A$y@ / k@bhi SS Finally Found You **** link to thread 2 added at pg 1 - Page 52

Originally posted by: nikii11

Omg zoya's abu was suffering frm cancer..😲

Last stage 😲

Due to smoking..well he must have known tht smoking kills..🤢

Poor zoya the eldest daughter...responsbilty on her

And asad went to beach party...in hope to meet his frnd😳

But she wanted to be left alone in the west coast😉

Asad overhears nd moves to west coast😉

Haila he sees zoe in the beach dancing to sun sathiya wow..

My fav song u added di lov u nd hugs🤗🤗

nd zoe dancing to it on the beach so beautifully portrayed

and zoe giving him another name lol🤣

tattoo lover it suits him perfect name dii ..coz ksg is a tattoo lover⭐️

nd asya convo's began...

she started opening up to him abt her dad nd her bf..😳

nd he came to know she was zoya.. his zoya..his love😳

so he hugged her tighty lik I got my zindigi back..⭐️

and she gave him wht slappp..thappad 😲🤢

bichara aak😭...this update was so beautiful loved it to the core..plz continue it really fast

ps : ...get well soon.dii waise huva kya ??..😳

Originally posted by: -CrazySobtian-

Hii!!

Finally done catching up with this SS 😃

Once again, beautifully written. I could imagine everything as you express your thoughts via writing so well.
hey mally😃 thanku so much yaar
aah so finally ur here😆 at finally found you😉
thanku that's abig compliment if u can imagine via my writing coz that's wat i feared
but here u r boosting my confidence
m glad mally and happy as well😃

Coming to part 1: Asad's pov was nicely written and lol the girl is so stubborn xD During the wedding she had to add her tarka by dancing. I guess it was Zoya cuz who else says Allah miya other than her 😆 [Psst! It has to be Zoya okay?] Asad was all lattu over her or what? 😕

Aww poor Asad couldn't find Zoya 😭and he still loves her
hehe...yes it was zoya😆 who else?
asad ke dil aur dimaag pe cha gayi vo gracious girl😳

Now part 2: They finally met 😃 and of course it had with their infamous argument 😆 and he is attracted to her but she jerked him away. Gosh! He needs to hurry up and dig up everything about her.

Part 3: Omg I wanted Zoya's pov while reading part 2 and now here it is :D The situation is like they are so close and yet so far 😭 The pool party scene tho! *_* His thought about her getting into the pool while wearing those see through dress xD and their little self talks.
haha...ya i felt the same that without her pov...
readers wud make her a villan so had to give it😆
glad u like the part😳

Lastly, part 4: Again well written part! And finally Asad knows his mysterious girl's name. He should've told her his name as well and lol zoya called him mr. tattoo lover? XD And of course the twist was the slap 😲 😭 Poor Asad!

Do update soon 😃

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Fantastic update...loved your narration

I never liked Zoya's dad's character, so making him suffer cancer, made lots of sense to me...😉

Poor Asad but at least he got to know who was haunting his day and night...👏