|| REASONS || An Asya (KaBhi) TS last part on pg 21 - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
Res 4 now...
Read it but bit sleepy...will unres soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb...a story I enjoyed reading in d forum after a long time... waiting for dessert...plz pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update Deepti
so asad also fell in love the same moment as zoya
he was waiting for her to confess her feeling so that he can his
but both are not ready to give up easily
finally zoya confessed her love and asad's mission accomplished
now waiting how will he make up with angry zoya
loved the update
dinner mil gaya ab desert bhi chayie
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Res..

Unres
Awesome update
So Asad distanced himself after realising his changing feelings towards her
And then he realised her desire too n started in his mission
Anyway Zoya could never stop herself from irritating him..
Zoya is getting frustrated with his attitude..as this not their usual childish banter..
And
Not only Zoya but whole Khan family want to know reasons

Then the worried Zoya rushed to his home n questioned him..
Finally she confessed n Asad's mission accomplished..
Now its Asad's chance..
She is really mad right now..full on lioness mode..

Ab kal tak dessert kelie wait karna padega..😳


Arpita 🤗😊
finally you made me serve the dinner before time and m happy that you relished it 😊
hehe...yes everyone wants to know the reason
will come with your dessert soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shonayaa

Loved the plot, emotional and heart warming

Flawlessly written 👏


Thank you so much Shonaya 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Love it

Haha so the L word was their for both
But ego is a big thing both wanted the other to speak first
So asad started having the same feelings for zoya around thw same time
He couldnt see her tears
But he realizes what it was only after she left
So the irritation was he wanted her to tell how she feels
And she wanted to know same
Finally asad gor what he wanted the grand confession
All the Y is becuz I LOVE U
Wow she confess in front of entire family
Aww asad mission complete
Now run after her and fill her life with happiness
Cont


Thanks a lot Anopama
yes...L word was their for both...
I am happy that you enjoyed...😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anuv6

WOW, beautiful pov of asad...LUVD it
so Mr.khan luvs zoya nd he just testifyd the reason of zoya...
AAh, i thnk he is in big trouble nw...he makes zoya cry unwantedly,bt still i want him to atleast spill a tear fr her... i knw i'm crazy. bt asad is too cute when he cries ;)
i wished asad's pov on the last update, u made that so much better...very beautifully written.
like u startd the update with a beautiful line,"reasons i found out everyday bt not for rejecting u jhalli", and lukng her via the window secretly...cho chweet.
nd lil lil moments like when zoya said that bad me jao, i imagined the face of asad "bad me jau", nd many more asad's mind convers...funny bt cute too.
finally zoya confessed nd i luvd the way that u made asad to push zoya to confess, like so spontaneous nd so beautiful nd yess, the emotions are very beautifully described.
nd asad miya, zoya is in anger , nd he is thnkng his mission is accomplished without realizing the coming hurricane,. poor he ;) bt trust me i'm so very lukng fwd to knw that.
and the final najma-ayaan cov ...funny.
honestly, i LUVD the whole update,.
cant even wait fr the nxt part bt hav to na,...
waiting sooo sooo eager fr the nxt update



Thank you so much dear for such a lovely comment
it's made my day...😊
hehe...actually me too enjoyed writing that part 'bhaar me jau' and other Asad's covo's and happy to know that you enjoyed Asad here...yes...he is chooo chweettt...but I can't make him cry here...will try some other time...😆
I hope you'll enjoy dessert too...
will continue soon 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Loved it..
Poor zoya...


Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu

Res 4 now...

Read it but bit sleepy...will unres soon...


Binuuu...I want your review
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aashiqua

Superb...a story I enjoyed reading in d forum after a long time... waiting for dessert...plz pm me


Thank you so much dear
I am happy that you enjoyed 😊
will continue soon and yes will pm you

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