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StonerGirL

@StonerGirL

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

NO BLOODDDYYY WAYYY!!!!!! PLZZZ CONTINUE!!!!! NOOOWWW!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!! THEIR FRIENDSHIP IS FRRREEEAAAKKKIIINNN ADORABLE!!! AND SO IS THEIRS WITH ZAK!! PLZZZ DNT MAKE HIM THE THIRD WHEEL!!!!!

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Another story by you!

It's so adorable...had me smiling and laughing all along!

Please update soon... 😃

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Omg..!!
I cant express how happy I am..!!
Its so gud to hav u back..!!
Good days r back..😉
it is such an awesome story yr..
I love d idea..
Asad nd zoya are such cute crazy ppl here..
this is so very interesting..
thanks for coming back..:*
Update soonish..:*

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

It's awesome loved it

Asya were amazing

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for updates

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Hello there... So gud to hv u back...

U hvnt updt epilogue of ''destinys...
Still waiting for it...
It was my fvrt story...

And loved it.. SCU a nice story it us..
Awesomely written..
Luking frwrd for upcoming updt..
Continue soon...

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

will read soon!! busy with exams!! Welcome back home!!

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Thanks for PM.

It was so Good to SEE YOU AGAIN.😊

It was Awesome FF.😊

All the Four Parts were so interestingly explained.😊

In Prologue about the Diary Part,that Zoya gave herd Diary to Asad(KSG) for lost it,it was so nice.😊

In Ch-1 maths work part and Mango tree Part which Zoya will fall and Asad(KSG) became angry on her recklessness,it was so nicely explained.😊

In Ch-2,Zoya said sorry to Asad(KSg) and throwing Stones part was so nice.

In Ch-3.Zoya foot was hits by running speedily and Asad(KSG) came to her,it was so nice.😊

In ch-4,ASYA(KABHi) college part,Asad(KSG) was injured because of saving a Girl from harassment,it was so nice.😊

ASYA(KABHi) conversation was so nice,Zak thinks that Zoya was loving Asad(KSG),it was very interesting,I think He will make ASYA(KABHi) to realize their Love.

Please Continue soon and PM TO ME,I am waiting here.

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry.

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BurstingBubble

@BurstingBubble

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Reserved !
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Unreserved !
A Prologue and 4 chapters... This was a pleasant surprise !

This fiction is adorable !

The chase along the beach side was lovely .

And does that Diary have a part to play somewhere in the future?

The inevitable truth was that she knew she couldn't bear to lose Asad. He was her best friend and she didn't know what she would do without him.

For a minute, she closed her eyes and tried to imagine a life without Asad. Darkness... Nothing else. There would be no life without him, she was sure.

She tried to imagine what she would feel if she lost Asad. Utter suffocating loneliness. Loved these lines. ❤️

How do you manage to write so amazingly ? It feels as though I'm seeing the incidences happen in front of my eyes !

Zoya's eyes widened in annoyance as she saw that he had scribbled "Asad Ahmed Khan is the best" in various fonts all over the page. LOL Asad's cute!😆

Sneaking to the canteen and sharing a Cornetto ... How Adorable !

That tree climbing part was amazing as well.
His care for her *sigh*

Asad doesn't seem to be as selfish as he appears to Zoya. Perhaps there's more to him.

Their bickering is fun to read !

And that childhood incident was soo cute !

"...there's something very special about your friendship that one doesn't come across every day." Do I need to say more when Zak has said it all ?😳 Nonetheless Asad and Zoya's friendship is sooo endearing !

Zak seems to be a nice fellow but I don't want him to come in between AsYa !

Loved the chapters ❤️

Edited by BurstingBubble - 10 years ago