#2 AsYa FF: 'Mohabbat Zindagi Hai.' *Ch#19 Coming Soon*

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Posted: 7 years ago

#191

nice part dear

thanx for pm :)

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Leone

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Posted: 7 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile

Hey o girl, did you ever notice I've two res for chapter 14??😲
You never asked what are two for??
Ohk, let me tell you this res wasn't for comment for another thing!!😳
Should I unres it with that OR tell you the thing and keep it be like this?!❓ though I m still not sure!!

😳

Unres it!!😃

I will prefer to see it in unres rather than knowing it like that only!😉

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Leone

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Posted: 7 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile

Cause madam, I wanted to post first comment🤗 and it was necessary for me to reserve the first Page😛

Ohk..Maybe I'll love to clear your confusion after 3 months...😛😛❤️

Ooh OK!!😳🤗

No not after 3 months.

Now only!!!

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Aaniya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#194

Amazing update Maina..
from Starting to End.. i loved each bits of it ! Hahaa.. Asad was Hallucinating !!..
his zoe.. aww.. that was so cute..
and hot too..
In his imagination..
zoya Came close to him with sly Smile..
Their Tashion-filled Talk..
asad holding her Close.. and Boom..
see, who is it ? its Ammi Dilshad..
hehee.. Asad's Mind is somewhere else.. lolz..
Zoya.. had Medicine effects..
haahA.. she wants to talk to mr. khan..
but before that She got Dilshad..
and the Scene where Dilshad pointed the knife at zoya in anger is really nice..
then comes Humi.. and Hehehee.. they all teased Zoya..by Saying Asad dont Allow Them to wear jeans.
and asad too join in.. infuriating zoya more..
the Flashback Scene of Zoya & asad was Lovely..
with Asad praising her..
and the last scene..
the Boss..
i like the conversation..
but I guess This calls for tragedy..
overall loved the update Throughly..
and U Have Written it beautifully..
some Points in the update was mindblowing ;)
hehee.. thanks for the res & pm dear Maina.. cont. soon..

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LuvurselF

@LuvurselF

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Posted: 7 years ago

#195

Hii...

unres...

first of all im really sorry for unresing so lately...

coming to update as usual an Amazing one.

one of the most thrilling nd intriguing update till date.

really loved it .

Now Asad want Zoya to be His Zoe.

loved his imagination😳

Asad with Najma nd Humeira played prank on zoya .

Nd she believe nd pissed by his new order.

Helen nd Zoya's convo was really interesting.

who is that HIM? may be Zoya 's real brother?!

why both were shocked?

and also the last two scene's was really confusing.

Who's that person fighting for zoya nd humi?

I saw ur res for next part .so update as soon as possible.

THANKS FOR RES😳😃🤗

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aanchal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#196

Wow! An update best thing I came across today

RES!!!!!

UNRES!!!

Finally here is my story!
I was desperately waiting to read it!
But then let me tell you wait was worth it but please don't make me wait for it so long again!

Now coming to the update
Asad thinking about farooqui's good going Mr.khan
"what if zoya is my zoe" Awww even I hope the same asad but since my writer had given me the spoiler long back anything can happen i just hope at the end of the day they are together!

So asad is imagining zoya Oh My such an intense imagination cool Mr.Khan keep imagining such things more and the cherry on the cake will be if that imagination turn out to be true but I have to wait for it I know (sad sigh*)

Hahaha but dilshad ended up at that time it was hilarious the way he was searching for zoya's presence
Common it's so bad you think so low of yourself zoya helen is right indeed you're a blessing not a pain,

I really hope this misconception you have for yourself is cleared soon

Dilshad and Zoya their bond is as adorable as always something she looks more like zoya's mother than asad's!!! Yaar why is she running with fresh wounds yaar yeh ladki! As i said in my previous review too asad should tie her up to bed so that she takes a proper rest

Now humeira you seriously need to learn how to lie but on a second thought no need it's bad habit to lie especially to your sister but chota mota prank is fine! Thank god najma came to her rescue on correct time or else for the sure she would have ruined their plan hehehe

Like seriously asad how much you are troubling her but that's really too funny to read such a prankster I tell you thank god she didn't kill you for being so judgmental right on her face to it was just a prank hahaha i could imagine zoya's face when he said you couldn't wear jeans

Najma and humeira was having great time just like us seeing their cute fight
Now coming to asad dude you are so much engrossed in zoya that you forgot your friends marriage well since you were busy with zoya so its a good thing
How lets see how asad will make zoya attend the wedding I hope you started writing this

Now coming to that gun vala part oh my it was so hilarious at the same time so romantic looking at asad's pov you wrote that part sooo welll just wonderful
The new entry Zoya's possessive brother wow! Wondering who he would be whoever it is I'm already liking his possessiveness towards Zoya but that gangster was such an 🤬

How can I forget their past AsYa was sooo cute back there specially asad who was such a supportive and bestest friend why he had to forget everything (sad sigh*)

overall Wonderful update as you already know it you nailed this part

enjoyed reading each bit all the imagination was crystal clear for me

fabulous writer you are👏

can't wait for the next part

I guess it would be asad's friend wedding wowowowow

UPDATE SOON

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Leone

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Posted: 7 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: -loving_life-
Wow! An update best thing I came across today
RES!!!!!

Hope you unres soon!!😊

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Leone

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Posted: 7 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thanks!!😊

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: -AngreziKudi-
Awesome update 😃

Thanks dear!!😊

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Leone

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Posted: 7 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: greyanastasia
Wowww its amazing and different story, you are doing superb job👏. I am loving this, please update on regular basis.

Thanks dear!😊

I am glad to know!!

Sorry but I can't update on regular basis!! It is quite tough for me!!😳