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Posted: 10 years ago
Salaam...
well i m sorry i had promised to post Epilogue on Valentines Day...
but i was busy in some personal matters...
now i got the time so will update in a day or 2...
hope u dont mind...
Ashii...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Epilogue chahieye to be ready for extraaa long comments haan..
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thanks 4 understanding Ammu 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
heenu my 3 res...
phr ur turn...
phe new page...
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chal new page aa gya...
3 res okay na...
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Separation... No Moreee



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Epilogue:

AsYa were living in KV from last year but the visited SM daily so their other family members can also enjoy Asya n Aman's childhood... Zoya was asking Asad to take her to Mannat but he refused her bcox he was renovating their room... Asad wanted to gift her something unique after all their 5th wedding anniversary was on the way...
One Fine Evening...
Asad came back home and found Zoya in the kitchen... he looked around for his kids but they were nowhere to seen... he came beside Zoya and loosened his tie...
Asad: Zoe...
Zoya: hmm... she was busy in preparing dinner...
Asad: where are the kids...?
Zoya: Asya is in study... actually she is preparing her 1st speech...
Asad: or Aman??? He said coming behind her...
Zoya: wo Rabert k sath... yeh kya kar rahy hain app???
Asad was asking about the kids' bcox he didn't want to do hanky panky in front of them but when Zoya indirectly told him that they can share a moment... he hugged her from behind and dropped a kiss on her nape... Zoya closed her eyes as she felt his hot breath...
Zoya: Asaddd...
Asad: I missed you... he said pulling her closer...
Zoya: I missed you too... she turned and sneaked her arms around his neck...
Asad: so how about evening snacks... he winked at her...
Zoya: right now I m really busy... Aman or Rabert ko bhook lagi hai or...
Asad: main Ayan ko keh dunga wo Aman ko ghar ly jayega... he cupped her cheek and traced her lips with his thumb...
Zoya: oh really Mr. Khan... but Aman is here only...
Asad: kya??? Aman yahan hai... he immediately pulled apart like he was on fire...
Zoya: Allah Miyan... What's wrong with you Mr. Khan...? I m fed up by your rule... she said with a pout...
Asad: its not a rule Zoya... aisy bacho k samny... you know what I mean...
Zoya: kya bacho k samny... Asya study main hai or Aman uper Rabert k sath hai... she said resuming her cooking while Asad switched on the TV and sat there only so he can spend some time with his lovely wife...
Asad: I don't feel comfortable in their presence... he said flipping through the channels...
Zoya: you are just impossible... mere sameny bethny se acha hai app Asya ko company do... app EC to thy ab to DEC ho gaye ho...
Asad: DEC???
Zoya: Darpok & Emotionally Challenged... she smirked...
Asad: okay... no reply for now... I will show some action to you... is it okay???
Zoya: yeah sure hubby... will wait eagerly... she winked at her...
Ayan: action... kya Mona bacho k samney to apna Tom & Jerry play band karo...
Asad: haan Zoya... grow up... bachy kya sochengey...
Zoya: nahi Ayan wo actiona ka matlab kuch or hai... haina Asad... she tried to pull his leg...
Asad: main Asya ko dekh kar aata hoon... I think she needs my help... he ran from there...
Zoya n Ayan broke out in fits of laughter...
Ayan: well partner... bhai ko achy se handle kiya hua hai... good job haan...
Zoya: is Sher ko handle karna bas mjhy hi aata hai... she said giving him some snacks... while she took Aman n made him sit on the sofa n started feeding him with her own hands...
Ayan: Mona kya surprise dena hai bhai ko... he said while eating...
Zoya: is bar Asad ne grand surprise plan kiya hai... so I m just think about making some collages... well I thought about changing his wardrobe too...
Ayan: wardrobe???
Zoya: haan to... Asad ne kab se apny liye shopping nahi ki...
Ayan: mjhy laga app bhai ko good news type ka gift dogey...
Zoya: yeah... I was going... what??? Rabert are you serious???
Ayan: kuch galat thodi bol raha hoon...
Zoya: 3 bachy boht hain mjhy...
Ayan: haan to 3rd one k liye bol raha hoon...
Zoya: well if you forget then let me remind you... Asad Ahmad Khan is my 1st child... always prior to me...
Ayan: main nikalta hoon... warna abbu kahengy office se late ho gaya...
Ayan left while Zoya came in study with Aman but Asad n his princess Asya were not there... Zoya searched for them in the whole house but at last found them in the backyard where father-daughter were enjoying sudden rain...
Zoya: AAK ko to apni biwi ko bholny ki aadat hai... par Asya I didn't expect this from you... Zoya faked anger...
Asya: sorry mama... app Aman ko khila rahy thy na...
Zoya: hayeee meri beti kitni samjdar hai... ek dum baap pe gayi hai... always ready with excuses...


Asad: that why she is my princes... he bent n kissed her...
Aman: papa... he held his arms out so Asad can pick her up...
Asad: aww my champ... you know na papa loves you n mama a lot... he said picking her up and Aman nooded in yes...
Zoya: liar...
Asad: I said I will prove... have patience baby... he whispered in her ear...
Asya: mama come na... she dragged Zoya with her in the rain...
Asad too joined his ladies with Aman... they danced, laughed n played together...
13 February
Asad had completed his work at Mannat from last week just visiting again n again for final touches... Dilshad had arranged a party in SM... Asad wanted to celebrate with family members but Dilshad was adamant at her decision... Around 10 o'clock, Asad took Zoya with him while kids were left with Dilshad in SM only...
AsYa went for a long drive, Zoya was asking him about the surprise but he was not uttering a word... Zoya rsted her head on Asad's shoulder while he drove them to Mannat... both were cherishing their previous moments... no words were exchanged just the feel of togetherness was there...


AsYa reached Mannat... Asad being a gentleman opened the car door for her... she smiled at his chivalry... Zoya was about to enter when Asad scooped her in his arms...
Zoya: what's this Asad... main pehli bar nahi ja rahi... she said placing her arms around his neck...
Asad: I know Mrs. Khan but you are going to face your surprise... kahi apko chakar aa gaya to... so better you stay in safe hands... he winked at her while moving inside...
Zoya was amazed by seeing the hall... so graceful n elegant...


Zoya: it's beautiful Asad... mjhy laga tha app hamara room redecorate karny valy ho...
Asad: well my skills allow me to do a lot than you had thought... he winked at her...
Zoya: Allah Miyan... yeh Mannat aaty hi apko kya ho jata hai...


Asad: here you go... it's your kitchen where you can create a lot of mess...
Zoya: oh really Mr. Khan... let me remind you k you are the messy one in kitchen...
Asad: acha we will see... he made his way towards Aman's room...


Zoya: OMG... its so cute haan... or Asya ka room...
Asad: how can I forget my princess...?
AsYa entered in Asya's room...


Zoya: M.A... book shelf kyun Asad???
Asad: meri beti school jati hai...
Zoya: yeah... but she is just 4 Asad...
Asad: hmm but I have planned a lot na...
Zoya: okay... so where is our room... upstairs ya pehly vala...
Asad: apko kya lagta hai Mrs. Khan... he made his way towards their old room...


AsYa's old room was totally changed... there was a bed for AsYa of course, but now there were joint beds for Asya n Aman... that was just simple but a complete family room...
Zoya: Asad... don't you think yeh bed hum dono k liye chota hai...
Asad: nahi to... actually we can fix in Asya's bed too... you know I prefer my wifey under me...
Zoya: oh really Mr. Khan... what if I prefer over you??? She said pecking his lips...
Asad: I think we should go in our room...
Zoya: I thought it's our room...
Asad: am I mad??? Yeh room to weekends k liye hai... he made his way upstairs...
Zoya: you will get tired... I can walk from here Mr. Khan...
Asad: but I want you like this... specially till clock strikes 12...




AsYa entered in their room finally... Zoya was surprised to see The Taj Mahal on the wall behind the bed... tears brimmed in her eyes... her thoughts immediately went to the day of their Nikaah... she looked at Asad who nodded in yes...
On the left wall, there were pictures of AsYa... before n after marriage... On the right wall, there were pictures of their kids... Asya n Aman... their room was the perfect replica of their love...
Asad placed Zoya on the ground and went to lock the door... he came back to Zoya who was lost in the beauty of the room... Asad hugged her from behind and whispered...
Asad: Happy Anniversary Jaan...
Zoya: Happy Anniversary to you too baby... she turned around and sealed their lips...
AsYa were lost in the kiss... that was not their first time but they always felt like they explored each other for the first time...
Asad: so where's my gift... he demanded after breaking the kiss...
Zoya: jahan tak mjhy yaad hai... app ne kaha tha k apko AsYa or Aman k ilawa kuch nahi chahieye... but I have 2 gifts for you...
Asad: 2... how about I want a gift of my own choice... he picked her in his arms and came to the bed...
Zoya: well... ek gift yeh hai k my baby is going to do a hattrik... she said understanding his underlying meaning...
Asad: you are pregnant??? He said coming on top of her...
Zoya: nooo... abhi 3 hi kafi hain... she said rolling him down so she can came on top of her...
Asad: well I will be happy if you are... he said placing his hands on her waist...
Zoya: acha listen na... you are going to be the Businessman of the Year that too for the third time... she said excitedly...
Asad: so Mrs. Businessman of the Year... what's my other gift??? He said pecking her lips...
Zoya: 2nd gift... hmm how about me???
Asad: you are already mine...
Zoya: that's true...
Asad: it means you are just fulfilling the formality... no more special gifts???
Zoya: app ne apny gift k liye mjhy etna wait karaya... now it's my turn...
Asad: well you deserve a punishment... he rolled her so he can come on top of her...
Zoya: punishment accepted... she moved closer and decrease the distance between their lips...
After celebrating their 5th anniversary in their own way... they returned SM early morning and received a lot of wishes from their family members... After the breakfast, AsYa visit the Dargah with their kids to thank Almighty after they met on that Dargah only for the first time...
Party was going on when lights went off... A spot light fell on Asad... he came in the centre of the hall...
Asad: first of all thank you very much for your wishes... well I m not too good in words but I m here to thank to special persons... actually both are not in my family but they share a special bond with my family... the first one is Dr. Heena Sheikh who had saved my Zoya's n Asya's life in Kashmir... so heenu was the one told me that I became the father of a baby girl... I know some of you found me silly but my ammi n wife can understand me easily... I had invited her here but she was quite busy with her duty so she sends us her wishes n gift and I m thankful to her...
Asad came to Zoya n placed an arm on her shoulder...
Asad: the second one is Jas... she is such a darling... she is my first GF that too chosen by my wife only... actually she promised me to come here but nowadays she was busy in searching a bride for her brother... so my special persons are not here but the thing which I can do for them is a thank you... now I m going to dance with my beautiful wife... you guys can join us too... thank you...
Asad held his hand out and asked her for a dance... Zoya placed her hand in his hand...

Suno Na Sangemarmar
Ki Yeh Minaare
Kuch Bhi Nahi Hai
Aagge Tumhare
Aaj Se Dil Pe Mere
Raj Tumhara A A Aaa
Taj Tumhara
Asad turned her around so her back can touch his front...

Bin Tere Madham Madham
Bhi Chal Rahi Thi Dhadkan
Jab Se Mile Tum Humein
Achal Se Tere Bandhe
Dil Udd Raha Hai
Zoya turned to face him and cupped his cheek... her other hand was on his shoulder while he placed his hands on her waist...

Suna Na Aasmaano
Ke Yeh Sitare
Kuch Bhi Nahi Hai Aage Tumhare
Aaj Dil Pe Mere
Raj Tumhara
Taj Tumhara

Suno Na Sangemarmar
Ki Yeh Minaare
AsYa finished their dance with an RK pose and all clapped for them... Later they headed to cut the cake... Asad took Aman in his arms while Zoya n Asya stood beside him... they cut the cake n fed their kids n family members and last but not the least they fed each other...
Asad: so where's my gift Mrs. Khan... he asked her pulling her behind a piller...
Zoya: Asad we are in party or...
Asad: I m just asking about my gift only... did you expect something else bcox I dragged you here???
Zoya: my naughty hubby... gift chahieye kya???
Asad: haan to... anhi dena to bhi chaly ga... I will have my gift on my own... he said pulling her closer...
Zoya: abhi k liye gift sahi rahy ga... here you go... she said handling him a rectangular box...
Asad: what's this???
Zoya: open it na...
Asad opened and found 2 pairs of platinum chains with hearts daggling with them...


Asad: it's quite new and unique to me... but 2 hearts n 4 chains... I didn't get that...
Zoya: actually its for us n kids...
Asad: kesy???
Zoya broke the hearts and placed each broken heart in chains one by one...
Asad: dil todna koi app se seekhy...
Zoya: issy dil todna nahi... dil jodna kehty hain... she made him wear that chain...
Asad: but our souls are connected already... he too placed a chain around her neck...
Zoya: yeah... but it separates us from others na... now lets go... the other pair is for Asya n Aman...
Asad: but my gift???
Zoya: yeh gift hi to tha... or kal wo news bhi to di thi...
Asad: so mean Mrs. Khan yeh gift hum sab k liye tha... well no problem... I will have my gift on my own...
Saying so Asad attacked on her lips... Zoya was shocked bcox they were in party but when she realized that she is with Asad Ahmad Khan than she needs not to worry so she joined him and kissed him back...


Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes plzzz...
hit like n leave ur replies...
actually long replies for Epi 😳
Ashii...



Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Salaam...
hey lovely readers well i m here to thank all of you...
thank u sooo much guys...
with ur love n support i came to this point...
ur love n support encouraged me and my story comes to an end...
hope u guys are satisfied with the Epilogue...
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 4 jas, arzoo, amu, aroo, yumi, nilu, mags, mayur, hena, cinderella, asid, anopama, sasir, jillo, abi
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res ...
unres...
lovely cute last update fr this story...
n in the end no more separation...
wese hattrick wala dilog mast tha ... mene b wohi matlab liya tha fr a sec... bt thn i thought mjhe pata hoti phir... so...thought cancel 😛
wese Mr. Khan bade hote jarahe hai everyday now 😉
ab next wali start kr ...

Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Salaam Ashiii...😉
Thanx alot for the P.M & Spot'...😊
This was a wonderful & well deserved conclusion to a Beautiful story 👏 ⭐️
ASYA's time with their kids in rain... 😃
Spare me for saying this...but now-a-days when ever i read Zoya's dialogues in your stories...its like i can clearly imagine you speaking them instead of Zoya...by reading the way how you comment...😳
Asad sneaking a moment with his wife but she being smart easily oitwitted him...and then blamed him only saying he is DEC 😆
Ayaan & Zoya dicussing Babies that is little weird.. 😕
The whole party scene and ASYA's moments were very good... 😉
The Room's pics were also good... 😉
This time i knew the song also... 😛
But why was the pic of TajMahal black...being white only it looks breathtaking so was wondering... 😕
And Anyways Congrats you successfully completed you first story on...ASYA...👏
For the time being I wish that you write many many wonderful stories like this..😃
# And Yes Special mention to 'Jas' & Dr.Heena...for their Debut Special Appearance...👏
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago

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