RBO Written Update - 9th Feb 2011

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Update for February 9, 2011- this is my first attempt so bare with me and the credit goes to priya too used her dt live updates as the template xx

Shaan (still in cream cargo pants and green t with black gillet jacket from yesterday's epi) goes to Khanak's house and decorates the door with balloons, has a sorry board with smiley face and holds a bunch of flowers, he then says

Shaan: ab baas khanak ab is chokat ke bet kar, (grabs his guitar), guitar utakhar ek ghaane ke liye aur uski baad khanak dhorti (running) hui aayigi, sharmate hui dharwaza khuli gi aur muskurahat se kahegi..

( so basically I've come outside your house and I will start singing and you will run to the door and blushing open it with a smile and the n you will run to me)

the balloon falls off the door.... he goes to correct it... when he comes back the guitar goes missing......

(khanak wearing same clothes as yesterday)

Khanak asks Anand that she also wants to have a wish list.. anand says no need you can do it later... khanak says kyun do you think your that special that only you can have a wish list that you walk around with, not me? I too have wishes and what's the difference between your and my wishes

anand: there is a lot of difference..you're not aware I am very special and only special people can make these lists

khanak: I am special too.. when I was born... my neighbors child had a calf (oops) anand laughs I mean my neighbor's cow had a calf,

anand; wow you are special

khanak: I want to make a list and that's it

anand says make one later and asks her to first practice making a bubble with the gum- it's a challenge

khanak tries it and succeeds looks at herself doing it in the taali's reflection

shaan : complains that his guitar has been openly stolen in the village and that to in the day.. he wants to complain to khanak... but says she is already angry.... so decides to find it himself... he looks around and

finds it near a tree,,,, he goes and picks up... mummu the kid (from yesterday's epi) stands near the door to khanak's house and bursts a balloon.

Khanak blows a big bubble and gets excited and squeals, anand says vah kya baat hai, now you have learnt I'm going

Khanak says no she hasn't done it properly and to let her learn properly

Anand looks annoyed as khanak continues to practice

shaan and mummy : shaan asks the kid what is she doing the kid replies bursting balloons shaan says he can see that but why and kid replies because it's fun he then threatens the kid that if she burst the last balloon.....mujse bura koi nahin hoga. girl stands up and burst it in his face (lol)

anand and khanak continue practicing blowing bubbles they both stop hearing a balloon bursting outside and wonder what the noise is..

the girl walks away from shaan he lifts his guitar wanting to hit the girl

anand gets up to go and khanak says where are you going I completed the challenge now the two of us will write my wish list get me a pen and paper

anand: arey pushpa why are you getting into such faltu things, wishes are not thought about they come to you on their own and theres a time to do so

khanak mimics him and says do you think I'm crazy and get me a pen and paper, to which anand agrees

khanak : says ok so 10 wishes and writes down the numbers 1-10 so wish no1 shaan's work

anand: what? What is that?

Khanak: my husband to get fully into his work and find a lot of success

Anand: vah madam vah, this is your list, what do you!!! Want

Khanak: I want this too,

Shaan is upset that his balloon idea failed, his guitar strings broken now what to do can't go empty handed, thinks what does khanak like- films? Dance?, gets an idea and runs off

Khanak: wish 2 shaan gets his sense back

Anand: look madam, I don't know where your husband's sense is but this is your wish list not your husband's whatever wishes you have connected with your husband are all inclusive with wish no1- what do you want

Khanak: ok wish no1- my family

Anand: even in this you left yourself out- where are you in this

Khanak: 1 min whose wish list is this- mine, who's wishes- mine, so if I want these as my wishes who are you to make the rules and regulations, whatever I say is what's going to happen, and I want all my wishes to be connected with my family and husband

Anand: go so now you know what you're doing , I'm going to get things from the list the villagers have given me- I'll do my work you do yours bye

Khanak: no3 shaans song

rahul and jenny scene

jenny jogs to rahuls house he reaches theres a min later and says what you doing here, she finds his keys in a place where he hides it and he looks shocked. Rahul calls the watch guard to get rid of jenny but the watchman acts like his familiar with jenny really friendly to which rahul is again confused/shocked over

they both then enter rahuls house

anand comes back and kids start chanting something about bioscope khanak comes out after hearing the racket and asks what's going on anand tells her to which she doesn't want to go but he makes the kids take her there.

Khanak looks into the bioscope and sees a pic of the taj mahal, then a pic of her doing shaans dhoti from the road trip adventure, then a pic of him carrying her in his arms when she fell into the pool, she's confused and looks again and sees a pic of him and her post SR when she tells him she'll support him if wants to be a singer and their heads touching,, then a pic of them in the shower, then a pic of them in the paathshala when shaans about to hit her with the ruler,

She looks away and wanders has shaan come here- no no he couldn't have, and starts looking around

Drapes fall and you see shaans silhouette behind them walking towards khanak, he moves it aside and she turns to see shaan coming towards her slowly and smiling her smile spreads slowly (shaans wearing a reddish orange kurta with dhoti)

Shaan: (speaks in gujrati) Khanak hun tane ghare laijava aivo chun, mari saate chaale- which I think means khanak I have come to take you home with me

To this khanak lets out a smile and small laugh and he holds his hand out and says humare saath chalne and khanak says why?

He closes his hand to make a fist and walks towards her and says

Shaan: because I really love you khanak

Khanak: such? (really)

Shaan: yes khanak, without you dil nahin lagta that house is not a home it's just a house with four walls

(as he says this he's moving towards her and she's steeping backwards and goes behind a drape), please khanak forgive me. (he moves the drape) and places his head against her forehead and she closes her eyes (shanaks love tune dhum tana num in BG) he then cups head face in his hands and kisses her forehead and then says khanak I'm really sorry I should not have spoken to you like that in front of my friends- upon hearing this khanak is upset, he goes on to say I should not have asked questions like that (khanak has a FB of that night and gets upset) shaan says please forgive me but khanak runs away from there

shaan runs after her screaming out her name then comes in front to block her and says what happened khanak what haven't I done to make you happy and I thought after seeing that you'd be happy (khanak looks annoyed) and for a moment you were

khanak: I was only pretending to be happy and shaan replies what?

Khanak: Aap bhi natak kar rahe the-pyar mein pagal hone ka'hamare rishte ko sar ankhon pe bithane ka (yes because you are also acting shaantanu of being crazy in love and putting our relationship above everything) she says this sarcastically and smiles as she's about to walk off

Shaan: what are you saying

Khanak: Kya kya nahi kiya shantanu 'yeh jatane ke liye ki aap mujhse kitna pyar karte hain'kabhi yahan se gubbare.kabhi yahan se phool (what haven't you done for you to show me how much you love me- sometimes baloons and flowers ' khanak is taunting him but shaan doesn't get it and gets happy until she says).Hamare rishte ko to sirf bachkani harkat banake rakha apne- (you have made a mockery of our relationship by doing such childish antics) she want to walk away but before he can say anything

Shaan blocks her in and says: khanak, khanak interrupts him and says; Aap aaj bhi nahi jante ki aapki galti kya hai (you still don't know what your mistake is) shaan is left standing there confused a little upset

Rahul and jenny scene

Rahul tells her it's his house and thinks sam has put her up for this. Jenny says what is this sam sam who is she, darling you're not cheating on me are you, rahul says stop this drama and what will it take for you to leave, she says our marriage, he's confused. Then she tells him that he's going in the wrong direction for the fridge as he always forgets and goes the wrong way (which confuses him as how does she know kind of way) then she tells him not to have anything bad and he gets an apple out then she leaves. Rahul I must do something to get rid of this Jenny

Shaan chases khanak as he's running his chappals keep falling off,

Shaan: khanak listen to me, I know I've done a mistake that's why I've come this far to say sorry to you

Khanak: really, so tell me what mistake you made shaantanu? That you had to come thisss far to say sorry to me

Shaan: umm I made the mistake of asking you in front of my friends

Khanak: Aap aaj bhi nahi jante ki aapki galti kya hai (you still don't know what your mistake is) your problem is you think you everything but you don't what I don't understand is Agar bhagwan ne hum auraton ko itni takat di hoti to hume aap mardo ki jarorat na padti ( if god made us women this strong we would not need men)

Shaan: its my mistake

Precap:

Shaan I will follow you until the world ends, khanak: you will get tired and you will fall, then she sees the rv... so you have come with full prepartion... so that you are not affected with heat and dust... must have taken a lot of effort and pain.. sarcastically.....then she says even now u don't understand the ehmiat (importance) of relationships.

Sorry for being super long xx 😃

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.Dilwale. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow rafia! very well done yaar! this is your first update ever right? i am impressed!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rafia!! Very nice update!! Well done!! 👍🏼
Btw sweetz, you have 8th Feb written on the Subject of the Topic.. Its 9th Feb update today.. 😊 Correct it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks girls never realised how long it will take but thats my own fault translating each line lol
thanks nattie will correct it that just shows my brain has now officially switched off
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yay!!! I dont want Khanak to forgive him so easily. :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the update 😊

...soo who was taking their pics on the roadtrip? 😆...Overall, another good episode...liking khanak-anand scenes and even jenny is blending in well!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Raf.... lovez..
Thanks so much for doing the update.. can't wait to watch the epi now!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ krazee loll i was thinking the same
@ veena no probs it made me watch the epi several times lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome Update Rafia🤗
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thanks bona get onto the ccc lol

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