FEAR Files Asya Kabhi OS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Title patha nahi kya doon...
so fear files rak diya🤣
its a bhootiya os..so enjoy😆
Fear Files asya kabhi
A narrow strip of road near sirsi village, which has a haunted graveyard close by... has encountered lot of paranormal Activities

The road stretch has seen many fatal accidents. It is alleged that a women in full bridal wear distracts the drivers especially during nights of full moon thus resulting in tragic accidents. Reports of uncanny activities in the dead of night as experienced by locals have foxed the authorities for long

Same place ,At full moon night one particular day...

A young gal is standing near the graveyard waiting for the lift

she is all alone ...she is wearing black salwar and carrying a handbag... The time is 11:00 pm..And its very cold spooky night

A young man in black glares drives by ...the music system in his car is loud

He sees the gal waving for lift...

Slows down the car ..switches off the music

he checks her out...And sees her all alone so thinks of helping her

so stops the car

and gives the gal a lift. ..

she takes the front seat near him..and sits quietly

Young man sees her face..she is breathtakingly beautiful

Asks her about her name ...ahh ur name

She softly answers zoya..

The young man introduces himself ...hi i am asad..

Zoya keeps quiet..

Asad asks her : tum ithne raat ko iss sunsan jagah main kya kar rahi hoon...i mean isn't it spooky... dont u get scared..,

Zoya : sensually no i never get scared

Asad : Really you never ever get scared...even of cockroaches he laughs...

Zoya : she keeps quiet

Asad : ok then, where should i drop you ??

Zoya : (robotically) ..drop me near the old broken bridge near hebri

Asad : yeah for sure but i heard tht bridge has no lights and in the night no one goes near that old bridge...coz its scarey

Zoya ; (robotically )but i need to go...she says in a serious tone

Asad : ahh may i know what were u doing in that graveyard..i mean in the middle of night

Zoya : had come to meet my dead mother says in a sad tone

Asad : ohh i am sorry i didnt know your mother was dead..so you came to visit her grave..but you came to visit her grave in this full moon night ..I mean i heard lots of stories here..heard that fatal accidents take place and one ghostly women appears in bridal look to scare the daylights of people..

Zoya : keeps quiet

Asad : do you believe in those crap stories or ghosts

Zoya : smirking ...yes i do believe in them...

Asad : accha tho tume lagtha hain ki raat ko voh ladki uss dulhan ki jode main dikayi degi...

Waise kya huva hoga uss bichari ladki ke saath .

Zoya : zaroor uske boyfrnd ne usse doka diya hain...i mean unki shaadi honewali thi...par uska boyfriend uss shaadi ke din nahi aaya.. ...

aur who bichari ussi gham main marr gayi...aur jiss din woh mari thi... uss din full moon night tha

Asad : accha tho fir aaj raat bhi tho full moon night hain voh ladki kahi nazar nahi aarahi..lagtha hain mujse darr gayi..

Zoya : angrily voh kisise nahi darthi..

Asad sees her expressions changing...asad still teasing ..waise ladki bhouth hi coward thi.

.I mean kudhkushi jo kartha hain..woh coward hi hotha hain ..kyonki ussmain himmat hi nahi tha...uss ladke ki sach jane ki shayed koshish hi nahi ki hogi...

Zoya : angrily in danger tone...woh coward nahi thi..usne mohabath ki thi sachi mohabat...

Sad tune of mitwaaa female version ishq pey zorr nahi..

Par uss ladke ko uski mohobat ki kadar nahi thi...

Uss ladke ko kabhi uss par barosa nahi tha...

uss se zyaada uski bachpan ki dost par barosa tha...

Aur nikaah ke din voh ladka usske dost ke saath suhagrat mana raha tha..

Uss ladki ko uss ladke ki dost ki phone aaya tha...uski nikaah ke din ki ladka uske saath hain...ek saath dono bed main chiii

Asad : fir kya huva ...

Zoya : ladki apna sudh budh koke hadbadathi waha chali gayi ladke ki dost ki batayi huvi address pay

Jab ladki waha pounchi tho bhouth der huvi thi... ladka uski saath SR mana chukka tha..

Ladki ke sapne chur chur hogaye..aur uss ladki ko yeh manzar

bardash nahi huva aur ussi bridal dress main usne apni jaan leli..zeher peeli..

Asad :hmm nikaah ke din ladka uske dost ke saath tha ...tume nahi lagtha iske peeche kuch saziish hain..

Zoya : nahi ..sarre ladke aise hi hote hain dokebaaz.. her voice modulates.

Asad : sirf ek ladke ke wajese tum duniya ki sarre ladke ko galath samjogi...its unfair..

Zoya :uss ladke ke wajese uss ladki ki jaan gayi that's unfair...aur uska rooh abhi yahi batak raha hain...aajbhi usse uski intezaar hain..

Asad : well I think it's a fake story...nice try hahaha

Zoya : in a dangerous tone...its not fake story... it's a real love story of mine...turning her head robotically towards asad

Asad : gets startled and pauses for a minute...again sees her innocent face and bursts out laughing

hahahaa achha mazak hain

Zoya : yeh koi mazak nahi hain main sach main marchuki hoon

And blood starts oozing from her stomach...

Asad sees this and gets shocked.

Zoya : ab tum bhi maroge...kyonki muje koi bhi ladka pasand nahi hain..iss ghadi ki bhi accident hogi hahaha

Asad : stops the car he gets exasperated by zoya's strange behaviour...and says her to get out...get out of this car now...

Zoya : ithni jaldi nahi handsome...

Asad : you are abnormal you need a psychiatrist...get out... he gets out and pulls zoya out from the car

Zoya : darr gaye handsome

Asad : no darr nahi gaya but I guess u need a psychiatrist so take this card of a doctor..plz go visit him..orelse I'll leave you near him...but stop all this nonsense...

Zoya starts laughing loudly haha

Asad : whts wrong wth you ...you are really mad

Zoya : well I work for MTV BAKRA it's a program on MTV wher we make people fool...

Asad : you work for MTV then where is the camera

Zoya she shows her handbag...it has attached hidden camera..

And my crew got all the footage haha

They will be coming anytime now...

Asad : but looks lik your prank didn't work on me...

Zoya : yes ..it didn't work despite the Location being scary and spooky ...

And you didn't get scared for a minute also...

Asad : coz I knew you wer not the ghost says robotically...his voice modulates

Zoya sees him hypnotically...like in trance for few minutes

At that moment her crew members come to that place in their van..all get down and come near zoya and congragulate her for her guts...

Coz she was playing the prank near the graveyard in the night...in a high paranormal location

and say yaar mazak accha hota agar yeh ladka darr jatha tho..chalo lets go...

zoya: wait guys let me say him bye...

zoya says asad bye now I am off for a new target...it was nice meeting an handsome stranger ...

she shakes her hand with him and moves to her van

and her van moves

asad : waves at her cyaa...

he removes his black glares and smirks it was really nice meeting you zoya... his eyes is fully hallow

I was never scared of you being the ghost coz I myself was a ghost

And he disappears along with his car...

The end ...

ps :sarre tomatoes jhute welcome hain but it shld be branded jhoote

and tomatoes should be organic🤣 and fresh not sada huva😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nikki tu ghost hai🤣
Awesome os yaar👍🏼
Aur yeh story ek film main thi na😉
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hum bhi aa gaye hain😎
Missed 1st place cuz pg hi open nahi ho raha tha😡
This pg has some issues every time I refresh 2 read or edit it keeps rolling like that Ad
coming 2 OS Dhamakedaar OS thi Chinky😃
pehle socha Zoe mar jaye aisa nahi hota
phir yeh prank hai sunke kina mja aya but nice part was Asad didn't fall 4 it
HAila Zoya ka dialogue Billi ke saath Sr mnayi was so funny🤣
Par sachi Asad bhi Bhoot tha
Maja aaya pad ke😃
But Chinky ki bachi yeh tujhe last week puchna tha bhul gayi tu Theif wali story kab continue karegi😭 tune bola tha likhegi phir kahan hai who😡😡
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lol Nikki ...😆

What was this?
Completely out of the box thinking hehe..
It was quite entertaining...

But it would be more fun had Zoya known Asad's identity...

Do write more stuff like this..

Edited by sweet_tehs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow bhutiya os woh bhi asya pe wow
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailu123

Wow bhutiya os woh bhi asya pe wow

patha nahi kya lika hain🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was awesome 🤣..
Loved it
The part u used asya story for gal suicide was funny..
And somehow last part was predictable but nice try..
Kuch naya to mila asya par..
Edited by Kanwal4salman - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome os.
Zoya played prank but asad was a actual ghost.*hahahaha*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikii11


<div></div>patha nahi kya lika hain🤣

koi nei hum sambhal lenge😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kabhibloom

Awesome os.
Zoya played prank but asad was a actual ghost.*hahahaha*

thank u jee kkg..🤣
aaj kal aap kaha gum sum hain

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