SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#511

Wow

This was absolutely beautiful

I loved it

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#512

Awesome OS
Beautifully written
Thanks for PM

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#513

oh no!!!!!!
why is everything so beautiful here!!!!
loved this edit by paru
omg!!!! maar daala
and title oye hoye kyaa baat he yar
mast...and made me curious
but ofcourse mere predictions humesha galat hi hote he
update padhne ke baad pata chalta he wo😆

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#514

loved the starting launguage used
and then she a fashion related girl...ooh!!!
it carried sincerity till she was in event
and what a turn in the story when the tune plays
i love these kinda meetings yar!!!
and then jab story flashback me jaati he
its thrilling to read...so was when i was reading this...
and the songgg!!!!! omg/...it used to be my fav when the movie came...and i guess affection daba hua tha dil me...wapas lyrics padhne se ubhar aaya🤪

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#515

and here goes the dare devil in her
at the age of 17!!!! sneaking and witnessing that!!! omg...terrifying for a teen to see that... gun shot!!!! it made them meet
as in she wouldn't have seen so she wudn't have fainted and they might never knew the other existed...!
and the gun shot in tv again made them never see each other
as he left and so did she to ny

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#516

and absolutely awesome
his tune relaxes her
and in her unconcious memory she has the tune!!!
wow!!! never thought the healing wud be done this way!!!
awesome...connections kab kaha ban jaate he...
in hospital .i loved the portion whr asad talks to her👍🏼
and then oblivious to the world around them in present they embrace each other🥳

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#517

the terrace talks were coing so naturally
i loved this os so much...i think this was the best??🤪
u make me go crazy...6 prompts and all 6 ek se badh ke ek👏
aur kya kahe tumse jaane man
i think ur writing did a spell on me🤣
shrashti the jaadugari🤣

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mahira01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#518

Lovely os dear
u written very well
good work 😊
and love this banner style

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paru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#519

hii srashti this is very awesome yaar

i loved it really

asad kitna cute hai kitne pyar se wo zoya ke liye gana gata hai

bahut hi cute tha sachi

sach me khubsurat likha hai tune

gud job yaar

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