AsYa song Drabble ||KaBhi Jo Badal Barse||

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ashiii333

I I arshu 😳

😛

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Aawww dat was so beautiful nd lvly drbl aroo..
Loved it.., well written <3

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safa/fuii

@Splash-ASYA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

the concept was goood.

but an OS would have been much better..

actually i dont like drabbles much..

i find them rushed..

like not this drabble but all drabbles..

ye tou phir lambii haii.. amd better haii.. people write the whole song and beech mein kaheen 4 lines likhi hotii hain..

as a drabble it was good..

but as a story it was rushed..

next time try to write a detailed OS on any topic..

but the concept was really good..

zoya making asad jealous and asad almost leaving etc!

continue ur stories asap

and write more OS

and thank u for the pm..

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Awesome Drabble...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Portrait Beautifully...⭐️

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Absolutely beautiful Little Api

You gave the song a new meaning

Love it

But love u more

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

as always awesome.

loved it

thanks for pm

Love
Aish

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

beautiful drabble
loved it
thanks for the pm

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

I really like these song drabbles

❤️

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Love it

so cute

Keep writing like this dear

👍🏼

😛

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

nice drabble aaroo..
very cute...
best friends turn to life partners 😉
zoya's surprise plan flopped 🤣
enjoyed very well...

Edited by binuuu - 10 years ago

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