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Posted: 15 years ago
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So from tomo we l get to see the romantic khanak all set to win her love win her angry pati and that too with no obstacles..all alone thanks to bappa:-)...
lets start from the strating scene...scenes shifts to car...shaan is all angry and confused with khanak saying that she is not going anywhere becuase all along he was the one saying it and he knows the meaning of that statement😉....they are sitting..shaan tries to move away from her but our doll who is on the mission come sits close to him...i think you can imagine it slowly😃...shanak eyelock. For a second shaan forgets that he is angry...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Interesting start from car - for this new beginning. All new phases in their life start with a car drive.

Their first phase when they married unwillingly - drove to mumbai in car
Their second phase when they started becoming friends - drove to mumbai in car
Their third phase when they start to realize that they are not just friends but shanak the inseparable - again let it start with a car drive.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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As continuation of ur scene. Next they go to airport. This is first time khanak is getting on to the flight. The airhostess asks everyone to fasten the belt. Obviously our khanak doesnt know how to do it. Shaan is left with no choice (or lucky chance) and he leans over her to help her fasten the belt.
Next as the flight takes off khanak is little tensed. She immediately holds shaan's palm on the arm-rest. Shaan internally loves it - but externally stares at khanak angrily and sulkingly and tries to widhdraw his hand. But khanak holds his hand tighter as she is tensed. Shaan cools down seeing her tensed and puts his other hand on top of her hand and gently rubs it with his thumb assuring her that she is safe and theres nothing to worry. The very touch calms khanak as she is completely engulfed into the the feeling of his touch - which she for the first time could enjoy without any guilt as she knows that he loves her.
After some time both are normal. Shaan is sitting at the window seat. But khanak is all excited to see the clouds and sky from her seat. This is her first time, and she feels like in heaven. She wants to get a more clear view, she slightly leans forward towards the window. In the process her shoulder rubs over shaan's and her face comes too close to shaan's.
Shaan bechara, this is too much for him. Kitan control kar saktha hain hamara touchy shaan. Khanak is soooo close to him all by herself. He thinks - Mein kya karoon ..mein kyaa karroon. He is happy to see khanak all excited. Yes he is angry with her - but her happiness is all he wants. He just cudnt stop admiring her innocent happiness - her beautiful smile - her luscious lips - Mmmmmm he sighs within himself. He thinks - Stupid Khanak she spoiled everything - how much I planned and organized for proposing her - if she hadnt spoiled it - this trip wud have been really different - it wud have been lovely - romantic -mmm. As he thinks he slowly scans her face - her hair, eyes, soft cheeks, lips, neck and again slowly bak to her hair.
He notices a bunch of her hair falling over her face - blocking his view of her face. Without thinking he immediately brushes her hair back. Khanak is surprised - pleased and she shyfully looks at shaan. Shaan immediately realizes wht he has done in a trance and says "Hato. tume window seat chahiye toh bolo na. Kyun mere upar gir rahi ho' And immediately swaps seats with her. Now its khanak's turn to sulk.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lol i loved the scenes shanakrocks and mahi :) lol mahi the last dialogue was funny! "kyun mera upar gir rahi ho!" 🤣 you can soooo expect shaan to ruin a moment by saying something like that!🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tofeeees

lol i loved the scenes shanakrocks and mahi :) lol mahi the last dialogue was funny! "kyun mera upar gir rahi ho!" 🤣 you can soooo expect shaan to ruin a moment by saying something like that!🤣🤣

Thanks Beeni. Now its ur turn to take thngs fwd. Do key in b4 ur mgr sneaks in. Eager to see hw the romance goes.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ahhh mahi my colleagues are calling me for breakfast! i shall return and do it :) i have no idea how to move forward though lol ...i have a bedroom scene in mind but that can only come if both are staying the night or something... and that will be much later...don't worry it's not xrated lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tofeeees

ahhh mahi my colleagues are calling me for breakfast! i shall return and do it :) i have no idea how to move forward though lol ...i have a bedroom scene in mind but that can only come if both are staying the night or something... and that will be much later...don't worry it's not xrated lol

Beeni looks like you are spending a long time with your BF (breakfast dear😉). Thought I will have a romantic scene frm u as a dessert with my lunch. 😳
So get it going gal when u get time. Wow love to see the bedroom scene - at least wish ur hotel bedroom doesnt have a sofa.
FYI: By the time Shanak reach their destination (frm my scene) its late in the evening, so they can pretty well chk into hotel for ur B/R scene.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lol mahi i came back a while ago but then i had to clean up my room and now i'm going out for lunch! i might be able to write something after i come back...but le me warn you...the hotel room WILL be having a sofa!😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tofeeees

lol mahi i came back a while ago but then i had to clean up my room and now i'm going out for lunch! i might be able to write something after i come back...but le me warn you...the hotel room WILL be having a sofa!😛

Oooopsy! So Beeni, this hotel room will also have a sofa. No problem. Can u atleast get rid of the bed😳Tongue. Kidding.
Hey what happened to others, Shriya, Karishma, Veena, Priya, Amrita, Krishna, May, Ranjini, Sharmida and all others who had already started dreaming of sweet, steamy, smoky scenes - after seeing yesterday precap. Shoot it out dears, after I saw the interesting topic from shanakrocks and also considering the pages and pages of panting i felt from ur posts yesterday in DT, I thought I'll get a bite frm all of u 😍😍😍😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haila u guys r just rocking wid the scenes....i dont have that creativity 2 elaborate a scene like u genius ppl out here but i so love reading ur scenes that they actually play in ma mind all thoughout the day...........i loved the airport scene n the last line of shaan is so him..mere upar kyun gir rahi ho..hahahaha...........omg im so happy fr my shanak atlast they r gonna b happy frever❤️

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