AsYa OS: Moving On. (NEW)* (Completed)* - Page 7

Originally posted by: taahir004

Beautiful Indeed

Enjoying both Asad and Zoya , in an arranged marriage

Originally posted by: Asshi...

So please update soonish. Am waiting for this one 😛

Originally posted by: ksen

amazing

loved it

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: life4me

Loved it so much. Continue soon.

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Wow !

It's beautiful.. just like ur username..

Firstly am so sorry for being so so so freaking late !

But I have saved it for last to read it with 'sukoon'

AANIYA YOU ARE HERE!!!!

THANKS!!

MY USER NAME...AHH THANKS AGAIN!!😆

IT IS OKAY!!

I UNDERSTAND!! SO YOU FINALLY READ IT WITH SUKOON!!😛

It was amazing.. spelendid..

Do u know from the first word itself I felt the goosebump..

A feeling in me told me it's gonna be intense..

And so it is !

Over to that.. ur writing & words..

I can see everything happening in front of my eyes..

Read it was like a magical journey..

Thanks!!

Oh my god! That means the beginning was gripping???

Hahah I don't doubt your feelings!!

(GRIN)* All that can I say it THANKS!😃

The way u portrayed them.. it made me fall in over with this two particular characters in this shot..

Though I love Asad a bit more..

Cause that way u described his expression & doings..

I find him cute... HEHE.. strong, tough, but cute.. LOLZ..

Really?? Well I bet you haven't fallen for them the well I fell for RK's character!!😉

Hahahha okay! He is lovable here!😆

That he is! Strong and tough yet cute and adorable!!😊

I was actually trying to portray him bad first but then I went against it! And seems like that was a good decision.

Now... Coming to the update..

Zoya got married to Asad..

And she loved someone else, who she had lost.

Her & her sil bond.. they way they compliment each other.. it's was nice to see..

Okay!!

Yeah she married him.

Yes she loved someone else. My heart was being chopped while I was writing that Zoya is in love with someone else other than Asad.😭😭

I am glad you liked it!

On the other side.. Asad too had a nice scene was humaira...

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I especially love the way Asad & Zoya converse it out..

Asad is UNDERSTANDING & gentle..

He eases out the air between them slowly..

His joke on being a campus ;)

He encouraged Zoya to be open with him..

Zoya tell him of her V-card (which people use to make a big deal)

And the answer Asad gave "as if I am"

Claps-claps...

Thanks girl!!😃

That he is!! Actually if we think rationally a person cannot consummate their marriage at first night itself if it is an arranged marriage. You first need to know your partner and understand them and that was exactly Asad was doing.

Hahahah yeah his jokes!!😆

You know your comment relieved me a bit!! Since I thought I have done some crime making Zoya a non-virgin.

Yeah his answer!! Thanks thanks!😆

Now the kids.. Asad adopted them..

And Zoya guessed it..

I wish to see some cute stuffs with the couple & kids :)

It was something so natural to guess if you think logically rather than emotionally.

Yeah sure!

Santa has noted down your wish!

I will indeed try to fulfill your wish!!😊

The last part.. Asad hugging her & confessing his love..

But Zoya went pale...

She is comfortable with him.. but is she afraid to love again..

Yeah the last part!!

Yes that is the problem. But I don't think that your heart ever follows the order of your brain.

Does it??😆😉

Let's see how she deals with this fear of her.

Loved it..

Fabulous ..

Thanks for pm maina..

I am honestly glad!!

Thanks a lot!

Oh no need to mention the PM thing.

Will await the next.. !

Originally posted by: -IamCrazySeven-

wow it was too good

after longgg time come again here this beautiful os👍🏼

loved it ❤️

update next part asap😎