AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128

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crazedfan19

@crazedfan19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#861

woohooo I absolutely loved this update!!! the bond between Zoya and her girl hang is so nice to see. Zoya now has some friends she can share things with. and loving the idea of teasing both rehaan and asad, brilliant!!!! 👏 cannot wait until the next part!! thanks for them PM!

Aisha

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ksen

@ksen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#862

amazing part

loved it

girls bonding is good

hope kushi's plan doesn't backfire

enjoyed rehaan and asad scenes

jealous asad and rehaan was a treat to read

eagerly waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#863

Super update pai
One week they didn't see each other 😲
Girls talking is so funny 😆
Asad and Rehan are so jealous 😆
Continue soon 😊

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#864

Two dangerous man in love...that's very dangerous
Armaan is so dead

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Aashka

@Chillichick

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Posted: 9 years ago

#865

Poor armaan...

He is so dead meat... but it was khushi texting right?

My zoya is too madly in love with asad to even type such stuff

Asad better start owning up and be a man...

Love the girly gang and felt nice to see them defending zoya

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#866

part 16

wow A relaxing part finally😛

lol this time Asad broke into Zoya's RV tit 4 tat

awe he cooked 4 her I remember this service was 4 his girls d nxt morning😆

Asya's cute nok jhok was fun & he told he set up a date

& Zoya called her brand new Girlfrnds 4 help

I love Khushi & Anjali they r funny while Priya is serious type

Asad was swooning at Zoya hehe but she's forbidden fruit

SO Rehan already phones Arman 2 stay away lol smart guy I might have liked him & Zoe😉

Khair Zoya's plan still flopped cuz Asad was happy wid d staff 😆

but in d end he was all ready 2 forget everything but Zoya told d truth stopping him

It was funny how he explained I was protecting u from Arman so he wont kiss u a goodbye 😆

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#867

part 17

Oh wow this 1 was cool too

I realised since Asya's banter is decreasing I loved this gang of girls😆

Khushi came wid her evil idea 2 torture Asad😆

& oh man I loved when d girls defended Zoya she must b overwhelmed

& Rehaan d devil was all in mood 2 torture Asad & I cracked when Asad ruined his shirt saying this is dirty wear that 1🤣

But what confused me is Rehan's reaction on Khushi's text u said he doen't feel 4 her or they wouldn't end up 2gather than use kyun mirchi lagi😕

Hey Pia hope u r fine😊

where were u d other day? Flu again?

I know I missed 1 day but that's allowed right even u missed an updt d previous day😉

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#868

Oh god armaan is just gone now.. asad is gonna rip him apart.. hope asad gets a glimpse of his real feelings for zoya..
Awesome update. .:)
Excited for the next update. .:)

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#869

Originally posted by: mayurisb80
i was waiting for you to update been stalking since long...now that was too good of an update and u did have to end in with the cherry inneundo...classic...

Ha ha ha glad u liked this chapter
End line was hilarious 😆
Will update on time :)

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#870

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
No u can't end there
Amazing update as usual
And really waiting for the next one
To know what asad does with armaan
Please continue soon😊

Awww thanks Muskaan
I am so happy that you liked it so much :)