Asya SS:- How dare u Tanvee(Part 6:-Page 5)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This SS is based on the track when Zoya is offering prayer to
her allah miyan while tanveer is trying to kill zoya but she gets caught
by Asad.
Do tell me how is it,then further I'll update the Ss soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plzz update this one and continue it...show main theekha sa nhin dikhaya tha..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting to read how asad will do when he caught tanveer.
Start soon plz
Do pm or scrap me if u can
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue soon please!

Do PM me!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please continue
Do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is the second time I came here and nothing is up as yet
Disappointment hota hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I so wanna read this.. update soon..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1:-
Tanveer:-Aaj tumhe humse ab koi nahi bacha sakta Zoya.Kitne baar humne kosish kari tumhe
par Allah Jane tum baar baar buch zaati thi.
(Meanwhile Zoya was busy praying to her Allah miyan ignoring all the ranting of Tanveer.)
Tanveer:-Humne tumhe bijli ke jhatke se marne ki kosish ki ,phir jhumar bhi tumpe girane ki
kosish ki,uske baad mehndi mein chemical milaya,phir uske baad pahar she dhakka diya
uske baad bhi tum bach gayi.Par aaj hum tumhe zinda jala denge Zoya kyonki Asad ki
biwi humare alawa koi ho hi nahi sakta.
(Tanveer started spreading kerosene oil all around Zoya n with candle she tried to burn Zoya but she found a very strong pair of arms stopping her n was shocked to see Asad.On the other hand Zoya wokeup from her prayer service)😲
Asad(loudly):-How dare u Tanveer?Tumhaari himmar bhi kaise hui Zoya ko chot pahochaane.
Tanveer:-Jammy humari baat suniye aap jaisa soch rahe waisa bikul bhi nahi hai.
Asad(hurt):-Kya sunu main,tumhe dobaara muka doon taki tum miss farooqo ki jaan le sako.
Sirf tumhari wajah se main Miss Farooqui ko hurt karta raha,unhone kitni baar
mujhe samjhane ki kosish ki but main bewakoofon ki tarah tumhe trusr kata raha.
Zoya:-Maine kaha tha na Tanveer is paak mahine mein khuda bura karne waalon ko nahi bakshta.
Dilshaad:-Mujhe nahi pata tha ki main apne ghar mein ek aastin ke saap ko paal rahi thi.Itna kuch
much kiya hum sab ne tumne kya sila diya Zoya ko maarna chaacha chi.
Tanveer:-Khaala dhokha Zoya aap sab ko de rahi.
Najma:-Bas karo Tanveer khud ki galti dusron pe blame karna band karo.
Asad:-Yeh lo paise aur yahan se dafa ho jao isse pehle ki mera gussa badhe.
Tanveer:-Jammy humaari ek baar baat to sun ligiye.
Asad(shouting):-I said leave right now!!!!!!!!!!!😡😲
(Asad threw the table in anger every one was shocked n this was enough for
Tanveer to leave the house.Asad directly went to his room,locked his door n
started crying )
Dilshaad:-Ya Allah Asad aaj bahot gusse mein hai isse... ...
Zoya:-Phuphi don't worry main dekhtie hoon .
Zoya:-Mr.Khan its me Zoya please darwaaza kholiye
Asad:-Zoya please abhi nahi.
Zoya:-Mr Khan apko meri kasam.
(Asad opened the door n pushed Zoya inside with him.He closed the door.

(Spoiler for next part:-More Asya romance)
Sorry for chotu sa update but kya karoon I
have some work but next time update will be
long one.

Edited by Sandhirrocks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Asya romance for d nxt update.. yayie excited for that..
anyway a good start..:)
Luking forward to this story..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tanveer caught & throw out
Asad was angry but when Zoya gave her qasam, he opened the door.
It was nice update
Continue soon plz
Thanks

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