SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12 - Page 37

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

The title supernatural had my interest since when i was hitting the link of child labor
i was so curious yar ki ab to next bs yehi padna he 😆

And i loved the reason asad gave her for keeping that earing! The confession was gud
and the handwriting turns out to be her ammi's
this one was so interesting
itne supernaturality ni thi jesa i expected frm the title
bt the unexpected got the place in my heart's fav. List
i adore the way u arrange scenes systematically yet nt breaking the flow!
It came out so beautifully
love u for writing ths

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

The idea superb diya meri jan shailu ne
and haye meri paru ka banner!
I really like that actress who must be her mom in ur os!

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Those letters and then u described her ammi's gleaming eyes were intriguing
first when she cried for zoya's sadness
and last tym for her happiness as asad mil gaya zoya ko

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

hayee meri paru
me teri kab ho gayi

sowiee

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

😳u really found it intriguing

yes undoubtedly

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Also i felt a slight humor when she goes behind him in the backyard and sees him talking staring somewhr else
but grl it was so heartbreaking to read whr she says kya aap mujhse itni nafrat karte he ki mere dard se aapko khushi milti he?
Oh thats so touching

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

sowiee

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Hahaha

Woh bas jeeju ki hai😆

nooo

Hehe haan paru
apna banane aayi na mai tujhko 🤣
jiju mujhe pitenge
acha mehroon pari baki ke reviews kal dungi ok