OS: New OS Idea Pg 77 - Page 20

Rain ,shadi (neighbours hi sahi),song and romance it had all ...Madira Seven haan :) .good that Khanak waited till all guests and family memebers were gone .But ek ke saath do free offer mila hum logo ko ..Sheela ki jawani and muni badnam hui free with zoobi doobi 😆 ...

Dono tali wonder how they went back inside .. 😊😆

Thanks to May ,Vandu ,Krishna and Saira for the inspiring you and coz of it we got this treat 😊

this is super cute and hilarious!!!!

I loved it how both were talli and danced...there was no OTT about this OS. It was super cute and still romanchik!

I loved it Beeni!!!

Now write another one!

rooj

i never knew tht u r such a gudd writer too....😆

its just awesome yar...!!

too gudd...luvdd all....very well written...!!keep writing more....👏

Kahani Pati Parmeshvar Ki

Standing in the middle of the room in the dim light of the bed side lamps, Shaantanu and Khanak were lovingly kissing each other, after what felt like many years. Shaantanu had, like always, enveloped his arms around Khanak's waist and like-wise Khanak's hands were around Shaan's neck. The kiss was getting longer than either Shaantanu or Khanak had expected.

"Main kuch bhool rahee hoon" Khanak said breathlessly and distractedly, as soon as the broke off.

"Mujhay pata hain tum kya bhool rahee ho, Khanak" said Shaan in his ever seductive voice as his hands moved behind her hair and towards the dori of her kameez, opening it. He held Khanak's face in his hand and looked into her big wandering eyes when all of a sudden Khanak shrieked and moved back. "SHAANTANUUUUU!! PATI PARMESHWAR!" she yelled and looked at the wall clock.

"WHATTT?!!" Shaan was extremely startled. "Patti parmeshwar?" What the hell are you talking about?" Shaan asked confused.

"Shaantanu---Pati parmeshwar---mera serial!!" Khanak said desperately, making a beeline for the door.

"Khanak Khanak Khanak Khanak" said Shaan hurriedly catching up with her, holding her wrist and pulling her back "Are you SERIOUS?!! Pati parmeshwar? Khanak Pati parmeshwar koi serial nahi hain----pati MAIN hoon----tumhara—" he said calmly, holding her shoulders firmly.

"Aray nahi Shaantanu! "Pati Parmeshwar" meray serial ka naam hain! Duss bujj gayay hain Shaantanu---" Khanak raised 10 fingers in front of Shaan's face "Mujhay jaana hain----mujhay dekhna hain---yahee toh thaaaaa jo main itni dair say bhool rahee thee!"

"What? Are you serious Khanak" Shaan repeated, thouroghly disconcerted. "Tum APNAY pati ko chor karr---kissii AUR kay "pati parmeshwar" (he made a face) ko dekhnay ja rahee ho?! Tum PAGAL toh nahi hogaee?! He said it forcefully, increasingly getting the feeling that this was some sort of joke.

"Shaantanu---" Khanak placed her hand on Shaan's face as though attempting to calm down a whining two year old. Shaan instantly turned his face to kiss her palm, pulled at her waist with one arm and said "Acha Chutkhula tha---in your words---now can we please go back to what we doing?" Shaan's tone was demanding rather than requesting as he held a strand of her hair and kissed it.

Khanak attempted to move back again and wriggled herself out of Shaan's grasp before he knew it. "Shaan aya na---yay na BUHAT acha serial hain---abhee naya shuru hua hain! Jub app yahan nahi thay tub mainay daikhna shuru kiya tha!"

"Really now?!" Shaan said sarcastically, " jub main NAHI tha! UB main AGAYA hoon! Now you're not watching any pati parmeshwar crap, except me, your REAL pati parmeshwar" he said pointing at himself, his eyes warning.

"Shaantanu ek ghantay kee toh baat hain! Main aati hoon na!" Khanak said in a hurry and rushed out of the room.

"EKKK GHANTAA!" Shaan said scandalized. "Yay serial hain ya movie hain?!" he said following her down the stairs into the living room. 'Pati Parmeshwar' he kept grumbling all the way loathing the phrase suddenly. He saw Khanak switch on the television and make her self comfortable on the Sofa. Making a face as though someone had snatched from him a beloved treasure, Shaan also sat beside her on the sofa, shaking it vigorously in the process and earning an annoyed look from Khanak.

Thoroughly uninterested, Shaan glanced at the television which was showing a ridiculously dressed up girl in a red sari, holding an aarti ki thaali in her hand, donning so much jewellery, Shaan thought the petite girl might just fall off with the weight of it. She was taking the blessings of reasonable good looking man dressed in a white kurta. The dramatic sight made him laugh and he looked sideways at Khanak, laughing and saying "Khanak---are you---serious—tum yay dekho geee?! Yay aadmi isska pati parmeshwar hain?! He looks like her father! And BY THE WAY, you have NEVER done that to me! Tum nay meray pair toh kabhee nahi chooyay!"

"Shaantanuuuu---serial main KC chal raha hain?" Khanak explained.

"KC? What's that?" Shaan wondered aloud.

"Oho Shaantanu Karwa Chauth! Aapko itna nahi pata?! Mummy jee nay kuch nahi sikhaya kya?"

"MOM?! She only calls it KC! You think she knows what it MEANS? And hold on? Tumnay toh meray liyay kabhee karwa chauth nahi rakha!"

"The word is 'Vrath' Shaantanu" Khanak said without looking at him, now looking at the guy in the TV making the girl drink water and break her fast. "aur rakha toh thaa! Jub aapko presidentation banana thee! Bhool gayay?!

"Yea whatever! Wooh meri LAMBI umar kay liyay toh nahi tha!" he retorted. "and plus tum baray "Pati parmeshwar walay serials dekhti hon! Kuch seekhteee toh ho nahi inn say! Don't these serials teach you to care for your husband, respect him, love him and errrr---make love to him?" he added the last few words deliberately.

But Khanak wasn't listening for she had shrieked again and was now staring at the screen in horror. Shaan looked to see the reason his wife had suddenly done a Rakhi Sawant and saw that the girl, who was happily being given water by her husband a minute ago was now sprawled on the floor.

"Usnay apni biwi ko ZAHER day diyaaa! Kavita mar gaee!" Khanak screamed, her eyes wide with shock. "Shaantanuuu----"

Shaan laughed "Oh god Khanak what the hell? Don't be such a drama queen! He gave her water!"

"Toh phir Kavita mar kaisay gaeee" Khanak said still not in her senses.

"Oh please Khanak this is a serial!" he said getting up, unable to digest the dramatic serial anymore "Ub doosra scene hoga kay Doctor ayay ga aur kahay ga 'Mubarak ho, appp Baap bannay walay hain! In kay serial main Baap banna kitna asaaan hota hain na?"

Khanak said nothing. She was too busy watching the girl's husband take her in his arms " ---And then the guy will say 'Mujhay yay bacha nahi chahiyay!" Shaan imitated the actor theatrically and becahari tumhari yay larki na---yay apnay so called 'Pati parmeshwar' kee khatir maan jayay gee! Aur bus phir hogaya tumhara serial KHATUM!" shaan finally announced and walked away but not before snarling and saying "I'm going to sleep! Pati parmeshwar sheesh"

Forty minutes later Khanak entered the room with a sad face but broke into a smile when she saw Shaan relaxing on the sofa watching an English Movie. He saw her enter, lowered the volume a bit and mocked "So how's your dukhyaari Kavita doing?Uskay pati parmeshwar nay ussay zeher diya ya nahi?" Khanak didn't say anything but walked over to Shaantanu and cuddled herself of the sofa beside him. Shaan placed his arm around her but was busy drinking in the action sequence on TV and didn't remove his eyes from the TV screen. Khanak kissed his shirt and then looked up at him. He wasn't looking at Khanak at all. How dare he not look at me? Khanak thought furiously. She hugged him tightly and felt Shaan responding to her hug but still not looking at her. She kissed him on the neck but Shaan did not budge. Finally she said "Shaantanu Pati parmeshwar khatum hogaya" she reminded him. "Hmmm" said Shaan, increasing the volume. Khanak got up in a huff and walked over to the bed and lay down on it "Shaantanu main soh rahee hoon!" she announced.

"Good neend Khanak" Shaan waived "What?" he said when he saw Khanak looking at him angrily "I'm lowering the volume hang on! Yaar main KUB say iss movie ka wait kar raha tha! Cable walay nay UB lagee hain!" he said more to himself than Khanak. Khanak turned and drifted off to sleep. Khanak felt she had slept for hours when she was vigorously shaken awake by Shaan. "Khanak---Khanak---Khannnnnnnaaaakkkk Utho" Shaan whispered.

"Huh? Kyun? Kya hua? Aap theek toh hain" Khanak said looking at the tim. It was only 12 am.

"Khanak Cable chala gaya!" Shaan whined

"Toh?" Khanak asked sleepily

"Toh kya ka kya mutlub?" Shaan said logically. "Lets get back to our original plan!"

"Kya? Cable chala gaya to aapko---Shaantanu! Just because aapka cable chala gay main Who sub nahi karoongi! Chalay SOH jayay"

"Haan toh main---main bore horaha hoon yaar! I'm jet lagged" Shaan whined again.

"Shaantanu nahi!" Khanak said lying down again.

"I better stop her from watching these serials now! God I hate Pati Parmeshwar! Hate him!" and saying this he went over to his side of the bed, cursed his bad luck and tried to sleep. Na Angelina Jolie dekhnay ko mileee na biwi kay saath romance, he swore.