Ek Junooni Aashiq! Aahil OS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's long writing something. I'm sorry for making almost 2 months wait for my work. Just lost the inspiration. But, I promise them to be updated by 19th October. I'm busy with exams now. Sorry Again.

Aahil, this is a Sanam's Aahil's Os. Now, I'm warning you, you may cry. It his death scene I penned down. I don't know how I wrote it, I cried myself. It's not that long. Anyway, here is it. Hope you people like it. Thanks for reading!

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Aahil...Ek Junooni Aashiq!



No! His heart screamt, his Sanam couldn't just go away, she just couldn't. An unknown fear of reality started creeping in slowly. The more he realized she was gone, the more he couldn't believe it. Tears feared to come out, they weren't ready to acknowledge her going away. Rains got heavier, his breathes got heavier as he still looked hopelessly hopeful down there where she just she just...fell leaving him all lone. He would break down...or did he just break down. No, a little whisper said in him, she was alive...waiting for him to come and save her, to live with her, to laugh with her, to breathe with her.

And he felt a sudden push and he fell from the cliff. He didn't know anything as he was falling. All those memories came back that lived in his heart forever, the eyes that always beheld him, arrested him, the days which were the only days he was close to...himself, because that him loved her. He loved her, not because she was beautiful, not because she loved him, not because she was the best, but because...he just loved her. Nothing else mattered, if she loved him, if she remembered him, if she was going to live with him, if she was his.

All that mattered today was he loved her, that she was in his heart. She was the purest thing ever, her love was the purest unstained thing. Her remembering him was nothing to him, because he knew none of those could wipe away the true love in him. Nothing could erase what he felt by his love, Sanam. His Sanam was in his heart, none could erase that truth. His Sanam always remembered him, the Sanam in his heart. He was going to love her even after his last breath. Aahil would always mean Sanam's Aahil. No one can remove Sanam from Aahil, because without her he is nothing. His love, Sanam is everything.

The fiery love burned in hatred, jealousy, pain, hope, hopelessness, craving, happiness. But, it was always there and will be. Aahil was for her. His beloved is, was and will be his. He breathed his last as he said...
'I love you, Sanam!'

And he was no more. He came into this Earth alone, lived alone, went alone. But, his heart had everything, everyone residing there. Pure, unstained love. He went away alone but carrying Sanam along with him in his heart. Aahil Raza Ibrahim- Ek Junooni Aashiq!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm crying.. Especially at those last few words.. "He came into this world alone, lived alone, went alone."
That part just brought out the tears.. 😭 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful piece of writing
Loved reading it
And u actually made me cry😭
Especially the last part...
Please write more
Your writings are seriously a treat to read😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i m crying...its jst paining to remebr those moment...
The fiery love burned in hatred, jealousy, pain, hope, hopelessness, craving, happiness. But, it was always there and will be. Aahil was for her. His beloved is, was and will be his. He breathed his last as he said...
'I love you, Sanam!'
he didnt even get the chance to knw tht he got bk his sanam..'sanam'-his love,his life,his passion...everything..
He came into this Earth alone, lived alone, went alone. But, his heart had everything, everyone residing there. Pure, unstained love. He went away alone but carrying Sanam along with him in his heart.
yes..his love for his sanam always thr in his heart..whole life he geot so much pain,live a fake life,bt with sanam he got everythng & whn he died he knew he was taking his sanam's love in his heart
❤️🥺😭

a big 🤗to u..a beautiful OS...love u AHIL RAZA IBRAHIM-A TRUE SOUL...❤️❤️
Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeh Kya Tha? 😲😭 Rula Diya Mujhe 😭 AAHIL! 😭😭😭
Especially the last part!!!!!!! 😭 Ahhh 😭
HEARTBREAKING 🥺
Such a painful OS yet so beautiful and touchy! Keep Rocking! 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
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rashmi,i share ur story in twitter obviously with ur name..its written beautifully.hope u dnt mind😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

rashmi,i share ur story in twitter obviously with ur name..its written beautifully.hope u dnt mind😊


No problem, only my full name shouldn't be out. Varna if my school sir will see I'll be packed. Thank you so much to share! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dil-E-Pagalpan


No problem, only my full name shouldn't be out. Varna if my school sir will see I'll be packed. Thank you so much to share! 🤗

i only wrote my one of IF frnd rashmi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

i only wrote my one of IF frnd rashmi


Okay. Thanks re again! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dil-E-Pagalpan


Okay. Thanks re again! :)

dnt need to thanks..🤗i jst cnt stop myslf 2 share it..this was so beautiful..👏

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