shanak love story......part4pg4 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey samriddhi dear I read both parts simple and sweet So khanak is the first one to hug !! great!!!
Edited by sshriyaa84 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Samriddhi..............
loved the update...................
khanak got the job & she hugged shan................lovely............
they both can't sleep.............thinking about each other........................
loved it............
continue soon.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Samriddhi
Cute update 😊
continue soon..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hai,
loved the update..just read both the parts..its good..if time permits just go thru ur update 2nd time so tat u can minimise errors..dont take it in a bad way..once v start reading v ignore the mistakes if any..its not a big deal..by the way is it a OS r FF?continue soon..ur story line is good..
luv,
ramani
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its realy nyc pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART3
this happened 1st time shan woke up late and he is already late for office shan ate the breakfast very quicky as hi is going to leave dadi met him
dadi:shan u r here till now u
shan:yes dadi actually i woke up late this murning
dadi: hum cum this happened its 1st time when u r late u were like this 5 yr ago
shan :(angrily)dadi how many time i need to remind u don't talk about about tht days
and shan leave angrily
dadi(in her mind)what happened 5 yrs ago whenever i talk about that days ho got angry
where as shan in car :i m very late tuday this happened 1st time and ths happened becauze of tht girl tht stupid seceratory khanak now shan u need to focus on work not girls and u know wht happened with u
shan reached the office and straightly go into his cabin khanak was already sitting there
kahank:gud morning sir
shan:gud morning
khank:how cum u r late sir tuday
shan:oh!hellow u r the boss or i am
khanak:u
shan:so why r u asking questions to me
khank:aise
shan:(irritated)anyway i am dictating u notes plz .......... write down
khanak:yes sir
khank take out notepad and pen and start writing after shan dictate the notes
shan: have u written it
khanak:yes sir
shan:show to me
khanak:why sir
shan :again u r asking me questionns
khaank:sir i hv written it and i will give u in fair
shan:i sais just show it to me
shan snached notepad frm her and amazed to see tht she was not writing but drawing
shan:whs ths
khank:drawing
shan:very funny. why u hv nt written wht i am dictating so whtever i am saidis worthless
khank:no sir. sir phone is there and i hv recrd whatever u hv said sir look this is called intelligence
shan{angrily}go and write ths notes write now and give me in 1 hr do u understand
and khanak leaves
and standing outside the door
said sadu boss samajta kya hai apne aap ko 2 hrs ka lecture diya aur khe raha hai 1 hrs mein fair karge do
whereas shan in his cabin talking to himself what she is ,she is ready to fight everymoment and so talktative after sumtime he hear a khnk and wish plz. this shud not be khanak but khank was there
shan:now wht khanak
khanak:sir look i hv fair down in half an hr
shan was surprised
shan:how cum u can write so fast
khanak: its becauze of technology
shan:oh!god how much u r dependent on technology
khank:sir technology is made for us to make our work easy
shan:(in his mind) yar yeh phir ladhne pe aa gayi wht shuld i do to make her busy
khanak: sir did u say anything
shan:no anyways these are sum 10 files plz. check it
khanak:sir these r not sum these r many
shan:so wht u r hrere to do work not to sit free
khanak:but sir so much work on 1st day
shan:u r checking there file or not
khanhk:if i will nt check it thn wht u will do
shan:wht can i do i am ur boss and u know i can dismis u
khank:yes sir
khanak take the file and eas going to her cabin shan interpur her
shan:khanak plz. . don't use any technology
khanak:sir u want these file to be check then u will get it check
shan :do 1 thing u sit in my cabin and check thse file
khanak:sir in ur cabit no ways
shan:you will check these file in front if me
is tht clear
khanak:(no choice left) yes sir
and they together move to shan cabin
guys plz. give me lonf views whether u r liking or not because i am not getting good respose so guys plz. write ur viws
Edited by samriddi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei,
tats nice..so shaan is having an eye on khanak..just a day is not enough for his distractions it seems..he is keeping her very near to him..wat happened 5 yrs ago?do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Samriddhi
Nice update 😊
continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi Samriddhi ...............
lovely update..................😃
so what happened 5 yrs ago...........
reveal fast...................
continue soon.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update dear......
ummm sooo what happened
before 5 years still thinking sooo tell us sooon ..ok

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