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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Res for my sweet aapi 🤗

Edited by azsumay - 9 years ago

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Res
unres!

Hey sum ;-D
m i amazed? Yes more than that!
What a beautiful and fantabulous update!
The hug described emotional and oh! Dillu! Shit i want her alive pls
and no more twists sum
now that asad knws zoya is his angel
let them unite
and m curious to read more
will meet u on 28th
wapas akar mujhe achi update padhni he

Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Very nice update

finally he found his angel

I hope dilshad is doing good

please continue soon

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Wonderful part

Asad has realized his feelings for zoya and came to know she's his angel!

Hope dilshad will be okay soon

And I want passionate asya reunion

Continue soon

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

ressy..I'm late 😔

unressy...
nice chapter azu...
loved it..lub u too ❤️
hope dilshaad will be fine soon 😊
my God... asad realised zoya is his angel...
can't wait to read next chapter...
ashu is going to meet his angel...
jaldi update karoo next update 🤗

Edited by binuuu - 9 years ago

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Res 😃
Unres

What to say? really beautiful chapter, I noticed that chapter after chapter, your skill of writing and exposing emotion improve a lot. and this chapter was really well described and beautifully penned.

We can see now how Asad changed his behavior toward Zoya, ignoring the fact that she was his angel, and his restless was well mentioned in this chapter. I love the first scene when she hugged him and 😳 almost kiss.

but the first part scared me a bit, I think Asad will be angry that she hide that his ammi was sick, and I am just scared that it will create a rift between them, I hope I am wrong.

For the moment, he just realized that she was his angel but he still didn't know that his ammi was still alive. It's going to be really emotional scene, i guess.
His convo with his father was really hearttouching, his words are really beautiful, person we love, it's only their bodies who left us but not their souls and memories.
it break me down when Zoya said : i promise him to bring her back, I can feel for her, poor soul. She fought long time to find him and now that she found him, she can't lose his ammi, she was his amanat.

Can't wait to see now that they will find each other, was he going to reveal himself or you will add other twist before their reunion?

Continue soon and for a change I unres rapidily 😆

Edited by radadolcevida - 9 years ago

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Beautifully written update

So full of emotions and extremely intense

Loved the scene were asad was consoling a crying zoya

Happy that finally asad realised that zoya is actually his angel

Excited for their meeting and just hope or should i say that i request not to bring any twist in their story at this point😭

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter😊

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: azsumay

Res for saima aapi, sweet aapi,binnu, sue, nayab, shailu,Julie, Gita,ashleshah,aroo,jas,annie,abi,asif,mayur ,anupama ,Nona, khush, Nikki
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">Arpita, sanjhiri, gouri, dipti</font>
and all readers who following this story🤗
Here you go enjoy😉

Hey Sum..
Thanx for The Res*...
Well This Update was very Good and well edited also...
So Asad now has a wild guess about Zoya being his ANGEL...
I think the mother-son meeting is next...i so want this to happen soon...so tht Asad officially can meet His ANGEL & his AMMI also.
Continue soonish.

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Thank you for the res Sumi

Will come back to comment soon

I finally came back

So sore for the delay

Beautiful chapter. I really wanted to read more

Asad finally knows who his Angel is

I loved it Sumi

Edited by Saima-Syed - 9 years ago