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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#471

hey Aditee .................

please please please please please please please please please

please please please please please don't end this FF

i love it.........................

its amazing..................

amazing update once again............................

loved it..............

shanak in ur FF r just wonderfully described................i am speechless

continue soon...................

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#472

ur BLUE lines r always shocking😆

nxt part plz.

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souma

@Souma.N

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#473

No no no continue karo....I want to see this FF go upto their kids!!!

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: Souma.N
No no no continue karo....I want to see this FF go upto their kids!!!

I was abt to tell her to continue till khanak convince her parents for her marriage with shaan....par tujhe bachcha bhi chahiye...I dnt mind😃

@ adittee.....stop blackmailing...we all want this ff to go on nd on nd on...U knw it😃

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souma

@Souma.N

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: cadbery

I was abt to tell her to continue till khanak convince her parents for her marriage with shaan....par tujhe bachcha bhi chahiye...I dnt mind😃

@ adittee.....stop blackmailing...we all want this ff to go on nd on nd on...U knw it😃

I am buying more time!!😆

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#476

Aditeeeeeeeee I was going to bed & as usual just thought of checking ur story & voila another update.....& what an update!!! Now my sleep is all gone! 😃😳

And didn't I say I know this Shaan? I knew it why he wants to learn Gujrati! 😃 Love how he got attracted to the opposite of what he has associated with so far in life. Its her simplicity, naivete & unassuming attitude that has tugged his heart! Oooohhh love it!

And I could so see her nervousness around him, the jittery feeling that is making knots within her specially knowing what will be Shaan's reaction if he comes to know about Nirav.

Seriously I am flipping now! 😃 And his mind blowing attempt to erase all doubts about him & his feelings. 😃 And hands not in pocket but on the windows on each side of Khanak! 😆 Ok understood another reason why his hands r always avoiding any contact with her!! 😆

And that line in Blue, OMG, that is as bold as it can get but with complete honesty! 1 thing that I never guessed was ur Shaan will be inexperienced in this arena! I thought he has done a masters on this subject. 😆 Khanak don't think, just say YES to whatever he proposes! 😆

And Madam yeh kya laga rakhi hai?? End in the next update & stuff? Blackmailing all ur readers or what? Every1 wants u to continue & u want to end, why?? Pls no more fishing for compliments & just give us what we r craving for, pls pretty pls! Haath jodu, paiyer paroon kya?

Jaldi se update kar de pls. I am going to have a sweet dream now! 😃

PS - Since u confirmed 'kids it will be', just a clarification, the line in blue, did he meant 'tonight' or sometime later in his life?? Wanted to know just for my curious mind! 😃

Edited by lghosh - 14 years ago

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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#477

Aditeeeeee......

Awesome parts yaar

Speechless

Mindblowing

Pls dont end it .. please... please....

I want to see them handle issues together for eachother....

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swetamwari

@swetamwari

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#478

it was awesome...plz plz plz dont end it...i want 2 c how he convinces her family too...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont end it..i love this ff

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#479

Aditee!
wonderful..dont end it now..continue with it..really really loved the bold blue line at the end..😳😳😳😳..that was nice..wat wud khanak respond to this statement..continue soon aditee..