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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Firstly, welcome back to the forum

Was really missing the updates of your stories

Coming to the update, it was awesome

Asad irritated by zoya's antics but also quite impressed with her talent

And the last part, so zoya has already realized her feelings and is trying to make asad understand

Looking forward to know what happens next in the story

Please try to continue soon

Thanks for the pm😊

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Nice to have u back

But chap 1 and chap 2 doesnt match

It is from 2 different stories

Sorry to say

1 is originally yours

But 2 is from another asya story

Tht is y readers say it is familiar

Cant remember the name but l will research and let u know

Bcuz udont want ur story to shut down for plagiarism

The other story is where asya parents wanted them to marry

their nikaah or something before

Asad loves zoya from before he return from abroad to join business

But zoya always played and ignore his feelings and he was always their to prtect her

Until she request him tobw away from her

But The 2 chaps together for ur story make no sense

Doesnt fit dont mean tobe rude

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Welcome back madam..

Nice part this is..

Continue soon and hope Assad understands wuickly

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Welcome back to the world of writings..

Nice part azu...

Loved their cute little fight..

Zoya is well aware about her feelings and hope asad will realise his feelings so soon...

Update soon and don't make this thread to close ;)

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice to have u back
But chap 1 and chap 2 doesnt match
It is from 2 different stories
Sorry to say
1 is originally yours
But 2 is from another asya story
Tht is y readers say it is familiar
Cant remember the name but l will research and let u know
Bcuz udont want ur story to shut down for plagiarism
The other story is where asya parents wanted them to marry
their nikaah or something before
Asad loves zoya from before he return from abroad to join business
But zoya always played and ignore his feelings and he was always their to prtect her
Until she request him tobw away from her
But The 2 chaps together for ur story make no sense
Doesnt fit dont mean tobe rude