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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys🤗...my name is sumi(sonu).some of u knw me.i m a big fan of ASYA & SAHIL.i love to read their stories.in this forum we hv amaizing writers.i m only reder.but now i decide to write something on ASYA.b4 ths i wrote a sahil os & TS.but ths is the 1st time i m writing on asya.i m very lazy & a student,so bear with me.i will continu ths story only if u guys like it bcz i m not gd in writing & i dnt wnt to spoil the asya aura with my bad writing.i admit tht this plot is inspired from anothr show,bt i promise tht i change the charector scetchs & storyline & gv it my own twist.hope u guys like it.
i cudnt understnd wht shud be the title.so suggest me some TITLE & give ur precious feed back.all type critisism r welcome...

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prologue-below.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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prologue-

Asad Ahmad Khan,son of Dilshad & Rashid Ahmad Khan,is a succesful rich businessman of architechture.after his father's death he manage their business alone.he is very sweet,caring,passonate yet humble of course a good human being.he believs on allah and loves his family very much.najma & ayan ahmad khan r his siblings.he guide thm,love thm also spoil thm.

Zoya Faroogui,daughter of rich businessman anwar & zeenat farooqui.she is a student of fine arts.she loves painting.she is only child of thm,so she is very much pamperd,always centre of attraction.she never come across through religious brightness & divinity.zeenat brought her up according to worldly life.

Rayan siddiqui,son of businessman Gaffur & Razia siddaqui.he is selfish,arrogant,full of attitude & spoilt brat.whn he was in 7th standerd,his parents noticed he was going through a wrong way bcz of bad influence.so Rayan was sent to hostel.but ths turn him more arrogant,no emotion at all.he has a sweet,caring sister humaira.Gaffur,Razia,Humaira r very annoyed & worried bcz of Rayan's behaviour.

Asad,Zoya & Rayan r childhood friends & neighbours.their parents also very fond of each other,just like family friends.after rayan was sent to hostel,asya grew more fond with each other & became best friends.asad love zoya from chidhood.after completing college,asad proposes zoya but zoya rejects him saying she doesnt feel thtway for asad & he is only her best friend.asad dsnt hold it against zoya & stayes as best friends bt in heart he still loves zoya.zoya makes scetches of human faces & oneday she makes the scetch of her dream man and falles head over heels in love when she finds the breathing manifestation of it in Rayan when he come back from hostel after completing his MBA.but the more zoya tries to get close to Rayan,the more he ignores.asad warn zoya about rayan,bt zoya dsnt care.asad & rayan dsnt fond of each othr.asad is not bcz he knws abt rayan's behavior & rayan is not bcz from childhood everyone prefer asad over rayan.despite of anwar's reservations,zoya finally marries with rayan.everything was going good but destiny decides doom for zoya when rayan falls in love with an uneducated an crass employee tanveer at his factory with whom he begins an EMA relationship.zoya meets tanveer to confront her but seeing her unattractive physical appearance & crassness,she goes in a state of shock & suffers from heartbreak.for the first time in life she looks at her tragedy from a different perspective.she comes across bitter reality & learns the true purpose of life.in this journey asad is with every step of her.with asad,zoya adapts simplicity,patience & humbleness.she understands the difference between asad and rayan & regreats her discion to choose rayan over asad.with following circumstences asya decide to give themselves a second chance with each other.but again rayan enter her life after tanvir leaves him.now,whom zoya choose??asad or rayan

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well the prologue seems interesting
Looking forward to the story
Please continue soon
Can u tell me from which show is the story inspired from?
Will be eagerly waiting for the updates😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Is it inspired from Shehr-e-zaat? :)
I simply loved it and I would love to read its Asya version by you. But I hope you won't make Zoya forgive Rayan just like Falak did. :)

Continue soon dear...waiting eagerly :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And don't worry...you haven't downright copied it...its fine to be inspired by someone or something :)
I would request you to please go ahead and post it :) I'm sure you'll have your own twists n turns :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Annie_

Is it inspired from Shehr-e-zaat? :)

I simply loved it and I would love to read its Asya version by you. But I hope you won't make Zoya forgive Rayan just like Falak did. :)

Continue soon dear...waiting eagerly :)


oops!you caught me.yes,asya version of sheher e zaat.&i m nt tht mahan lk falak,she forgv salman & didnt cr 4 hamza.&4m tht place i chnge the plot.it will b asya happy ending,nt lk the shw.
Suggest me a title.i dnt wnt to name it sheher e zaat as i chng the plot smway.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey sonu
First your name sumi
But my pet name sumi here
What a co incident
Nice start
You can write inspired by any story or movie
Nice concept
But please pm next part
We will read your story
Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i think its inspired from shahre zaat..
But hopefully zoya will end up wid asad not rayan..
Coz i was so disappointed with falak..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408


oops!you caught me.yes,asya version of sheher e zaat.&i m nt tht mahan lk falak,she forgv salman & didnt cr 4 hamza.&4m tht place i chnge the plot.it will b asya happy ending,nt lk the shw.
Suggest me a title.i dnt wnt to name it sheher e zaat as i chng the plot smway.


I had to...I loved that drama :) Glad you'll change the ending!

I'm quite bad at titles but I'll PM some of my suggestions if dimagh ki batti jali😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey sonu ;)
i loved the sobre cs.
Then the pro was so intriguing
very gud efforts at the writing part
and plz post the story
coz ur writing something very interesting
and m definately willing to read more
thanks fr pm
and letting me knw abt ths plot
continue soon nd pm me

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