiss !! And she freaked out...Hehehe...Usko bhi 440 volts ka jhatka de diya shaadi ki baat kehke...Sweetie pies...

Loving this flitting between flashback and present...Cant wait to know how they came to becoming friends...U showed us when she came and Shaan dropped her off at Natasha's place...uske baad train me and then that coffee incident where they accused each other of stalking them...

Waha se baat bf-gf tak kaise aayi...Attraction kaise hua...bataa bataa...

Pehla Nashaa..

Pehle Khumaar...

Naya pyaar haii..

Naya intezaar..

Kar lu main kya apna haal...

Aye dile bekaraar..

Mere dile bekaraar...

Tu hi bataaa

Usne baat ki

Kuch aise dhang se..

Sapne de gayaa.

Wo hazaaron rang ke...

Reh jau jaise main haarke...

Aur chume wo mujhe pyaar se

Continue soon !! I LOVE YOUR FF !!

Luv,

Vandu

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Wow Dish !! Beautifully written 👏👏

I love long, long parts...I love updates describing inner turmoil, complications and confusions...
I love when people talk...I love it when a couple is confused how to take step ahead and where to take a relationship forwards !!!

Your Update had everything !!!

Shaan kissing Khanak spontaneouly...it was a peck actually but shakes Khanak completely !!!
I can totally relate to where she is coming from...for a girl like her, it would be frivolous to not think about future and marriage when being this close with a man...well depicted !!👏

Shaan has not been thinking about future as yet and she doesn't know where they are heading !!!

loved it dear !!!

Waiting to read the next part !!

love

Mani

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: togepe30
Continue kar re baba !!!

Had work today ... no prep as yet ... abhi ghar pahuchi ... will do it tomorrow if time permits ... past 2 weekends ghar par hi hoon...

~Cheers,
Dish

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Dish.. nice & cute FF... waiting for more 😉

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#119

Where is the update??

Wasnt there supposed to be one today???

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: togepe30
Where is the update??
Wasnt there supposed to be one today???

meri Maa ... main maani, adi, saaz ke caliber ki nahi hoon, time lagta hain ... thoughts aane mein phir usko likhne mein .. started, but not progressed much ... shanti rakh ...

~Cheers,
Dish

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