AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls # 2 ~ Ch 28(Final) Updated on Pg. 71 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Have been a silent reader till now but all your beautiful stories have made me write a comment. I love all your stories. Just saw your index only to find that I've already read all your stories. I've gotten used to your daily updates and absolutely love you for updating the parts so quickly. This story is still ongoing and I've already started anticipating your next story! Don't ever stop writing on asya. I may not be a regular reader to comment but I love your writings and want you to continue your lovely work. My longest comment ever :D chalo ab jaldi se aaj ka update dedo ta kh mein so jaun jaldi!
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Z.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Awesome update
Finally asad confessed to himself after seeing her with others. Rehan & Samar were good friends & his words to ease him with this was wonderful. He was ready for relationship & commitment. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Atlast he accepted his possessiveness for zoya
She's all his now yayy..
It was beautiful and the girls whiskey was the best
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
beautiful chapter and I must say finally like Rehaan. It was the most exptected chapter of the story I must say.

it has everything, it was funny, romantic, intense and sad in the same time. The beginning where Zoya was triying to convince to think about and when she then kissed him in the corner of his lips it was sooo *sigh*. I felt for Asad for a change refusing to himself this happiness because he was scared to be all alone after opening his heart.

And again, she did as he wants, go to this party, played and laughed with those men that he brought for her and then it came. I must applause to Rehan in this, he forced him to admit it.

"she is mine" what a beautiful declaration of love, "she is mine" in one sentence, it explain everything.

And when she started to cry, OMG, my eyes moistened. It was so heart touching that she got him, he came to her, accepting her conditions, ready to do what he never dare to do just for her, to have her and maybe allowed him to dream about a better future...With her.

However, I had some bitter taste, when he said : I won't lie to you and I expected the same (or something like that). I don't know why I feel something is about to come between them: a lie?

Did she lie to him about her accident? And she knows who it was or is it something else? Or was he going to lie to her? You said that it still some chapters so I guess the story will not finish so soon and it will happen many things before they will live happily after.

I don't know how he will react when he will know that she manipulated him with Armaan or he will not care 😃.

Awesome chapter and will wait for the next, hope everything will be well, at least we are going to enjoy their new couple.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
YES
Finally
Now was that so hard Asad

I loved it
It was like Speed dating
Lol
Sameer Malhotra
🤣
Finally Asad
😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

Congrats on new thread...😊



Thanks:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

RES

Congratulations Pia.🤗

UNRES

Read the last two parts together. Was a little busy at home.
The whiskey girls part was too damn funny. And Armaan, The Cupid.😳Her texting Asad and him tracing her kinda reminded me of similar scene from Fifty Shades of Grey.😆
Rehaan will get his happily ever after with Khusi.😃yes?

Asad's Man hunt finally came to an end. And the last part was Awww.😳😳
He indirectly but finally agreed to be exclusive with Zoya. SHOUTOUT!!!!

Next part sweetness. Soonish!



Glad u liked both the chapters
Rehaan will get his happiness with Khushi but not in this book. But the book after.
Yup at last he committed to her...an aage kya 😉
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: mayurisb80

Congrads on the new thread...so Asad has taken the leap...but what does it really mean for them ...is happiness that easy i doubt...i wonder if there are more trials in store for them...



Ha ha what do you think?
will happily ever after come that easy ???
Next chapter should answer your question:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: laks_vish

Wow finally...what an update Pia...sorry could not comment but let me tell you this story is a daily dose to get me going...now that he is committed what is next?



Awww thanks for this lovely comment
I am so glad to know you enjoy reading my story

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