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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Februaryflower, dear I have only one word for you, thankyou
@Heena, ofcourse when ever I get time I will write, but life is so busy with a hubby, a 2year old kid and a busy job😆
@sshriya84, thankyou again..I look forward to write more😛
@Sareeta, thankyou, thankyou🤗
@jasmeetaprasad, how I wish it could be real, but as far as Shanak relationship at the moment just makes me feel this would be a dream,
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This is just an extended piece of writing regarding the latest promo, sorry to post this so late and I hope this isn't that bad...
Love is in the air
Khanak walked into the kitchen with a huge grin on her face, her cheery mood clearly expresses how happy she was feeling. She too was unaware of the reason behind her happiness, but she knows that there is something different in her. She finds it soothing to be close to Shaan, as he being her true and caring friend among the Kandelwals.
She found it hard to concentrate on the house work as usual. Little did she know that Gopi was witnessing all her movements with a confusion, thinking that there was something wrong about her. When she tried to make a dough using the flour, she remembered how Shaan teased her in the kitchen while she was doing so. How he helped to wipe off the flour from her face. She was so lost in her thoughts and touched her face with the flour, thinking that she was wiping off the flour from her face. Gopi, who was watching this bursted out in laughter and asked her what was wrong. She didn't bother to look at Gopi, but spoke in a soft voice 'ekbar kaha, tou Shaan office Gaye'
Khanak tried to concentrate on her task-learning English. She took the book and started to go through it, but her memory was haunted by Shaan. She walked towards the window and caught the sight of the swimming pool. She covered her face by both her hands thinking how she secretly tried to read near the swimming pool and how she got caught. It was such a sweet time that she thought Shaan as someone else and they both end up in getting wet in the swimming pool at midnight.
She clearly remembered her first lesson with him, how he punished her. He didn't intend to hurt her but he did hurt her and applied medicine on her hand. His touch was as gentle as him and he was so kind to her, helping her to come over the sadness and to make her proud of herself. He helped her to learn so many beautiful things, sometimes calling her 'stupid' stating that it means beautiful, but she thought the word was 'tupid' not 'stupid'. She whispered to herself 'Thankyou, Shantanu aapne mujhe English sikhaya' and walked away from there.
It wasn't the only instance, but there were so many times he made her feel important to him. He atteneded the pooja at home with home, making her feel that he is the other half of her. Without him she is incomplete, and what she is today is only because of him. His trust on her added more credit to the changes happening to her, making her feel that she is the only one he cares about.
Everywhere she looks around she feels that love is in the air. The cold breezes and her surroundings whisper to her, that love is in the air. She didn't know that she is getting carried out in the ocean of true love, may be she is a fool not to know it. She must believe that there is something in his eyes that she sees everytime he is with her. May be she is dreaming thinking that there is something different in the way he calls out her name. May be what she sees and feels is an illusion, but he is somone she must believe in because whenever she reaches out he is there for her. 'kahi ekbar mein pyaar tou nahi ho gaya?' the question came to her ears from far away distance and she replied 'haan' within less than a second and turned and saw Gopi staring at her. She felt embarassed and ran upstairs, missing the third person who was witnessing her confession.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey amrita,
Superb write ups yaar. I am comparatively new to IF and I am browsing thru one thread at a time as there is really a ocean of threads over here with so many active and lively people.
Today i came upon this thread and loved it. I particularly fell in love with the first write-up. It is beautiful poetry in prose - and perfectly suited the scene. It wud have been nice if Mr. Big B lent background voice for the text while the scene was playing.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Third person......awww!!
Really well written Amrita....it made a really good read!!
Looking forward to more....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good inclusion of the promo ...
-Amrita2010 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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These segments I write are based on the precaps and promos, it isn't a prediction but my own interpretation of those trailers...As I left the last past, incomplete I begin with the continuation of it, hope my interpretation isn't too bad
Engagement Teaser
As Khushboo witnessed the Khanak and Gopi conversation, she decided to take an advantage of it by siding with her mother-in-law. Madhvi also decided to soften up a little bit on Khanak as it is the only way to defeat her. Little did Khanak knows their plan, and felt that they have accpeted her as their daughter-in-law.
Shaan kept quiet infront of his mother as Madhvi heard her plan to him, sort of forcing him to get engeged to Natasha in order to let Khanak live in peace. He knew that for Khanak he has to sacrifice his happiness, for her to be happy, as he had promised her that he will do anything to keep her happy. Engagemnet can be done, but they can't get married as long as he is married to Khanak, he thought.
Shaan put his maximum effort and told Khanak about him getting engaged to Natasha, keeping the word he gave to his mom. He knew that Khanak won't feel sad because she always encouraged him to be with Natasha. He wanted to tell Khanak that he doesn't want to it, but to keep her happy he has no choice, wishing that Khanak will make him stop doing it.
Khanak heard it from his mouth and felt that someone held her throat tight enough to kill her, as she gasp for words. She didn't know what to say, other than acting that she is happy for them at least infront of him. She knew she should be happy for him as he is getting back his girl friend, but her heart refused her to do so. She urged to stop him, but couldn't say a single word. 'engagement?' was the only word that came out from her mouth.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great write up Amrita.....!!
Your interpretations of the promos and precaps are really good, and it seems that they can branch off into stories of your own!!
Great imagination hun...and keep up the good work!!!
Edited by FebruaryFlower - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey amrita yhat was fantabulous keeping in l ine with the track shown., please do continue.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautifully written....gr8 piece of work!

PS- my name is Amrita too!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Just read both the write ups dear...loved them as always....lets see what happens in the show...😆

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