SaHil OS : That Kiss...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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That kiss...

That kiss stayed in her mind for far longer that it should've.

Why did it?

Why did she let him kiss her?

There they were, drunk from all the tribal merriment and dancing, feeling so buoyant with happiness, when she saw the look in his eyes.

Hunger. Desire. Need.

She felt hypnotized by the spell he held her in, just staring helplessly when he came close, grasped her hand and angled for a kiss.

That kiss...

The meeting of lips in an expression of love. Caring, fondness, adoration.

But his tasted of desire and passion.

It wasn't awkward, or chaste. He knew exactly how to kiss her. Exactly how long before she would become breathless for air. He knew which way she'd angle her head and not bump into her nose.

But she didn't spend time wondering about it.

She'd royally freaked. She suddenly thought of Shaad , HER HUSBAND...!!!

Dear God... What had taken hold of her? When did she become so wanton? Kissing a handsome stranger out of the blue...!!

Then came the whopper.

"Sanam..." he'd mumbled hoarsely, reaching out for her hand.

"I'M NOT SANAM!! I'M JANNAT!! Shaad's wife !!!"

She had hastily changed and made for the road, uncaring whether he was following. But in the corner of her eye, she could see and hear him behind her, bounding to catch up.

He grabbed her hand. She flung it away in rage, and revelled at the hurt in his eyes.

Take that for flirting with a married woman! She thought... Just because he was so devilishly handsome, it didn't mean he could have any woman he'd like !! Well NOT this one...she convinced herself.

She reached the small road and walked alongside , meaning to flag down passers-by. She waved at a small hatchback, which slowed down. Unfortunately, two men came out, their expressions leering.

"so what's a pretty girl like you doing out here all by herself huh??"

"None, of your business, really. Why don't you just go on your way then..." She evaded.

"What ? And leave a pretty girl like you all alone here? NEVER...! Come on pretty girl, come join us... We'll take you someplace fun...!" The two lechers invited. Sanam felt her hackles rise as the men tightened their hold on her hand.

The smiles on their faces had started to harden when a muscular hand grabbed a hold of theirs.

"Let her go... She's not alone here..."

"Not alone? I think you're intruding here mister. Pretty lady here asked for a ride from us... You best move along yourself!"

When Aahil didn't budge, the other man dragged at her hand hard and she found herself flush against the stranger who proceeded to grab her butt.

All of a sudden, Aahil flew into a rage and pummelled the two men into the ground.

"SHE'S MY WIFE, DAMMIT !! HOW DARE YOU TOUCH HER !!"

Sanam felt her head spin...

Goodness... do men just simply claim other women as their wives at a whim??


*the end*
Edited by sageflower7 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh Aahil...if he hadn't say her name out loud, then Jannat wouldn't have slapped him I guess. So, that's understandable!!. To Jannat it's an insult to be kissed while she gave in and then to hear another woman's name. Here, it's the opposite of the promo.
Hehe, Aahil has blurted it out like that. Just awesome! Unfortunately that will never happen in the show 😔.
So finally Sanam's brains are working now, that's a good thing right? 👍🏼
How I wish the cv's let her use her brain, so I don't have to hate her. Even though I don't like her at all, she's one hell annoying thing!
Nice OS Sage!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice OS, Anni 👍🏼

Is it too much to ask to let Jannat use her brain just for a short while? Seriously, it's getting out of hand. Let her have these feelings and images crash down, only that way she'll figure it out..

Nice and besutiful story, Anni.. Just wish something like this would happen.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh gosh why did you end it that way? just amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sageflower7



"SHE'S MY WIFE, DAMMIT !! HOW DARE YOU TOUCH HER !!"

Sanam felt her head spin...

Goodness... do men just simply claim other women as their wives at a whim??


*the end*



Oh the heights of irony. If only she knew. 😆

Loved it! 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice job
Now we've seen it happen
So hopefully the show will take a different angle
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was so cool Ani. Specially that last line... do men claim other women as their wives at whim.
Aahh., I see a pun, an intentional one😆
so Jannat finds Aahil handsome😛. I think the CVs need to start showing a few of Jannat monologues. right now I am not watching, coz I don't feel any connect.
Edited by JShukla - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ani,
The last line: 🤣

Ham bhi chakkar khaa rahe hai😆

That kiss was so passionate. ❤️ Sanam got so lost...just like she did in the almost- kiss.😳
Beautifully written.👏


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