sahil TS-sacha pyaar bhulaye nehi bhulta...(part2-pg2)

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my 2nd stry on sahil,its two shot,read it & gv me ur feedbks...

at dargah:

sanam-"kehte hai har ladki k lia uske shaadi ka din bohot khaas hoti ha,dil pe sukun hoti hai ki aaj se uske har sukh dukh me,zindagi k har ek pal me uske sath nibhane k lia uske sath uska humsafar hoga,to fir wo ahsas aj mere dil me q nehi ha,q lag raha mujhe ki main apne zindagi ki sabse ahem hissa khone wali hu,allah mia,maine ye sawal aapse kahi baar kia hai,par kuch samajh nehi aya,mujhe aisa q lag raha hai main sabse badi galati karne jaa rahi hu ye shaadi karke,main to apne yaden kho chuki hu,par aako to sab pata hai,mujhe raasta dikhaiye allahmia,teen ghante baad mera nikah hai shaad k sath par main apke samne hu,q ki main iss nikah me apne dil se sehmat nehi hu,kyu??sabke saamne to kehti hu ki main apne shahor se mohabbat karti hu,par aapko bhi pata hai ki main SHAAD se MOHABBAT nehi karti,kyu??mujhe rasta dikhaye allah mia!"-saying tht sanam close her eyes...

naya dhaba kharid lena

naya car kharid lena

sanam ahmad khan wallid asad ahmad khan kya aapko ahil raza Ibrahim walid raza Ibrahim se nikah qubool hai

qubool hai

humara dream house

ye kitchen,bed room

haya aur faiz k bache

choomantar..

agar hum eksath rehna chahe to hume koi alag nehi kar sakta

humara rista kaisa hoga ye sirf hum tai karenge

main chahta hun tum wo sare haq jatao sare sapne sajao jo ek biwi apne shahor se karta ha

I love u sanam

apke ammi ne apko dhoka dia,

apke abbu zinda hai

ya allah main sirf ahil ki hu,agar wo mere zindagi me nehi ha to mujhe abhi isi waqt fanah kar de..

AAHIL...

Sanam open her eyes-sukriya allahmia!mujhe meri khusiya wapas dene k liye

In ahil's room:

Ahil-ya allah!main sanam se beinteha mohabbat karti hu,agar apko humara mohabbat qubool nehi to koi baat nehi,meri zindagi to hamesa andhere mehi thi,bas sanam ko hamesha khush rakhiye

At nikah venue:-

Qazi-jannat khan kya apko shaad aftab khan se nikah qubool hai??

Sanam-QUBOOL NEHI HAI..

Sanam2-jannat ye aap kya keh rahi hai,shaad-jannat kya baat hai aap...

Sanam removing her veil,standing on centre hall-yadash to meri gayi ha na shaad,apki to nehi,to fir,apko to pata ha ki main jannat nehi hu,to fir...aur sanam tumhe kya laga tha tumhe meri bimari ka fyada uthake tum mujhe aur ahil ko alag kar paogi??maine kaha tha tumse aisa kabhi nehi hoga...sanam2 shcked-tumari yadash wapas a gayi ha...

Ahil heard sanam said qubul nehi ha & came to hall from his room

Shaad-jannat ye..

Sanam-jannat jannat jannat,nafrat hai mujhe iss nam se,main koi jannat wannat nehi MRS.SANAM AHIL RAZA IBRAHIM HU..AHIL KI SANAM

Shaad-nehi aisa nehi ho sakta,tum meri jannat ho...

Sanam-jhoot ko bar bar kehne se jhoot sachem nehi badal jayga..maine apke jaise dhokebaz insane aj tak nehi dekha.jo sabke samne to gentleman banne ka natak karta hai,par asal me ek ghatia insane ha jo ek bimar helpless ladki ka faida uthata hai...

Shaad-nehi,ha ye sach hai ki maine jhoot kaha par main tumse pyaar karti hu,aur tum vi to mujhse pyar karti ho tabhi iss shadi ke lia ha kia tha

Sanam-pyar kis pyaar ki baat kar rahe ha aap,bhram me ji rahe hai aap ya fir sach dekhne,janne k baad bhi sach ko manna nehi chahte,kab kaha maine ki main aapse pyaar karti hu,maine nikah ke lia ha islie nehi ki main apse pyar karti hu,maine ha kia apke jhoot ke wajah se,akhir aapke jhoot ke muta bik aap mere husband hai,mere jaan bachaya,uss ahsan k lie maine ha kaha,kya jante hai aap mere bare me,apne mujhe bachane k lia jhoot bola par uske baad kya apne ek bar vi mujhse sach kehne ki koshis ki,jhoot pe jhoot bolte gaye,main apni family k bare me kehta gaya,ya tak saaf saf aapko ye tak keh di ki mujhe kisi ki mohabbat ka ehsas ha,apne shohar k nam pe apple pie banaya ya tak wo ballon chor te waqt mere mu se ahil ka naam nikla.lekin aap ne kya kia jhoot bolke nikah tak baat leke aye,aapne ye kabhi janne ki koshis ki main kaha se ayi hu,kya karti hu,nehi,jab vi main apne past k bare me baat karti thi apne mujhe chup kara dia,apne ek baar bhi nehi socha mere gharwale parishan ho rahe honge,main kisi ki beti hu,behen ho sakti hu,kisi ki BIWI hu,par apko kya fark parta hai,ahil mujhe yaha pagalo ki tarah dhund rahe the aur aap mujhe waha gumrah kar rahe the,aur main vi pagalo ki tarah aap pe yakin kar lia..shaad mia jaante bujhte kia gaye galti ko galti nehi,gunah kehte hai,aap ek nehatyi selfish,ghatiya dhokebaz,jhoota insaan hai...main sirf ahil kit hi,hu,aur hamesa rahungi..

Sanam turn & saw ahil,ahil smirking:ms.dhabewali is bk,

Sanam-aur aap,has q rahe hai,waise to Bhopal ke nawab hai,aur khare khare apni hi biwi ka kisi aur ke sath nikah hote hua dekh rahe hai..kaise husband hai aap..thn her voice change to hurt,pain,guilt from seriousness...she started cry..ya fir ab aap mujhe apne zindagi me nehi chahte,janti hu galati ki hai maine,saza to milege hi,par ahil main jaan bujh k kuch nehi kia,maine aap ko jaan bujh ke dhoka nehi dia..

Ahil-holding her he cupped her face,sanam aisa bilkul nehi ha,main aaj vi tumhe utnahi pyar karta hu jitna kal karta tha,tumne mujhe koi dhoka nehi dia...bt befor he cn further say anything police came to IM...

Ahil-inspector aap yaha,inspector-hum apki dusri biwi sanam ko arrest karne aye hai,unke khilaf attempt to murder,kidnapping aur human trafeking ka charge ha..

Sanam2-aa..aap ye kya keh ja rahe hai,hu..humne aisa kuch nehi kia,koi kuch vi kahenge aur aap maan jayenge,kisne report likhwaya,bulaiye use,aur sabut kya hai aapke pas??

Inspector-humare pas pakka sabut hai,dilawar ne apna byan de dia hai,sirf yehi nehi hamare pas uss hospital ke cctv photage hai jaha pe saf saf dikh raha hai ki apne dhoke se dilawar ka mu bandh karna chaha aur mr.ahil ke sar pe rod se mara,sirf itnahi nehi humne apke call records bhi chck kia,aur eye witness bhi ha..mr.ahil hume inhe arrest karna hoga...

Ahil-sure inspector,go ahed,sanam2-nehi ye sab jhut hai,kaha mila ye sabkuch apko aur ye witness kon ha..

Inspector-pointing sanam inhone kal report likhwaya,aur eye witness hai yehi..

ahil-par aisa kaise ho sakta hai,jab ye nayi sanam ye sab kuch kar rahi thi to sanam yaha nehi thi to fir..

sanam-ek min ahil,inspector apko pakka yakin ha ki report likhwane main hi ayi thi..

inspector-ye aap kya keh rahe hai,aap hi to aye the...

sanam smiling-thnk u inspector aap nehi jante apne mujhe kaisi khabar di ha..ahil,sochiye agar main ye sab nehi janti,main yaha thi nehi par inspector keh rahe ha ki maine report likhaya to fir..

sahil together-SEHER...

seher-yes meri behna main,she enter IM in her style as usual in her jeans &tank top..

sanam-tu thik hai,allah ka lakh lakh sukar hai kit u thik hai...maine usdin uss truck ka picha kia,par tu waha thi nehi,aur agar tu zinda hai to yaha q nehi aya...

seher-sanam relax,main thik hu,sab batati hu,par tu(turning to s2)-kya hua khusi nehi hui mujhe dekhkar,tune to koi kasar nehi chodi sanam ko ahil se aur mujhe sanam se alag karne k lia,par dekh hum zinda hai,wo vi sehi salamat,soch rahi hana kaise hua,wo kehte hai na marne wale se zyada bachane wala bara hota hai to bas..

prcp-sanam2 arrest,sasa exposed,shaad leaving & SAHIL moments..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written
hope something like this happens in the show as well
continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plzz latif n khala KO bhi nikalo yaha se...
I really wish show me ESA ho...but no hopes...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow !!...lovely yaar
n FINALLY ...atleast kahi to seher ki entry hui...haha!!
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ooh that was nice Sonu! ;) Amazing! Loved the Dhabevaali here! Yayy!
All good things happening, can't wait for next part! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil

Ooh that was nice Sonu! ;) Amazing! Loved the Dhabevaali here! Yayy!

All good things happening, can't wait for next part! 😳

thank u very much pragya,wht to do???i cnt cntrl myslf,i wnt dhabewali cm bk in shw also bt knw thts nt possible...u cn say main apni dil ki bharas sanam k zariye nikala...& im planing more 4 ths looser...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is EXACTLY what I wrote. You copied my entire marriage scene, you copied the dialogue I gave Sanam. The first thing I post on Indiaforum, and you decide to copy it? 👏👏
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Originally posted by: ssimmy

this is EXACTLY what I wrote. You copied my entire marriage scene, you copied the dialogue I gave Sanam. The first thing I post on Indiaforum, and you decide to copy it? 👏👏

hey,i didnt copy anythng,i m planing it 4m whn i heard shajan nikah announcemnt,i was working on it & thn post it,if it matched with ur story thn its a coincidnt,i m sorry..& abt sanam's dialogue whtever sanam said in ths story its my imagination,&if u said abt FB's ,thn fb's surely will match,if u dnt blv thn check survir heaven,whn at 1st i heard shajan nikah announcemnt in sbb,i wrote ths scene,even i said tht it cn b ahil's plan to bring her memory bk,-my tht post was liked by rada,aliya...ab baki tum jano,its ur choice u blv or nt...bt pls without knwing anythng abt me dnt tell i copied ur story..
Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 10 years ago
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PART-2

SEHER-truck se dhakka lagne k baad main jakhmi hokar jhario me fas gayi.kuch NGO walo ne mujhe dekha aur mujhe unlogo k sath legaya.waha main pichle do mahino se koma me thi.coma se bahar ane ke baad jab main bhopal ayi to sabse pehle bare bappa k mandir gayi,waha se ate waqt maine sanam ko dekha iss admi(shad) k sath ek hotel k bahar.main sanam k pas jahi rahi thi ki maine undono ki baat suni,pehle to main kuch samajh nehi payi akhir sanam ko jannat hyu kehrahe hain..par fir waha ahil vi aya aur wo vi sanam ko jannat kehke bula raha tha.puri baat sunne k baad mujhe samajh aya ki sanam lost her memory & iss shaad ne usse jhoot bola,par main ye vi samajh chuki thi ki sanam ko aisehi sachayi nehi bata sakti,uske health pe asar hoga,aur agar batana hota to ahil abtak bata chukka hota..lekin mujhe ahil pe pura bharosa tha ki wo apne sanam ko apne aap se alag nehi karega.isliye main waha se chali ayi aur apna sara dhyan iss nayi sanam pe lagaya,usse uski kiye ki saza jo dena tha.

nayi sanam ke bare me pata lagate lagate maine ye jana ki ahil ke upar nayi sanam ko marne ka ilzam laga tha par fir khud nayi sanam nehi report wapas le liya.ahil ne meri aur sanam ki missing complain vi kia tha,to bas police ki madat se humare hatho wo cctv photage laga jaha sanam2 ek nurse banke ahil ko piche se marta hai,aur wohi corridor se dilawar k room tak jati hai fir bahar ati hai,uske baad hi dilawar koma me chala gaya,par sayed bappa vi humare sath tha,dilawar ko hosh agaya aur usne apna bayan dia ki usne tumare kehne par sabkuch kia,police ne tumari phone records vi nikali.

police handcuffed sanam2.sanam2-aap log aisa nehi kar sakte main ahil ji ke bache ki maa banne wali hu.

ahil-jhoot mat bolna,ye tumhe vi pata hai maine kavi tumhe chuya tak nehi,thn nazia said-ha bhaijan hume maaf kar dijiye,bhabi pregnent nehi thi,then tell everyone tht how she helped her.par jab mujhe ye ehsas hua main galati kar rahi hu maine unka sath chor dia,par fir vi uss din sabke samne mere madad k bina hi unhone prove kia ki wo pregnent hai.kaise?

seher-ab ye to saif batayga,haina saif.she goes to him snatch his phone & said kya baat hai saif nikah nazia k sath par uski ek vi pic tumare paas nehi,lagta hai tumare sath nayi sanam ki kuch jyada hi gehri dosti hai,thn shwing the phone everyone.everyone is shocked seeing sanam2's pic,some of thm with saif,some pics r very compromising position.

kya baat hai sanam tumhe kuch kehna nehi hai??sanam2-ye sab jhoot hai,saif jhoota hai,ye sab mere pics nehi hai.mere sath uska koi rishta nehi hai..seher-whn I said u r lying,I also knw galati saif ki hai..

saif-jhoot aap bol rahe hai,maine kuch nehi kia,aap aye the mere pas,paise k badle me sauda karne,apne mujhe gari,paisa, sab diya aur badle me mujhse rishta banane k liye kaha.seher-kaisi aurat ho tum,ek aurat kitni vi giri hui ho use apne bache k baap ka naam to pata hota hai,par tum to..ya fir tumara itna sara rishta hai ki tumhe khud nehi pata.sanam2-mujhe pata hai ye saif ka bacha hai..(i copy ths part 4m film 'aithraaz').seher smirked.

nazia slapped saif,ahil strt punching saif but police cm in between thm.when police take them away sanam stop thm.she go to near sanam2 & slap her hard 3time.

sanam-pehla thappad mujhe aur ahil ko dur karne k liye,dusra thappad jo tumne mere behen k sath kia uske liye,tisra thapad tumne jo taklif ahil ko diya hai uske liye.inspector ab isse leke jaiye..

seher now turn to shaad-oo hello mr.liar aap ab tak iha se nehi gaye,sharam namki koi chiz hai ki nehi,sanam ne itna kuch kaha firvi aise mu uthake khare hai..

shaad-main nehi jaungi,mujhe jannat se baat karni hai,wo ahil ki sanam thi par maine uski jaan bachayi hai,ab wo mere jannat hai.main usse beintaha mohabbat karta hu,he goes near to sanam & try to hold her but before tht SANAM SLAP HIM HARD &he is kicked & fell down on the floor.he turn back & see ahil standing infront of sanam..

before shaad can understand wht is happening ahil start to punch him,kick him,beat him...he grab shaad's coller & spoke with gritted teeth-SANAM,YE MERI BIWI SANAM HAI,SANAM AHIL RAZA IBRAHIM.BOHOT JHOOT BOL LIYA,AUR MAINE BARDASHT VI KAR LIYA,SANAM TUMHE PEHLEHI APNA JAWAB DE CHUKI HAI,MAIN TUJHE JAANE DE RAHA HU SIRF ISSLIYE KYU KI TUNE MERI BIWI JAAN BACHAYI,PAR AGAR AB TU MERE BIWI KI AAS PAS VI BHATKA TO MUJHSE BURA KOI NEHI HOGA,ahil drag him & throw out from IM.

seher-ek min,she pull out a paper from her pocket & throw the paper on shaad's face,ye court ke taraf se restriction order,aap koi sashi kapoor ko pakad ne aye hai na.wohi kijiye..humare ghar ke kisi vi member ya fir iss ghar ki aas pas vi aap dikhna nehi chahiye..warna kaam to jayga hi sathme jo cheat kia hai uske kiye jail vi.NOW GET LOST.

both jija-sali close the door on shaad's face.thy turn back & see sanam smiling at them.sanam ran into ahil's arm.sahil hug.seher-aur main...thn the trio hug.

Prcp"only sahil...

p.s-i know thr isnt any sahil,bt in this part all villains r out..so next part full of sahil.pakka promise.now gv some likes & cmnts.

Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome
all evil devil ki chuti
good
cnt soon

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