Thought to write down Shaan's proposal dialogues

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Shaan: Main janta tha ke tum zaroor ayogi

I loved his voice😳


Khanak: waiting to know what Shaan wants to tell her, not much change in expressions.



Shaan: Main aj tak intezar karta raha ek ishare ka, yeh samajhne ke liye ki .... tum mere liye kya ho (with a sweet face)

par kabhi ishara mila hi nahi......shayad ishare ki kabhi koi zaroorat hi nahi pari.........ya phir maine ishara samajhne me bohut der kar di......I am sure ke tum bhi isi waqt soch rahi hogi ke main kitna pagal hun



Khanak: still trying to understand what Shaan is telling with a sweet smile on her face😊




Shaan: Hamesha larkharate rehta hun aur (not happy face)......... aur tum mujhe samhal leti ho (with a happy face)



Khanak's expressions: kitna burthal hai yeh,
but she had a sweet smile which indicates she doesn't hate this burthal.




Shaan: par yeh bilkul nahi badalne wala ha....... kyun ki main bilkul nahi badalne wala
(typical Shaan attitude😆)



Khanak smiling, she knows that she likes this burthal😆



Shaan: with a serious tone: "sigh" lekin mujhe pata hai Khanak, ke, ke tum samhal logi

Kyun ki ho hi itni khaas



Khanak her smile is increasing, she is becoming more happy😳



Shaan: I mean......especially Shantanu Khandelwal
( I love the way he tells his name, full of arrogance) ko samhal na koi asaan kam to nahi



Khanak: chaliye, itna to main bhi manti hun........lekin aapko samhaal na itna bhi bura kam nahi hai.................mujhe bhi achcha lagta hai.......kyun ki jab mujhe zaroorat thi tabh aapne meri madat ki hai



Shaan: Main janta hun ke maine tumhe bohut pareshaan kiya.......pehle din jab main tumse mila tha to tum.....tum kitni naraaz thi.......yaad hai tumhe?



Khanak : thinking about the first mithai wala scene (by god the scene was soooooooo cute😛)


Shaan: waai(?)...bilkul nahi bhula...haa..... ke tumne bhi mera bohut mazak uraya.....(cute angry Shaan)😛



Khanak : reminding the camel scene😳.....Aap ho hi itne burthal.....she smiled touching her forehead with her hand😳



Shaan remembers the way Khanak was smiling when he fell down from the camel....


Shaan: tumhari hasi mein.......he touches his heart with his hands....ek.....ek sukun hai😳



Khanak feels shy😳 (for the first time today?)



Shaan: jab tum muskurati ho to aisa lagta hai ke......he is thinking how to express his feelings......aisa lagta hai ke zindagi mein kuchh bhi galat nahi ho sakta.....isi liye main tumhe hamesha......hamesha bohut khush rakhunga.......



Khanak: mujhe khushi rakhne mein bhi apni khudgarzi hai.......sahi kaha apne.......aap khud ko itna hi badal sakte hai.......



Shaan: pata hai, tumhari khushi mere liye bohut zaroori hai......kyun ki main janta hun......mere wajeh se tumne zindagi mein bohut dukh sahe hai.........aur main tumhare dukh ka karan nahi banna chahta (sad Shaan)



Khanak becomes sad as well.


Shaan : Main janta hun ki maine tumhe bohut rulaya...phir....phir bhi tumne hamesha....hamesha...har waqt.....mera saath diya (emotional Shaan)



Khanak: smiling because Shaan praised her but she looked emotional as well, she understands that how Shaan is feeling.....
.(by god Yash is tooo good👏)



Shaan: jo pal tumne chinta karte huye bitayen.........jo pal tumne rote huye bitaye......wo saare pal jab maine tumhe nirash kiya.....aur....tumhara dil toda......I am sorry......"sigh"......wo saare pal....wo sare pal khushiyon mein to nahi badal sakta......par.......par itna kehna chahta hun ke tum.....tum apni muskurahat....muskurate rehna....
(plz somebody notice how good KT's expressions were😳)



Khanak: Blushes, looks down



Shaan: aur is liye main tumse wada karta hun ki.....



Khanak looks at Shaan, she is eager, is she expecting something?
Shaan pauses for a moment (why I am not able to see any expressions in Shaan's eyes? is it KT's acting?)




Shaan: aur is liye main kasam khata hum ki aaj ke bad....aj ke baad main tumhe kabhi nirash nahi karunga.....achche bure har waqt mein main tumhara saath dunga.......ussi tarah jis tarah tumne mera saath diya hai


Khank looks down but she is not blushing this time ( I am fida with Yashu's acting👏)



Shaan: kya tum mere saath ho?



Khanak at first serious, then nods her head thinking "yes...main tumhari patni hun Shantanu, aur tumhara saath de kar main apna patni dharm nibhaya hai.....aur hamesha nibhaungi....



Khanak said "tum" first time after her marriage?😲




Shaan: main kasam khata hun ke hamesha tumhara raksha karunga



Khanak's expressions changing, she is ready to accept Shaan.


Shaan: tumhe pyar, maan aur izzat dunga (Shaan so serious😲 I can't handle it😆)



Khanak: main bhi kasam khati hun ki main apki sari khushiya aur dukho ko batungi.....aur kabhi aisa kaam nahi karungi jisse apke maan samman ko thes pohochhe
(Khanak emotional again)



Shaan: Main aj ke baad tumhe kabhi nahi rulaunga....aur hamesha sa....tumhe kabhi intezar nahi karwaunga...aur.....aur kabhi koi dard nahi dunga



Khanak: tuning back....ab to aapka diya hua har dard mitha lagne laga hai...aur aapke liye intezar karna achcha lagne laga hai...... she is blushing



Shaan: kya tum meri usi ek galti ko maaf karke zindagi ko ek naye sare se shuru kar sakti ho?

wo sari buri yaaden bhulake ek....nayi yaadein, achhi yaadon ka ek sapna bana sakti ho?


Khanak: main to aapko kabh ka maaf kar chuki hun....samajh mein nahi a raha tha ke baat kaise karoo.....purani yaadon ko daflake main bhi age barna chahti hun.......




Shaan: pata hi nahi chala kabh duriya nazdigiya mein badal gayi......kabh zindagi....zindagi zaroorat ban gayi
(awwwww shoooooo sweet)😳



Khanak: Ab aapse dur rehne ki khayal se bhi mujhe dar lagne laga hai....(awwwwwwwwwww best dialogue😳)



Shaan: main bohut sharminda hun ke maine tumhe halat se larne ke liye akela chhor diya....main apne aap mein itna uljha hua tha ke kabhi mein tumhare bhavnao ko samajh hi nahi paya...



Khanak: main to apni gham mein itni uljhi hui thi ke apni bhavnaon ko thik se samajh hi nahi payi...nahi samajh payi ke shayad yahin meri kismat thi....



Shaan: agar tumne mujhe inspire nahi kiya hota to main kabhi apne aapko...tumhare layak samajh nahi pata



Khanak close her eyes in happiness



Shaan: tumhare wajah se aj main tumhare jaisa ban paye....ek achcha beta ban paye....tumse wada karta hun ke ek....ek achcha pati bhi ban paunga.....




Khanak turning back😃 she looked very happy: main bhi aapse wada karti hun ke main bhi ek achchi patni banungi....aur apne ateet ko yaad karke....uske bare mein baat karke aap ko pareshan nahi karungi....



Shaan: zindagi bhar tumhe aisa hi pyar karta rahunga....kyun ki iske alava mere jine ka.. jineka koi maksat hi nahi hai......main tumse bohut pyar karta hun

(I think this time he didn't mention Khanak's name as burthal pehle slip of tounge ki galti ki hai😆, just joking, he should have told Khanak's name here)



Shaan: kab hua....kaise hua....kyun hua...yeh..yeh mujhe bilkul nahi pata...par.... ( I am loving KT's acting here😃)....but this is my life and I really want this......Khanak blushing......Isi liye aaj main tumhe puchhta hun...


Loved the next scene sooooo much😃 Shaan crossing his fingers and Khanak putting her hands on her stomach, pressing them tight and closing her eyes (in tension😳, she is expecting a proposal)



Shaan: Kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi? will you marry me?




Shaan should have asked : kya tum mujhse dubara shaadi karogi? isbar apni marzi se? (😆 copied from recent Dill Mil Gaye episodes😆)



Khanak now brings her hands near her heart, she smiles, blushes and nods her head to say yes.😳




Shaan: agar tumhara jawab ha hai to..... he extends his hand.....


This is it.....rest everyone knows😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow you wrote it beautifully ranjini :) *hugs*
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwww thanks Beeni.🤗.....mujhe pata hai maine zid kiya ta ke tum reply karo🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG this is an Excellent work and thank u so much for writing everything he said down to words to words....wow👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Ranjini....The proposal was so sweet and heart-felt....YashAran portrayed all of ShaNak's emotions brilliantly....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Angel

OMG this is an Excellent work and thank u so much for writing everything he said down to words to words....wow👏



Thanks a lot Pattinson lover😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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while reading all the lines i could c both theyre faces appreaing in ma mind...indeed beautiful lines n uve written them wonderfully ranjini👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You made us recollect one the most beautiful confessions and by god.. how simple and heart warming that was...

Simple... thats what I liked about it... straight from the heart... the little awkwardness of opening up your heart and still feeling right about it... by god KT is a powerhouse of expressions and Yasha matched up... but call me biased... KT just blew me away there! Totally!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

Thanks Ranjini....The proposal was so sweet and heart-felt....YashAran portrayed all of ShaNak's emotions brilliantly....



I loved all the dialogues May and their expressions, KT saying dialogues and Yashu being silent, excellent work👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh dear ranjini thanx a lot dear.Just happened to read it in lunch break.superb yaar.,I really enjoyed all the dialogues and u have done a fantastic job reproducing them.The dialogue writer was too god.,and u so sweet thanx.

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