#2 AsYaFF ~ The 1st of April [Ch14-36 UndrCons] *Updt 10/1/21FFSection

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#801

Both of them has the same amount of words :/ maybe 100words more or less. :// ^

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959760

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Posted: 7 years ago

#802

aye haye daal mein kuch kala hai 😲 yes finally the long awaited wish fulfilled. Damn if they needed this why not in the first place
haye I love zoya ❤️

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coolphool

@coolphool

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Posted: 7 years ago

#803

Nice update

thanks for the pm

want more asya scenes😃

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 7 years ago

#804

Hello

How r u

😆😃

Finally I managed to read..

And wow super wow...

Super super wow..

Firstly Mr. Veer makes an official entry and with the sweet bhaiyya he seems even sweeter..

Sami ki himmat ko daad deni chahiye... sher ke mooh mein haath dalne ki himmat sab mein nahi hoti..

The start was very well written..

The suspense created was wonderful..

And Zoya😆 a mere spectator...

What was with this sudden lovey dovey Asad and all sweetie...

Well honestly I liked reading the second part much much more..

Mza aa Gaya

U know ankie u r getting better and better with the thriller and suspense genre...

All that James Bond kind of hide n seek...

I wish Asad ko hum live dekh sakte...

All this reminded me of Asya and the mission Raghu days... and in thi tension also zoya telling him to cut the hair😆

I love your Asad and Zoya..

And of course I would have appreciated it more if the last line was elaborated in detail...😉😆

The HOW and WHEN part😆

Ok coming to bloopers ...

I would just pass this phone ko bhoolna as a creative liberty...

Coz I don't think your justification is correct..

Maybe yes she forgot about hiding the phone part...

But I would take it as that she forgot the whole incident or nobody really talked to her about it...

And since they were trying to help her remember things she suddenly remembers about her hiding the phone..

For me this would be more logical...

If u want I can explain you in detail somewhere else😉

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Hello
Hi

How r u

😆😃

Finally I managed to read..

And wow super wow...
Super super wow..

Firstly Mr. Veer makes an official entry and with the sweet bhaiyya he seems even sweeter..

Sami ki himmat ko daad deni chahiye... sher ke mooh mein haath dalne ki himmat sab mein nahi hoti..

The start was very well written..
The suspense created was wonderful..

And Zoya😆 a mere spectator...

What was with this sudden lovey dovey Asad and all sweetie...

Well honestly I liked reading the second part much much more..
Mza aa Gaya

U know ankie u r getting better and better with the thriller and suspense genre...

All that James Bond kind of hide n seek...
I wish Asad ko hum live dekh sakte...

All this reminded me of Asya and the mission Raghu days... and in thi tension also zoya telling him to cut the hair😆

I love your Asad and Zoya..

And of course I would have appreciated it more if the last line was elaborated in detail...😉😆

The HOW and WHEN part😆

Ok coming to bloopers ...
I would just pass this phone ko bhoolna as a creative liberty...

Coz I don't think your justification is correct..

Maybe yes she forgot about hiding the phone part...
But I would take it as that she forgot the whole incident or nobody really talked to her about it...
And since they were trying to help her remember things she suddenly remembers about her hiding the phone..

For me this would be more logical...

If u want I can explain you in detail somewhere else😉

I will come back to you with HOW AND WHY 😆☺️ and ETC later on and will address the blooper part now. 😆

Frankly you are very right about the phone part and The idea you gave is very logical and more appropriate. when I was doing some research for PTSD symptoms and how it affects, I came to know that there were few symptoms which triggered immediate memory loss of ownership or skills too ,along with selective memory loss. Like in extreme cases, sometimes the paitent forgets that he/she has a child. Or someone who drove everyday to work suddenly forgot how to drive (movie reference if you have seen --- Ta Ra Rum Pum) That gave me the idea for Zoya forgetting her phone as it will be later told (spoiler anyway) how much she was attached to it and her laptop. Also you might find, there is no scene yet till now mentioned in the story which happens infront of Zoya where a Phone is mentioned or even involved. 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#806

PS. I think you mean to say you will explain me in details the HOW AND WHEN PART isn't it ;) @teh

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#807

Loved the updates

Finally zoya got her phone back.

Waiting for the next parr now

Continue soon

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#808

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
PS. I think you mean to say you will explain me in details the HOW AND WHEN PART isn't it ;) @teh

Oh no no no my little behna

I meant u will explain the last line of the update with the how and when part in detail😃😆😉

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Oh no no no my little behna

I meant u will explain the last line of the update with the how and when part in detail😃😆😉

Cheating it is 😆