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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 8 years ago

#251

Updated on Page# 32!!😉

Enjoy!!

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Akhira

@Princessdream

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Posted: 8 years ago

#252

Loved the update

Thanks for the pm

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#253

Nice update dear
Liked the junior khans antics
Najma Asad scene was good
They met their daadi but didn't know that she was their dadi
Feel sad to read abt Anabiya
Waiting for next update eagerly but waiting for your exams to finish
All the best
Thanks for pm

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Shaila

@raspi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#254

It was fabulous n amazing nd uodate soon n thnxx fr pm

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LuvurselF

@LuvurselF

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Posted: 8 years ago

#255

Awesome update.
Like u said an update filled with various emotions.
Happy ,sad ,heartbreaking...
Ahad is an exact copy of Asad while Aman is so cute in his own way .
Both blessed Asya's life with happiness.
Najma's convo with Asad was also nice .
So Asad asked najma to be with their ammi .bcz he know she'll shatter if she lose her daughter too.
Asad didn't wants to revisit his past by meeting his ammi .
And he's holding back his emotions for his family .the way Zoya support him was nice .
Asya scene was nice nd romantic.
Ahad -dilshad-Aman scene was superb.
Beautifully protrayed .
Ahad remined Her of Asad nd she instantly felt a connection with both kids .
Unknowingly they were healing each other.
And ahad's prediction abt meeting her son soon will also come true .
But not the way they wanted it to be .
Whole Hospital scene was heartbreaking.
The pain of losing their baby ,Asad's helplessness ,Zoya's pain everything described beautifully.
Totally an amazing nd worth await update .
Continue soon
Thanks for pm 🤗

Edited by LuvurselF - 8 years ago

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LuvurselF

@LuvurselF

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Posted: 8 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra
Update is res for Zoya, Asad, Addrita, Natalya Bedi, Kabhi_Asya, Ridhi 95, Jass-, Ayat 20, Prinky, Sasir, Anopama, Mirage, Asifiqbalsh, Nilusoni, Linsie & Mystic River.


Special Res for my special buddies:


Ms. BS, Ms. Alien and Ms. Bhulakkad.

🤗 thanks for this special wala res 🤗

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ayat

@ayat20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#257

Nice part

Very emotional felt bad for Zoya for loosing their baby

N hope Zoya is fine

The last part of the precape was scary

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aanchal

@Loving_life

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Posted: 8 years ago

#258

Res!!

Yay!!! Update!!!!

I'm so happy to see it!

Will unres tonight 😊😃

Unres

Firstly sooo sorry for replying sooo late actually I had read this on on the same day when you updated but was not able to reply as that day I was with some or the other person and nobody knows about my link with writing and reading stories apart from my besties! And then much to my annoyance Internet went down as my idiot brother poured soft drinks on the router now I'm finally in hostel and was able to unres

Now finally coming to this beautiful story

You are seriously a talented writer I mean u made me laugh, cry, all the emotions was over flowing in this update

Asad's hospital discharge scene ahad and aman hahaha god just love them ahad like his father junior protective Ahmed Khan doesn't trust his ammi like his father when it comes to her health and aman clueless at times like his mother I'm not bullakard awww

Aman imitating ahad was soo cute typical siblings thing even my sister used to the same and I used to get angry that why are you copying my actions and she used to reply bekause main apki suster hu na and I would be like Urgghh!

Najma-Asad got so emotional after seeing each other loved their bro-sis moment still he don't want to face his ammi and he did right no point going back to past which will only hurt him and Zoya love and efforts will go in vain and dilshad deserves that for leaving her son for a man who doesn't cared for his family even najma opposed her decision and I loved it

Dilshad overhead najma- Ayan talk and was sad well its too late for her to realize

Felt bad for asad how much he is missing his mother wish dilshad didn't took that decision Zoya was right she should have realised the difference between want and need she herself choosed that hell for her

Their morning romance ☺️ it was really intense loved it do add more of such scenes just romantically beautiful

Loved how she called him asad 😃

Dinning table fight was hilarious asya yeh dono kabhi nahi sudrege and that's a good thing 😆

And that stairs scene god asad what was need of making stairs in your house 😭

since I had read the teaser I knew it was coming I was like Pls don't do this I just kept by mobile away because so can't read this I went to terrace for a while to calm down and then I came back to continue the task as life is not only about mitwa moments felt terribly bad for asya they lost their child please yaar bring back their daughter Zoya was fully broken liked the way how asad was portraying himself to be strong for Zoya though he too was fully broken from inside

Finally dilshad met the cutipies loved that scene it was cute and emotional I so want her to know it's her grandchildren

Precap:

Asad in siddiqui mansion!

Why is he saying Zoya broke her promise what's wrong with Zoya?

Did asad came there to take solace from dilshad after all mother is needed the most in this time

Please I'm getting impatient update soon!!!!!!

Edited by -loving_life- - 8 years ago

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#259

Feeling sad...
N disappointed that just to make asad n dillu one u took anabia from them..may be u will take even zoya too...if dillu is suffering its coz of her own deeds...y always to please the people who cared less about the leads should be give too much attention sympathy n forgiveness.. If its about leads u people make them harsh to each other...but when people like dillu or nazma u want them to be forgiven n accepted... Y...
Its dillus decision..
She choose to separate from her kids..its easy for her...coz she loves rashid that spineless creature more than asad... Yes easy coz rashid is not in dire need of someone to care him or he is deprived of care...its just dillu took it as an opportunity to be with her love n when given grabbed it with both hands leaving the hand of her child who stood by her through thick n thin...
Sorry if u think I judged ...but if u separate asya...then there is nothing I can say...but feeling worse...hope u won't do that just to create a way to mend the broken relationship of asad n dillu...

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 8 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: sasir
Feeling sad...
N disappointed that just to make asad n dillu one u took anabia from them..may be u will take even zoya too...if dillu is suffering its coz of her own deeds...y always to please the people who cared less about the leads should be give too much attention sympathy n forgiveness.. If its about leads u people make them harsh to each other...but when people like dillu or nazma u want them to be forgiven n accepted... Y...
Its dillus decision..
She choose to separate from her kids..its easy for her...coz she loves rashid that spineless creature more than asad... Yes easy coz rashid is not in dire need of someone to care him or he is deprived of care...its just dillu took it as an opportunity to be with her love n when given grabbed it with both hands leaving the hand of her child who stood by her through thick n thin...
Sorry if u think I judged ...but if u separate asya...then there is nothing I can say...but feeling worse...hope u won't do that just to create a way to mend the broken relationship of asad n dillu...

NO i did not made the miscarriage to bring asad and Dilshad close!! Nah! You got it wrong! Zoya is the main character of the story I can't leave her like that. I know Dilshad is suffering because of her own deeds but we can't neglect the fact that she is Asad's mother. N even if Asad wants to as I said he CAN'T forget her or hate her. Najma was forced to stay with Dilshad. But she made Dilshad suffer by expressing her anger and disappointment. You will see that in the future track!!

Do you even know what you are saying? How can it be easy for a mother to be separated from her child? I don't believe it! Isn't it obvious that when you lived your whole life for your kids or anyone a point comes when you want to be yourself. You want to live for yourself not others. And TBH I know Dilshad took a wrong decision by leaving Asad by you can't blame her. She wanted something for herself and who are we to judge? In reality children leave their parents right? Then when a mother can forgive the child then why can't a child forgive his/her mother?? For suppose it is you and you to need to select between your love and children to whom will you select? Sorry if you found any of it rude!!

No need to be Sorry!! I am glad you expressed at least!! The main theme of this SS includes the togetherness of AsYa. So never I am going to break and topsy-turvy their relation.

Edited by Minahil_Hanjra - 8 years ago