SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
The title supernatural had my interest since when i was hitting the link of child labor
i was so curious yar ki ab to next bs yehi padna he 😆

😆 all time curious...

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#362

And i loved the reason asad gave her for keeping that earing! The confession was gud
and the handwriting turns out to be her ammi's
this one was so interesting
itne supernaturality ni thi jesa i expected frm the title
bt the unexpected got the place in my heart's fav. List
i adore the way u arrange scenes systematically yet nt breaking the flow!
It came out so beautifully
love u for writing ths

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
The idea superb diya meri jan shailu ne
and haye meri paru ka banner!
I really like that actress who must be her mom in ur os!

Thanks from their side and paru does so much...I never have to do anything for the banner... I just tell her the situation and she gimme the final one

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Those letters and then u described her ammi's gleaming eyes were intriguing
first when she cried for zoya's sadness
and last tym for her happiness as asad mil gaya zoya ko

😳 u really found it intriguing

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

hayee meri paru
me teri kab ho gayi

sowiee

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

😳u really found it intriguing

yes undoubtedly

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Also i felt a slight humor when she goes behind him in the backyard and sees him talking staring somewhr else
but grl it was so heartbreaking to read whr she says kya aap mujhse itni nafrat karte he ki mere dard se aapko khushi milti he?
Oh thats so touching

I wanted it to be a mix of emotions and m happy u noticed it and mentioned it too😃