AyRa OS: I Will Be Back

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A/N: I always hated how Ayaan was butchered during Mukaddar Ka Khel n during his exit. I wished dat Ayaan wud have told Humeira dat he will be back before leaving d house. So, I have written dis OS on AyRa on wat I actually wanted to happen. In dis story, AsYa r married in their 3rd attempt. So, no stupid Mukaddar Ka Khel. I can't digest Asad, Ayaan, Zoya, Nikhat, Badi Bi n other characters butchered at time. In dis story, Tanveer was sent to jail wen she was exposed to everyone. Dunno, why no one threw her in jail for all her crimes. So, in dis OS AsYa r married n they started calling each other by their 1st names after Tanveer was exposed. Also, after Tanveer was exposed Zoya started working as an IT engineer in another company as she wanted to be independent. If u r a AyRa fan then take a look n if u r not a AyRa then also take a look😆😊.

AyRa OS: I Will Be Back

Ayaan was packing his bags in frustration. He was angry wid his abbu for deciding to bring his badi ammi in d house. He came in d hall wid his luggage where Shirin was also standing wid her luggage.

"We both r leaving d house cuz Dilshad is coming to live," said Shirin.

"U both cannot leave d house," said Rashid.

"Wats left for us in dis house?" asked Ayaan angrily, "Ammi, lets go."

Scene shifts to KV. Asad was at Delhi for some work. Like Asad, Zoya too does not wanted Dilshad to go n live wid a man who has left her n her children for another woman(I wished cvs showed Zoya in dis way instead of making her dumb n convincing Dilshad to go after saying some stupid dialogues of love n marriage. Cvs made her a girl widout self-respect). Wen Dilshad came in d halls wid her luggage, she did not said dis openly to Asad but told her to think before living d house where she found a lots of love. Zoya had emotionally blackmailed her dat if she leaves then how will Asad n she live widout her. Zoya finally managed to make Dilshad understand not to take a step due to someone's emotional blackmail who did not cared for her n their kids wen they were living in a very poor condition. Dilshad understood wat Zoya meant n realized dat she sud not go to dat man again who gave her nothing but pain n humiliations. Zoya smiled as she succeeded in convincing her not to leave. Dilshad hugged Zoya n she hugged her back.

Scene shifts back to SM. As Ayaan n Shirin reached d door, Shirin recalled all her good moments wid Rashid n how he told her dat he loves her. She stops n runs back to Rashid shockingly Ayaan n others. She clutched on to his hand.

"Ammi, why u went there?" asked Ayaan.

"Ayaan, I cannot leave Rashid n dis house. I love him n he too loves me. He has always been wid me n supported our relation. He has sacrificed everything for our happiness. I can't leave Rashid as I love him very much," replied Shirin emotionally.

"Ammi, he does not loves anyone but only himself. He 1st left badi ammi for u and now he is leving for badi ammi. U want to come wid me but u r not in ur senses," said Ayaan.

"No Ayaan, I can't leave him," said Shirin.

Ayaan grabbed her hand n said, "Ammi, lets go."

"Sirin won't go anywhere. If u want to go then u can go," said Rashid.

Rashid lets Ayaan's hand go off Shirin's hand wid a jerk.

"I feel disgusted n ashamed to be ur son. I can't believe dat I spent so many years wid a man like u," said Ayaan wid disgust.

All r tensed.

"Ammi, r u cumn wid me?" asked Ayaan.

Shirin stood silent n he got his answer.

"I am leaving d house. I just pray to Allah dat he never makes me like u. Finally, u have ruined ur 2nd son's life. I will leave dis house n start a new life," said Ayaan angrily.

As he was abt to go, he lukd at Humeira.

"Humeira, I want to talk to u in alone," said Ayaan.

Ayaan went out of d house followed by Humeira.

"Ayaan, how can leave like dis? How can u leave me n go?" asked Humeira.

"I am not leaving u, Humeira," replied Ayaan, "I can't break my promise dat I made to u. I love you a lot. I can't imagine my life widout u. U still have ur college n later ur career. I will go n work hard to bcum sumthn on my own. I will be back wen I bcum sumthn. U focus on ur studies so dat u also make a career of ur choice. Right now, I have to go. We will be in touch wid each other thru calls, texts, Skype n other social networking sites."

"I am very happy Ayaan dat u loves me a lot. I know wat u r going thru now. I can understand ur feelings, Ayaan. If dis is wat u want then u sud go n prove urself by doing sumthn on ur own. We will be in touch wid each other. I will wait for u," said Humeira.

"I am very happy dat u understand me, Humeira," said Ayaan.

"Ayaan," said Humeira as she broke into tears n hugged him.

He too hugged her back wid tears falling 4m his eyes. AyRa music played in d bg. They broke d hug. Ayaan wiped her tears n then he wiped his own tears. Wid a heavy, he called a taxi n went inside. He waved goodbye to her. She stood there till d taxi was out of sight.

Wen Dilshad did not came till evening, Rashid got tensed. He tried to call her many times but she always disconnected it.

In d evening, Asad had returned n saw Dilshad in d house.

"I am very happy dat u did not go to dat man," said Asad.

"1st u and then Zoya made me realize dat I sud not got dat man who was always d reason of my pains n humiliations. I can't lose my self-respect," said Dilshad.

Asad got happy as she said dat. Just then, Zoya came to d hall lukn tensed.

"Zoya, why r u lukn tensed?" asked Asad.

"Asad, Humeira just called me n told me dat Ayaan left d house cuz his abbu decided to bring ammi to his house," replied Zoya teln him wat all Humeira told her abt d incident.

Asad n Dilshad r shocked.

"Dis can't happen. I wish I had known then I wud have stopped Ayaan," said Dilshad.

"Ammi, its not urs but dat man's fault," said Zoya.

Dilshad talked wid Ayaan teln him to go back to his back n dat she has changed her decision. But Ayaan refused saying dat he has no problem wid her but wid Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan who only knows how to use people for his benefits.

Wen Rashid called Dilshad again, she told him dat she cannot lose her self-respect by cumn back to a man like him. She told him dat cuz of him, he lost his another son also as he too came to know his real face. Asad n Zoya got happy at d way she talked to Rashid.

Ayaan lived at a hotel for 2 days n then left for London. He was always in touch wid Humeira. They wud talk wid each other for a long time on their cells.

On reaching London, Ayaan called Humeira.

"Hello," said Humeira answering his call.

"I have reached London," said Ayaan.

"Dats nice," said Humeira.

"Right now, I am leaving at a friend's house," said Ayaan.

"Wat r u planning to do, Ayaan?" asked Humeira.

"I will look for a job for now," replied Ayaan.

"All d best," said Humeira.

"Thank u," said Ayaan.

"I love u," said Humeira.

"I love u too," said Ayaan n hung up.

Humeira informed everyone dat Ayaan is in London. All got relieved. Ayaan even had a video-chat wid AsYa. AsYa wished him all d best for finding a job.

Soon, Ayaan got a job at a big music academy where he got job of teaching music to students along wid some instruments. He called Humeira on reaching home.

"Humeira, I got a job at a big music academy," said Ayaan happily.

"Congratulations Ayaan," said Humeira happily.

"Its all due to ur love for me dat I got dis job," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Ayaan, u r saying too much now," said Humeira wid a laugh.

"I am just d truth, Humeira," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Okay, do ur job well," said Humeira wid a smile.

"Okay," said Ayaan wid a smile n hung up.

While doing job, Ayaan started working to build his own music class. Some of his friends helped him in starting his music class. Soon, students started cumn in. As days n months passed by, Ayaan's music class started getn famous n his business started flourishing. Ayaan had employed some people to help him run his business.

A year later, he managed to set-up a music academy himself. Due to his hard work n efforts, he was getn more successful in his business. Soon he left his job n started giving more time to his music academy which he named as AyRa Music Academy. AyRa was d mixture of his n Humeira's name(Ayaan+Humeira= AyRa).

"Ayaan, I am so happy dat u proved urself n made ur own identity," said Humeira happily.

"I miss you a lot, Humeira," said Ayaan.

"Even I miss u too, Ayaan," said Humeira, "Everyone here misses you a lot."

"I will come back soon," said Ayaan.

"We all will wait for u," said Humeira.

Back in Bhopal, a lot happened in a year. GaZia's crimes were exposed to everyone due to AsYa again investing abt Gudiya Factory issue n mission to find Zoya's abbu. GaZia were sent to jail for their crimes. Gaffur got happy to know dat Zoya was his daughter but Zoya had nothing to do wid him for all d pain he caused to Asad's family n how he supported Razia in killing her ammi. Rashid also went to jail for committing arson on someone else's factory. Dat factory was none other than d factory of Zoya's khala n khalu who r d parents of her cousin brother Haider. Dilshad did not forgave Rashid cuz he cheated her wid Shirin even before Gudiya Factory issue n cuz of him burning dat factory, an innocent child became an orphan. Haider's father Sikandar cud not bear d shock n died while Haider's mother Nazneen committed suicide. AsYa stated investing again wen Zoya got her memory of her childhood back. Wen d Gudiya Factory fire happened, she had lost her memory of her initial 7 years before dat incident. She used to get recurring dreams of Gudiya Factory where she saw her ammi lying down dead. She also saw Rashid burning d factory. Due to shock of seeing her ammi dead n due to d fire spreading, Zoya had fainted n hit her head hard o d floor. She told Asad n Dilshad everything n they decided to investigate again. They had come to know 4m Badi Bi dat how Razia confessed to her abt killing Zoya's ammi n how she put her in an orphange. Haider who had come to take revenge on GaZia helped AsYa in d mission. Haider was happy to get his Chutki back. He lovingly called Zoya as Chutki in their childhood. Haider was now a successful businessman 4m Dubai. Even Shirin started hating Rashid as he caused a child to bcum orphan n cheated Dilshad wid her. Asad had forgiven Shirin as she was less at fault. Dilshad n Shirin became friends. Only Gaffur n Rashid were ashamed of their misdeeds. They gave all their properties to everyone in d house. Now, Siddiqui Constructions was being run by Najma, Nikhat n Nuzhat, Zoya n Humeira. Zoya n Humeira were happy to know dat both of them r sisters. They decided to run SC 2gthr. After Humeira completed her graduation, she joined SC along wid Zoya. Zoya had quit her job as an IT engineer 4m d company where she started working after she got reunited wid Asad wen Tanveer was exposed. She wanted to be independent. But after Gaffur, Razia n Rashid went to jail, all convinced her to run SC along wid other girls n she agreed. All started living in KV now. All d girls have changed their dressing to modern(It actually happened in d show where Nikhat became modern which was shown in d 2nd last epi of QH1. So, all girls may have bcum modern).

One night, Ayaan called Humeira.

"Hello," said Humeira.

"Humeira, I will come to Bhopal after 2 days," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Really?" asked Humeira happily.

"Yes," replied Ayaan happily.

"Wat abt ur business?" asked Humeira.

"I have start expanding my business in Bhopal 2 months ago n it will soon be ready. Then I will run business 4m Bhopal only," replied Ayaan.

"Dats very nice, Ayaan," said Humeira happily.

"I can't wait for d day wen we will always live 2gthr," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Me too," said Humeira wid a smile.

"I miss everyone," said Ayaan.

"Everyone is missing u too," said Humeira.

"Okay good night. Talk 2 u l8r," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Good night," said Humeira wid a smile n hung up.

Before getn on d plane d next evening, Ayaan called Humeira on video-calling thru his cell. Humeira received his video call. Both were very happy to see each other.

"Ayaan," said Humeira happily.

"Humeira, as u can clearly see dat I am sitting at d air-port. My flight is in after some time," said Ayaan happily.

"Yaa, I can see dat. So, u will reach Bhopal 2mrw morning," said Humeira.

"Yaa," said Ayaan.

"I am so happy, Ayaan. I can't wait to meet u after a year," said Humeira wid a smile.

"I also can't wait to meet u," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"I love u so much," said Humeira happily kissing him thru d screen.

"Wen I will return then we can do it live," said Ayaan wid a laugh.

"Shut up, u besharam," said Humeira annoyingly.

"U started it," said Ayaan wid a laugh n kissed her back thru d screen.

Humeira blushed as he did it.

"Well, my flight will arrive now. Talk to u l8r," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Happy Journey," said Humeira wid a smile.

"Thanks," said Ayaan wid a smile n hung up.

2 days later, Ayaan finally came back. Everyone especially Humeira got very happy seeing him back. Ayaan hugged everyone happily. He was more disgusted to know d crimes his father did. He accepted Dilshad wholeheartedly as his badi ammi.

After Ayaan freshened up, he came to Humeira's room.

"Humeira," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Ayaan, u sud rest. U came 4m a long journey na," said Humeira.

"I can rest later," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"I can't believe dat u have finally returned, Ayaan," said Humeira wid a smile.

"I had told u na dat I will be back. And here I am," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"I am so proud of u, Ayaan," said Humeira wid a smile, "U have finally stood on ur own feet n proved to everyone dat u r capable of being so successful."

"Its cuz of d strength of ur n other family members' love dat I have bcum successful in life," said Ayaan wid a smile, "But..."

"But wat?" asked Humeira.

"But all these success r nothing widout u," replied Ayaan wid a smile.

Humeira smiled n hugged him happily. He too hugged her back happily. AyRa music played in d bg. They broke d hug. Ayaan came closer to her n she went back. He came more forward. She went backward till she hit d wall. He came closer to her face. She blushed seeing him so close. Their lips touched 2gthr n they kissed each other. It was slow at 1st but it went passionate as if they r pouring all their emotions n love in d kiss.

"I told u abt live kiss at d air-port," said Ayaan wid a smirk.

Humeira hits his arm playfully.

"I love u Humeira," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"I love u too, Ayaan," said Humeira wid a smile.


So, tell me how was it?😃



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the OS!
Humeira and Ayaan ❤️
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It was so beautiful
I miss my AyRa so much!
I wish it happens exactly like this in the show!!
AyRa 😭
A made for each other couple who never became one!!! 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely os dear
I too prefer ayra more even though haira too is a hot couple. Ayaan's exit was forced as vm was planning to quit the show for his health & later when he was ready to re enter gul was busy to kill asya & create a leap.
Ayaan is much better character than asad. I would have supported zoyaan if they showed there nikkah happening properly not like the bullshit they showed. Ayaan has understood zoya & had complete trust in her & have supported her many times where asad who claimed to love zoya never did. I am happy that there was no MKK track in ur story. Indeed that track spoiled many characters like Ayaan, zoya, badi bi, NikhAt, najma. Also gul doomed QH. Happy to see all women r independent & with loads of self respect.
Haider is also a good character. Infact only character which was properly developed & completed by cvs. But after his entry cvs butchered humeira's character. I would have been happy if haider paired with NikhAt or najma than Humeira. Humeira loved Ayaan from childhood & forgetting him & sleeping with haider b4 nikkah didn't go with her character.
Do write cute os like this dear.
Also one with Sehan too. Please!
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Awesome os dear thanks for yhe pm
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Heyy...Juhi..
Thanx for the P.M..
Well a first AYRA O.S for me and i liked it...
I just blame that Zoyaan track...which was suppose to be the original plot of the story...they so wanted to get that out of their system...they did that and ruined it all...they even tried that so called brothers clash for a girl in Q.H.2 and even in their new show HUMSAFARS...
But as you said...and i feel this was supposed to be a proper closure for Ayaan...even if he was leaving the house for some reasons...
Well written part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice OS
Liked the way u wrote
Hope they showed something like that in QH.
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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When I first read the title I rubbed my sleepy eyes and re read it..
U know,I'd been waiiiting for an os on ayra..sigh!
I'd been pestering one of my friend to write an os on ayra..but she' z been busy..

I alwaysss loved ayra as a couple...I think their luv story was exceptionally beautiful
But alas the cvs destroyed their love story..n even Humeriah's character..I mean the girl loved
Ayaan since childhood n soo easily her entire character gets butchered n She'z suddenly head over heels in luv with Haider..it never made sense to me

Ayaan was so damn cute here...the promises and the teasing...
N humeriah always supporting Ayaan 😳
Awesome blossom os

Loveeeddd it!...a lot se bhi zyaada lot..
Do write more on ayra..maybe some romantic,cute moments..

Lol I know I started blabbering but can't help..I'd been waiting for an os on ayra since ages 😳

Love
Sara
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Posted: 10 years ago
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well written...

nice



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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved this.. Wish we couldve seen this in QH1

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