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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you so much Readers for all of your love which you have showered on this story as well as writers, we both are highly obliged for all your love, support and commendable comments.😃

It encouraged us to maximize our efforts to write and write, Please keep encouraging and showering your love on us and our work 😊 and yes don't stop reading our story 😉





~Aditi And Srashti
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Posted: 10 years ago
Recap:



Asad and Zoya, who are now in love with each other deeply, are came back to Khan Villa from the Khan Farmhouse after settling all the arrangements. They come hand in hand as they don't want to leave this hand which is in their, till the whole life. Dilshad prayed to the God to let them live like this forever, like happily ever after.



But few months later, when Khan's shared a chuckling, teasing and full of life lunch together with each, Dilshad declared to go with Najma and Adil for completing her mannat and Ayaan for the mountaineering camp, leaving AsYa alone, expecting that the love birds will get another chance to spend love-able memories.



Accidentally, Zoya found some toys in the store room of Khan siblings childhood gifted by Rashid, their so called father and she obliviously got excited about it, but when she was playing one of Asad's toy he destroyed it in the rage at which Zoya tried to console him and in pain he tell her everything about Rashid and Khan sibling's childhood at which she console him and tackle him with love.



Zoya decided to surprise Asad and she exited from the Khan Villa to order the cake in haste and forgot her phone in the car. Whereas, Asad tried to call her again and again but he got worried when no one picked the call not at Khan Villa also. He immediately rushed out to look after her and found her in a bakery shop in between his track, he took a deep breath.


But when he was going to surprise her with his presence, he himself got a surprise when he noticed that Zoya was so comfortably talking to Rashid who has just helped her as she forgot her purse at home, but Asad who was so far mistaken it and took it as a BETRAYAL.



It hurt Asad a lot and broke him from inside he took Zoya wrong as she is with Rashid Ahmed Khan may be to destroy Asad and it pierced him.


When Zoya came back she lied that she was in parlor as she couldn't disclose her surprise and Asad took it wrong even more. He has now believed that his wife has betrayed him getting involve with Rashid and started hating her.


Zoya is also amused with Asad's weird and strange behavior but didn't realize it was on the levels of Misunderstanding.





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Edited by -Aditi. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello readers,
I hope you liked the part.
It was a bit painful but it was planned as it's

Just 3 more to go...

Hope you enjoyed.
Please do like and comment😳

-Srashti

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by AditiFantasy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very painful part
Well written
hope everything will be fine soon
Edited by enthusiastic - 10 years ago
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This was so emotional. . So many misunderstandings.. I wish they had talked about it..!
So much pain.. they love each other and yet cant truly understand what they want..!
Written very well.. update soon..:)
Edited by cutie15 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res😆😆
unres
very intense part Adu Srash
Mu kam hone ki bjaye aur bad gayi
dono ke lagta hai they cheat each other
Their monologues pain dialogues all were good
I like this song BDW😊
So this was d MU which brought them 2 present
where Zoe was leaving KV after Naj's wedding
I think climax is near cuz Asad use rokne aaya tha so means use sach pta chal gya hoga
but what about Zoe did she also found it but is leaving cuz she thinks there is no trust btw them
The lines in d end were just too good loved them😃
Good job girls 👏👏
see u in nxt part soon as Agu said updt jaldi degi who ab dekhten hai kitna sach hai yeh🤣
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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