AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 25

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

I feel bad for Zoya

I wanna know her past
😭🤔



Awww don't be sad
She suffered from her dad and took it out on other people
She has paid heavily for what she did
And one incident changed her...she became a new person
It has to do with the scars on her body I keep mentioning 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Very Good part Piaa...
I don't know what to say...See A person Poor & Helpless & Starving to this level...i have not read anywhere in this forum...Zoya i just want the best for her now...
Well Asad the Brooding guy just did a right thing by following her...and he got to know a little more about her...
Zoya thinking about Rehaan was funny...but in a way she was just counting ways to ignore Asad and how he can be replaced by somebody else...and reasons which could back her theory...hahaha...
I feel some Jealousy is also waiting for Asad now...hahahaha.
Continue soon.



Thanks Mayur
So glad you liked this chapter 😃
It is really sad to see Zoya's living condition
Thank god Asad found out the truth
He'll help her 😊
Zoya thinking about Rehaan and Asad finding out about her plans will be so hilarious 😆
Oh boy he'll be sooo jealous 😉
And Jealous Asad is a treat 😳
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am waiting to see her life change drastically!
God it was so so damn good!
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Avie

Pia, I just cannot express how much I love this story..😳

It is just AWESOME!👏

Zoya has a really bad image in front of the town people.. People were so rude to her..
But they are like that because once upon a time she was the same..😕

She is in so much trouble herself but still tries to help others..
Hope they see that she has indeed changed for good..

Once living in luxury, she now cannot even have a decent meal or a home of her own..😭
She is starving herself to death..😭Whatever she has done in the past, people should atleast help her.. No one should live like that however bad they have been..

Judging by the look on Akram's face, I realised it was Asad following her..
Finally he got to know about her living.. And he is determined to change that..😳

Beautiful story.. And can't wait for the next part..
Write soon..

PS: Unress on pg.26




Thanks for this amazing comment dear:)
I am so happy to know that you are liking this story as it is really a wonderful story 😃
Feel really bad to see Zoya's condition :(
Thanks god Asad found out everything
Will update the next part soon :)
He is right no matter what she did in the past...she doesn't deserve to live like this 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

Loved the update
I feel so bad for zoya she's living in such a miserable state now that asad knows he's going to help her
Continue soon can't wait to read next chapter



Thank you
So glad u liked it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: blueberry02

Sipmly superb...
loved it
da way u described zoe's situation is really amazing
i was crying reading her part
hope asad changes her life nd i really want him 2 beat dat akram...
Lets c how asad vil succeed in his mission
cont soon
thanq



Thank you 😊
So glad U liked it
Asad will surely help her 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Zoya had a bad past.. she is trying to overcome that and become a better person.. but first image lasts for a great amount of time..! She is literally surviving hardly..
Asad is so concerned about zoya.. I'm excited to read how will he change her life..
awesome update. . :)



You are right poor Zoe is trying so hard but no one is ready to give her a chance
At least Asad found out her living conditions and will help her come out of this :)
Glad u liked this chapter 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Oh this story has 26 chapters and we are only on the 4th chapter right now
So long way to go
Asad if falling hard for her...Zoya likes him too 😳
Let's see how and when they'll admit 😃
Glad to know this chapter brought a smile on your face 😃


Oh wow that's nice then..
I like a little longer stories..😉

And I also see that your readers are increasing day by day..
N I'm happy for that congratulations..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: menamus

Beautiful. ❤️

I can't wait to read more.😛



Thank you 😊

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