AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 31

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

What Scars Piaa...?
Shayad mujhse kuch miss hoogaya...hai



She has scars on her body Mayur...I have mentioned in earlier chapters...she touches her torso out of habit...that's when she's touching her scars. This terrible incident changed her 😭
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kobeb

Awesome update pls continue soon!! :)



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

Awesome man I'm loving it more n more
He took such a good care of her even.offered her a.job
Rehan likes khushi good I specially loved d last part plz.continue soon



Thank you
Glad u liked it 😃
Last part was really funny
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Thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Superb...

Just loving loving loving Asad here...
He has done his complete Homework on Zoya farooqui...

Well Zoya dint bother to ask him as to why he is doing all this?
I can so imagine Zoya gobbling up the food and how pretty she must have looked in asad's half cut shorts...

And last part between Asya and Rehaan was fun...



So glad you liked this chapter Tehs 😃
Asad is a sweetheart in this story...I am sure there will be moment whe you'll feel like giving him a slap but mostly he'll be a real sweetheart 😳

Poor Zoe finally got some food to eat 😭

Asad can't keep his eyes off her. He is 'lattu' over her 😳

Last part was funny but wait till you read the rest in the next chapter. You'll get a good laugh 😆

Will update soon...much sooner than My usual time because tonight I am going out for thanksgiving dinner 😊 will try to update before leaving :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Lovely Part Pia...
Glad that now the time will change for Zoya in a good way ofcourse...
The breakfast scene was good...hahahaha she must have eaten to her heart..
Asad likes Zoya but don't want to go ahead...Zoya likes Asad but she don't even want to pursue him...and she is trying Rehan...who likes Khushi...hahahahaha..
Confusion hai Bhai...confusion hai..
Very good part...enjoyed reading it..
Continue soon.



Ha ha I like the way you have described everyon's feeling --- confusion hi confusion hai solution ka kuch pata nahin 😆

Finally Zoya got food to eat. Asad hired her for the job she really wanted...now she'll have her own place to live 😊 Did I tell you how much I live Asad in this story? He is a real sweetheart 😳

I am really happy to know you are also liking this story 😃
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

yaa everything is alright just busy my nieces😳

howz u?



I am fine, thank you 😊
I was also busy in between with my mid terms.
Now...looking forward to winter holidays 😃
How's weather at your end? Must be very cold...right?
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Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: blueberry02

Asad took her 2 his house nd gave a job too...
I m very happy 4 zoya
finally some1 is taking care of her
i m sure she works hard 4m now on
nd a gr8 update 4m u
loved it
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Thank you for this lovely comment
I am so glad u liked it
Yes, Zoya will work hard 😊

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