SeHan SS : Broken hope... *Epilogue on page 54* (completed) - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

367

Views

29.8k

Users

32

Likes

293

Frequent Posters

Asshi... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Mus@

Amazing, captivating story ❤️ ❤️ ❤️


and sorry for complaining but the updates are seriously short, they're finished in a second and than u r left wanting for more😭.

really love the way u have started the story👏⭐️

I am just in love with Sehan so I was specifically looking through the forum for Sehan's FF's or OS and luckily I got ur's and it's absoutely great 😃

eagerly waiting for ur next update. 😃😊
plz update soon :D


thank you so much dear
no worries about complains even I noticed it but am extremely busy with school right now will surely try to make them big

thanks again! Yeah will try to update soon and this time long one promise😊
Asshi... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: nilusoni

very nice part

thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
sorry for late commenting

thanks dear!😊
Your welcome!
No problem sweety, I understand😊
Mus@ thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#73
I am soo sorry, I didn't knew, but thanks a lot dear 😃 for taking it in a good way.

And compliments to u dear that with school ( & it's pressure) u r still able to write such amazing story.

Sure dear, will be waiting for ur next update, eagerly. ❤️
Asshi... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Mus@

I am soo sorry, I didn't knew, but thanks a lot dear 😃 for taking it in a good way.

And compliments to u dear that with school ( & it's pressure) u r still able to write such amazing story.

Sure dear, will be waiting for ur next update, eagerly. ❤️

oh sweeto don't be sorry yar! It is of no problem because as a reader I understand we want long updates so no problem I do understand!
Awww thanks a lot dear I hope I will be up to your expectations in future too
Asshi... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#75


Banner credit to -chamkilli-


Chapter 3 - Thoughts

Seher looked at the photo with itching heart.

"I am here! In Bhopal! Please, show me the way to what to do now?"

She let the tears fall but quickly wiped them away and hide the frame as she heared the door knock

"Come in!"Seher said after controlling herself, she so wished to bash the person who disturbed her privacy

Rehan entered the room and find Seher back facing him but he could easily see that she is adjusting herself as if hiding something. He was going to ignore it and speak when he find her sniffing before turning towards him

Seher was angry on the person who came and didn't even speak, she was going to lash on him when she saw Rehan standing there and surprisingly her anger melt in seconds and a smirk appeared on her face

"Ohh look who is here?"Seher said teasingly, standing on her feet

Rehan lowered his gaze, gulping his saliva.

"I brought your iPhone! It is repaired, here!"Rehan said giving her, her iPhone

Seher looked at his extending hand, holding her iPhone, she raised her eyebrow as smirked played on her lips. Surprising Rehan to core she extend her hand to take it while Rehan thought she is going to taunt her badly but if only he knew what is going in Seher mind!

Seher took the phone lightly and as soon Rehan hand her it, the phone fall and break into pieces, this time too badly, shocking Rehan

"Oppss!!! It breaks again!"Seher said faking sadness

Seher bend as Rehan looked in dazed. Seher took one piece of phone and turning it up and down, looked it

"I don't think, it can be mended now! It's broken, badly"Seher said standing straight

"why did you do this?"Rehan asked still in shock

"Hisab barabar!"Seher said satisfied but seeing Rehan confused face she continued "Everything is equal now! You got what you did!"

Rehan understood her meaning as she point towards broken phone, he was about to say something when a servant came

"Ma'am, Begum Sahiba is calling you for dinner!"Servant said

Seher noded and giving Rehan one last glance walked behind servant

Rehan bend and took the broken phone

"looking like she was really impatient to take revenge!"Rehan coment with a smile

"exactly! Revenge, is what she can't forget!"Rehan looked up to see Amanat standing on the door

"I hope you are not hurt by her behaviour!"Amanat said

"Nope!"

Rehan smiled at him as he gave him a huge grin
.

"so did you like my house?"Tanveer asked with a huge smile

"yes! It's so big and awesome! Also precious!"Amanat said on Seher behalf

Tanveer smiled more widely and was going to say something when Seher words wiped her smile

"and that's what attracts evil! Right?"Seher said looking in Tanveer eyes

"Ahh! Yeah! And tell me how come you are here? I mean why any special reason?"Tanveer said carefully absorbing Seher reaction

Seher frozed. The question bring some old memories

"yes, actually I..."Seher stopped as she remember a warning

while Tanveer looked on curiously

"no, No! I cannot believe in anyone in this city! The mistake that they did, I will not do that!"Seher thought

"actually Begum Sahiba, I came for some important deal!"Seher replied after composing herself

Tanveer have a sigh of relief as she hmmmed

"acha begum sahiba mai apne room mai jaty hun! Little tired!"Seher said without smile

Tanveer noded with a fake smile while Seher stood up. Seher gave Rehan a glance and walked across him

Rehan turned to see her retreating figure and thought

"you are right, Seher! This precious things really attract evils!"Rehan thought with a grim smile

"I should be careful about this girl! According to what I heared, she poked her nose in other things a lot! And here it seems something amiss about her too!"Tanveer thought

Amanat looked at Seher retreating figure and then at Rehan who also turned to see her and seemed to be thoughtfull and smiling too though her smile is grimed it arose suspicion in him, he then tilted his head to look at Tanveer who also seemed to be in deep thoughts and is rising her eyebrow, frowning Amanaat

"what's hapening here? Everything, everyone seems like a jigsaw puzzle! Oh, my favourite game, but will I be able to solve this live puzzle?"Amanat thought while rubbing his temple

.

Seher leaned on bed board, closing her eyes

"Never believe in anyone, never ever! You cannot know who is the real person behind a sweet facade! Mostly, the sweet person only stab you back, She did the same mistake of believing wrong person and fell hard, but you will not do this remember!"The voice echoed in her ears as she remained there with her eyes closed

"she told to never believe anyone and that everyone has hidden personality and if it is so then whom to believe and what to do? Ya Allah, show me the way!"Seher expressed her dilemma and prayed

.

"what is bothering her? Why is so shaken? Why doesn't she believe anyone and is so rude? And why was she crying at that time?"Rehan asked himself pacing the room

He remembered how she was adjusting herself which seemed to be wiping tears and then sniffed. He remembered her expressions in hall when she was talking to Tanveer and he feel like there is something bothering her

"do I know the answers?"Rehan thought suddenly but then brushed off that thought thinking it to be silly

*********

is it long guys??? I think no, but then i don't know too yea!
Am extremely sorry guys but I will be not able to update soon as my internet is gonna end soon and I guess am not gonna get it soon, so sorry guys
suni_104 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Seher broken the i-phone its was repaired
Rehaan going to find what wrong with her
Thanks for pm
Devakshilover thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#77
mujhe ye update kuch samajh nahi aya?? was it a flashback?
Az07 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Something is really wrong with seher! I am sure it's something very painful. As amanat said its a missing puzzle as of the whole thing now. Hope rehan finds out soon.
Asshi... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: ankiecool

mujhe ye update kuch samajh nahi aya?? was it a flashback?

tmhe kya smjh nhy aya? Tell me i will help but no it's not flashback it's happening in present!
Just the lines in red are the words that Seher remember and it is said to that a voice echoed in her ears and in next line also seher said that she told me
tell me the particular part that you didn't understood i'll try to clear confusions😊
SprinklesOfLove thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Okay! I wanna know what the hell is wrong with Seher right now I'm in the same situation as Rehaan

I didnt get the phone breaking thing! Why did she break HER phone? So that Rehaan could fix it again? Really confused. What revenge would she get by breaking her won phone?
Edited by SprinklesOfLove - 10 years ago

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima

6 months ago

AsYa Valentine Week SS {Completed}

Rose Day – A Fragrant Beginning The sun had barely risen over Bhopal, painting the sky in shades of pink and gold, when Zoya Farooqui burst into...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

4 years ago

AsYa FF ~ •||Halala||• {completed} AsYa FF ~ •||Halala||• {completed}

[NOCOPY] A/N: Don't be offensive by name, use of religion or story, it is just a reason awareness or treatment of Women. Nothing Personal. I do...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".