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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Thanks a lot Binu😊
Ohh...I will dear...but after this one...
updated the first part😊

my pleasure dear...😃
actually when I posted this comment,saw ur res post...
so I got position in first page this time :)
okay..

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Nice
Loved it..
Zoya...raw...
Hard to digest..but very interesting

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Nice update
Zoya reached airport late & asad was hell angry as he got to know abt change of plans. She will have a tough time with him. Ahhh. OCD asad, one more thing which Zoya has to bear. Curious to know abt asad identity. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Sounds really interesting. ...cont soon😊

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Awesome tweetie
ths was such a gud read
wow ! The launguage and expressio in ur writing has deeply changed for gud 👏
specially when u described that whole scene where asad is leaning and zoya wondering if shehnaz was right 😳 that scene u nailed it keeping it sobre at the same tym
m loving asad yar mr. Arrogant follows what ms. Unbelievable tells him 🤣
and that mobile scene omg 🤣 entertaining and again well written
famous kaha tha to mai soch ri thi he might be actor bt RAW is providing security to him so i thnk there's more to him
aur guess ni horaha mujhse ab
bs try updating soon
would thr be any other plans by bhau as ths tym they failed
i hope nt
pls update soon

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Awesome update..
So Zoya is Asad's security in charge..
Excited to read more...

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Interesting part Deepti..
Asad seems to be soo soo irritated by India and also with his Security...hahahaha..
Glad Zoya is not totally a BODYGUARD type security...Hahahahha..
Liked reading it..
Continue soon.

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Bck frm hunt...bt i think mujhe ek aur chapter padhna padega so don't keep these now
1. The unexpected heaven
2. My unbelievable job 3. Spying the love folds
4. Mystery behind mr. Arrogant
5. The strange case of mr. Khan
6. Insecure with security
7. Plan the unplanned stations
8. Resisting charm to protect love
find something of use tweetie?
i knw unsuccessful hunt
update one more chapter then i might come up with more
and story tujhe pta hena to maybe u could relate above titles
let me knw

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Nice start

So Zoya is a RAW agent

So she is in charge of AAK protection

Aww can't wait to see this Zoya protecting Asad

His irration his impatience his OCD All is acting up

No hotel wonder if he is going to her house

Or a safe house

Aww she admire him but he is so arrogant

Wonder who he is he don't live in India so he can't be some political person

So maybe a celebratity or maybe royalty

Waiting to see and what is the name of the story

Continue

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: binuuu
nice part Deepthi..
waiting to know asad's identity...
it was very fun to see zoya ordering to asad🤣
poor man he had to do what zoya said...
😆
haha..asad's OCD,no words to say about it..
it will be very interesting zoya as asad's security...
continue soon..

Thanks a lot Binu for a lovely comment 😊

Asad's identity...wait for some time...

I also enjoyed writing that part...Zoya ordering to Asad 😆