OS - Sanam, Aahil and Taco Bell

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Disclaimer: Do not read on if you do not like blatant obnoxious stuff, this is NOT 18+. It may have some references though. šŸ˜‰

Aahil's POV

I sat at the corner table as always eating the Bean Chalupa that I always did, tired and fatigued. It had been a long day and I had no way of relieving myself. It had been a fortnight that I had last been with any girl after I broke up with Nyla. I was already over her, we had broken up amicably. Things did not work between the two of us. We were still friends though. Fortunately for me, she wasn't like other girls in the sense of being dramatic and emotional. She was practical and cool headed.

Suddenly, my eyes located HER. She sat at a far away table, alone like me. But, she seemed pleased and well hot. She had a great figure and I could tell. Her knee length dress accentuated her curves, and a glance at her was enough to turn me on. She sat sideways facing away from me, crossing her legs which revealed more of her thighs than her dress did. Women in black appealed to me like no other. She had worn black. She sat there gorging on a Burrito, as far as I could gather.

Though Taco Bell was the closest to any Mexican food, correction, amazing Mexican food, you would ever get, I wasn't a big fan of Burritos. They had too much rice in my opinion. The bean ones were cool. Chuck it, anything with bean is cool.

Oh my God! Did she have to eat it in that manner now? Couldn't she eat it normally like others did? She was licking the sauce first, putting a part of it into her mouth almost moaning. Gosh! She would kill me here and now with need. I wanted her. I needed her right now. I was hard.

It was Friday night, almost 10.30 at night. Taco Bell closed at like 11. The crowd was already clearing. But, I was not ready to leave just then.

I walked up to her table, in another corner, thankfully, secluded.

"Do you mind if I sit here?" I asked sounding as cool and composed as I possibly could while feeling the exact opposite.

Sanam's POV

"Do you mind if I sit here?" He asked and I looked up to find HIM. OMG! He wanted to sit with me. This man standing just before me could easily pass of as a woman's ultimate fantasy. He was well-built, probably hiding a couple of packs beneath the sexy white shirt he wore. Even white could look sexy if he wore it. Chuck white, even grey would, and I personally hate grey. Do not ask me why. I just do.

"Ya sure..." I agreed, as calmly as I could, internally I was hyperventilating.

I noticed him first thing when I entered this place, carrying my food up the stairs. One drawback cum blessing of Taco Bell is that this place doesn't have waiters. So, A. When you have a hot, chivalrous date with you, you don't require a waiter and there isn't any disturbance. B. For unfortunate chicks like me, who came in single, it was a pain in the a**.

I noticed him sitting in a corner gorging on a Chalupa. Wish he would gorge me instead. I haven't been with a guy in like a month and for a young girl in her twenties who knows she is sexy and appealing (Nah, humility was never my virtue) being single for long is hard, no, not THAT hard, like, hard, difficult, type of hard.

He was as hot as burning coal and I immediately felt myself getting wet. God save me.

I sat sideways not looking towards him not wanting to worsen my situation, crossing my legs. This was the most comfortable position I had ever known. It made you seem all business like and charming at the same time.

I had ordered a Burrito for a change. I hate eating the same thing again and again. When you have a variety of things on the menu, why not try? Same goes with anything in life. You need variety and marriage being one of the fundamentals of constancy, no surprises that I don't approve of it, is there?

I licked the sauce; I simply LOVED the sauce in here, especially the orange one, neither too spicy nor too bland. Right in between the two. Then, put it in my mouth savouring its taste. My dirty mind added in, what if I could have HIM for dinner? Shut up! I did not come here to feed your gutter thoughts! I screamed.

And, then he himself had to come and ask if I would mind his company. Oh, yes. I would. Most definitely. But not in the manner he thought.

He sat down on the chair next to me instead of the one opposite me. I urged myself to continue breathing. And of course, finish that thing and leave from this place.

Closer still, I observed he used a lot of perfume. Not the I would kill you with my scent' type but the You will die for my scent' kind. I wish if I could smell him, put my arms around his taut shoulders, nuzzle his well shaven cheek and inhale in that brilliant perfume. Alas!

His eyes were dark, he stared at me as if he could eat me up. Did he? I wonder.

"You have sauce smeared near your lips." His gorgeous mouth formed the words. I could hardly comprehend what he said. I was too busy fantasizing how it would be if those lips moved on mine. They were so kissable!

From nowhere, he moved closer to me. The movement alerted my senses as I stiffened.

He came closer still not discouraged by my lack of interest, rather, lack of display of interest. He came close enough for me to smell his perfume clearly. My head swam. I could feel his breath on me as his nose touched mine. I gasped.

I knew he was going to kiss me and closed my eyes in anticipation. My lips slightly parted. His lips touched my face just above my lips. I felt something wet and I realised he was licking the sauce from there with his tongue. The action was so sensuous and tender, that I lost completely. I would have collapsed if he hadn't chosen that bright moment to hold me in his arms and pull me closer.

Soon enough, his lips touched mine and I felt fire! Initially, they moved slowly on mine, trying to make me feel more comfortable. As I responded, his lips became more demanding, trying to get me open up to him. His tongue ran over my lips as I gasped, and he inserted his tongue into my mouth. Our tongues fought for dominance as I found my hands move up his broad chest, up around his neck and clasp his soft hair.

After what seemed like eternity, we broke apart catching our breaths.

I looked up at him, his eyes had darkened considerably.

"Aahil" He said huskily.

"Sanam" I replied feeling meek and small.

"Do you want to finish your Burrito and then invite me to your place?" He asked teasing me.

I laughed.

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THE END.

Note: Taco Bell is an AMAZING place to go have Mexican food. Do not shy away thinking its a PDA haunt. šŸ˜† This is just my imagination.

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Lovenarbhi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Najma I am loving your imagination girl. Its just too good to be true OS. Thanks for cheering us upšŸ¤—
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Originally posted by: Sukanya...

Najma I am loving your imagination girl. Its just too good to be true OS. Thanks for cheering us upšŸ¤—


AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks Suku!!!! ā¤ļø Well, I posted it in another Forum. Made it SaHil. Thought was the need of the hour. I am still a new writer here, and really look forward to the fewest of the few reviews I get! Thanks!
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Originally posted by: najma123


AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks Suku!!!! ā¤ļø Well, I posted it in another Forum. Made it SaHil. Thought was the need of the hour. I am still a new writer here, and really look forward to the fewest of the few reviews I get! Thanks!


Naj new or old you have got flair and style, keep it up !!
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Hey that was so sexsy well written
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This was much needed today ;) great job girl!!!
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This was so perfect for reading after what we saw in today's episode!
My God, woman!!! You are one fine writer ā¤ļøšŸ‘šŸ¼

I absolutely loved it! The teasing, the excitement and lust! Damn... It was really great!

I loved how Sanam was this "I know what I want and I'll get it no matter what" - kind of woman. And Aahil was of course in his right element. Hot and brooding.

I loved this part. It really made me smirk.

" I looked up at him, his eyes had darkened considerably.

"Aahil" He said huskily.

"Sanam" I replied feeling meek and small. "


Great Job, Naj! ā¤ļø
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I used to be crazy about Taco Bell but now I'm not
But now I'll look at Taco Bell differently
In a better way :)
Great job
Ended too soon
Hopefully you add another part
I don't think I've read your other work before but I'll have to check it out now. Thanks
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Originally posted by: Raingoddess

This was much needed today ;) great job girl!!!

Thanks Esha! I thought so too. šŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: mahwash22

This was so perfect for reading after what we saw in today's episode!

My God, woman!!! You are one fine writer ā¤ļøšŸ‘šŸ¼

I absolutely loved it! The teasing, the excitement and lust! Damn... It was really great!

I loved how Sanam was this "I know what I want and I'll get it no matter what" - kind of woman. And Aahil was of course in his right element. Hot and brooding.

I loved this part. It really made me smirk.

" I looked up at him, his eyes had darkened considerably.

"Aahil" He said huskily.

"Sanam" I replied feeling meek and small. "


Great Job, Naj! ā¤ļø

Thanks Mahwash! 😳
I acrually like such people. Women who know what they want and get it.
I am glad you liked the ending. Very abrupt but continuous right?

I wrote some others too:


Hope you'll tell me how they are. 😳


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