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Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile
Soo damn interesting...

Seriously uneeeq one ...

U HAVE TO UPDATE SOON...TUMHE ASYA KI KASAM;)...:)...:D

Hey,

Thankyou so much Pretty smile ! 😊

I'm glad you liked it.

Hahaha.. I wish but I might take a little time to frame out the next part ! 😕

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: kobeb
Awesome update pls continue soon! :)

Hey, Thankyou,glad you liked it ! 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: mona12345

Chocoo Merii Jaaann !! ❤️ [ haha..snatching your line] 😆

That^ coming from you means a lot !! Thankyouu so so much ! 😃😳
Yeah, I'd thought I wouldn't get a positive reception for this story since the concept is not very conventinal. I still think people aren't quite happy with the concept, safe to say, 'shocked' .But honestly I did modify the story a lot so that it fits the mindsets here. Idk, how I'm going to go about it further though😕😳

Anyway😆

I'm just so so glad you liked it ! 🤗❤️

Love you so much and more choco di ! ⭐️

Mwaah ! x

Hahahaha 😆. No problem, use it as much as you can 😃

Sweetheart this is a good story and a unique concept so bound to have a mixed bag on the feedback. Yea safely said 😉. But you know for my story Together a compromise Jo more, I had too got a lot if negativity to have made Zoya cry so much. So it's OK. Just take everything in your stride 👍🏼

And trust me, you are an amazing writer 😃

Mwah 🤗

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Hahahaha 😆. No problem, use it as much as you can 😃

Sweetheart this is a good story and a unique concept so bound to have a mixed bag on the feedback. Yea safely said 😉. But you know for my story Together a compromise Jo more, I had too got a lot if negativity to have made Zoya cry so much. So it's OK. Just take everything in your stride 👍🏼

And trust me, you are an amazing writer 😃

Mwah 🤗

sorry to interfer, but IT'S a GOOD concept. I even started writing a story about, but more as an FF than TS. you were faster and your story is lighter than mine.

however, your way to write it's so fresh and enjoyable, that i encourage you to continue to write. I agree you have such a great talent.

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Mona darling how r u?😛

sorry 4 d late comnt

but i just loved d updt

it was super se bhi upar😉

it was shocking that Asad was ok wid it but later i realised here Asya r totally different😳 othwise he would have given long lecture on Tameez & Tehzeeb😆

so AAK was smitten by Zoe 4 a long time😳

but due 2 her professionalism & uninterest 2 b in relationship he buried his feelings

1 thing 2 b noted is both r sexually attracted & admire d other , in d 1st part even in Zoya's POV she admires Asad's other qualities & here he does 2

so d thing is why can't they b 2gather-2gather 😆. D way Zoya suggested a honeymoon paradise ka idea yet she don't want 2 b wid Asad😲😕😆

they want each other but don't want strings attached??

1 more thing if Asad can adopt a child why can't Zoe. I mean why she wants 2 deliver herself otherwise she's so modern than why she want 2 feel motherhood herself

both r excited & looking forward 2 d process of making a baby🤣 but don't want 2 b 2gather this is confusing just a bit.😕

but anyways Asad is up 4 this deal happily😆 & has signed it aswell wid a kiss he wanted 2 steal even when she was explaining him😆

& it was hilarious 2 read him asking qstns as if it was a business deal & Zoe's reactions😆

who says they don't like d subject i like it, its tricky its bold but totally sold Mona darling😆 wah ik tagline ka avishkar kar diya mene🤣

Love u

Take care

See u😛

PS- BTW d most imp thing why u still hadn't changed it into SS😲😡 it can't b a TS u can't end it in d nxt part.😒 It can b easily extended we want 2 read their hilarious process of baby making🤣 omg i know it can b bold but i would love 2 read if u write it keeping d humor in mind it will b awesome. 😆 not that u can't write bold or havn't wrote in d past remember😉😆 Turn it into SS i say it last time also u changed a TS in SS when i requested u do it this time 2 pretty plz

& Tu humesah summer aur winter break main hi kyun aati hai age piche bhi ayegi toh we wont mind😆

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: radadolcevida
I came across your story and I read both of the chapter. I must , woow, I really love it. 😃
everything was really good, the idea, the writting, even the deal 😳
Interesting to see that both were attracked to each other but acted only professionnal way. I really love her audacity and Asad's naughtiness.
it's just sad that it's only TS, we would have enjoy their "fake" honeymoon or should I say that week to fall on love 😆
Brillant story and brillant idea, I really love. I hope you will update soon, can't wait to see how they will take the next step now.

Hey Radadolcevida! 😊

Thats ^ really sweet and generous of you. The appreciation really brought a grin to my face !!! 😃😳

Thankyou so much ! I'm so glad you liked it !

Yeah, Asad and Zoya here are very different characters from what they portrayed in the show!

Hhahah.. I might have to convert this TS into a FS or SS. 😳😃

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: fatima30
This is written so so well! I love it!
A very very interesting story cannot wait to read on!
Asya want each other so badly...they'll break the deal pretty soon! lol

Update soon

Hey Fatima,

Thankyou so much. Glad you liked it ! 😃

I'll try !

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: cutie15
This is jusr so amazing..!!!
Loved it .
this is very exciting. ..
looking forward to the next update. .
update soon plss..!!

Hey cutie,

Thankyou so much. Glad you liked it ! 😃

I'll try. Haven't started yet though.

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

sorry to interfer, but IT'S a GOOD concept. I even started writing a story about, but more as an FF than TS. you were faster and your story is lighter than mine.
however, your way to write it's so fresh and enjoyable, that i encourage you to continue to write. I agree you have such a great talent.

@ radadolcevida most welcome to hop on anytime 🤗

Mona, see I told you 😎 😆