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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: jas91

Aloo sab ache se likh ke explain kar ki tujhe kya lagta hai phir hi main kuch soch paungi theek hai 5 min. le aaraam se type kar


mjhe is story se bht hopes hai apple, ab tk sab usse like bhe kr raha hai, mjhe or new readers bhe mile hai n the way they r hoping, mjhe dar lag raha hai, wht if i ruined it by showing zoya falling for asad likr suddenly when she loved haider...but the thing is k haider is no more n also tht after getting hold on the diary she came face to face wd his feelings n now with a little more convo wd one more person Otherthan hammad eho knows about asad's love she will start falling for him considering his love and respect towards her..will people believe in such stuff..? i need confirmation because if later they will bash the track or insult me i won't be able to tolerate...i m so scard
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover


just a suggestion tht would peoples believe in falling in love for the second time.
u knw i can't change the story, it has to be d way i planned but i just want to knw tht would it be appreciated or people eill bash...


Bas itna hi janna hai😊

Well in my POV maine bhi toh same yahi kaha tha Aloo. Asad ka jitna hurt aur pain tune dikhaya tha uske baad i also felt yeh compromised love lagega cuz past main joh tune dikhaya u know Asad was so hurt broken but she being his bff was totally oblivious 2 all this. Uski bjaye Asad toh uske bina kahe sab jaan jata tha i know woh usse pyaar nahi karti thi but dosti wala pyaar bhi toh hota hai uska kya apna pyaar pake kya aap use bhol jaoge. this is what happened wid her she was so blind in her new found love & happiness ki she didn't noticed 4 a sec why Asad is so distant or is not behaving d same. Uska apna behaviour bhi kitna badal gaya tha joh Asad ne diary main likha tha. Based on this in my POV ab uska pyaar compromise lagega but that's my view jaruri nahi main sahi hun.

Btw 2nd love is not impossible it happens but at this stage here i think it will look forced ki Zoya guilt main aake & knowing she hurt Asad usse khush karne ke liye usse pyaar karne lage.

Remeber Haseena ki bate sun ke woh Asad ke kamre main shift ho gayi yeh baat uske dimag main pehle khud kyun nahi ayi jab tak kisi ne point out nahi kiya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover


mjhe is story se bht hopes hai apple, ab tk sab usse like bhe kr raha hai, mjhe or new readers bhe mile hai n the way they r hoping, mjhe dar lag raha hai, wht if i ruined it by showing zoya falling for asad likr suddenly when she loved haider...but the thing is k haider is no more n also tht after getting hold on the diary she came face to face wd his feelings n now with a little more convo wd one more person Otherthan hammad eho knows about asad's love she will start falling for him considering his love and respect towards her..will people believe in such stuff..? i need confirmation because if later they will bash the track or insult me i won't be able to tolerate...i m so scard


Awe mera Aloo take this huggi 1stšŸ¤—
don't b so scared so far u wrote wonderful stories buddy so don't b sared. Come on smile😊

That's what i said sab pata chalne aur Hammad se baat karke jo sach pata chala she can feel guilty & her respect 4 Asad can also increse but is wajah se usse pyaar karne lage that's unrealistic.

Agar koi mujhe kahe main tujhe pyaar karta hun but i don't love him back uski baat say main usse pyaar thodi karne lagungi. Han use politely samjhaungi aur uski feelings ki respect karungi but pyaar nahi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: jas91


Bas itna hi janna hai😊

Well in my POV maine bhi toh same yahi kaha tha Aloo. Asad ka jitna hurt aur pain tune dikhaya tha uske baad i also felt yeh compromised love lagega cuz past main joh tune dikhaya u know Asad was so hurt broken but she being his bff was totally oblivious 2 all this. Uski bjaye Asad toh uske bina kahe sab jaan jata tha i know woh usse pyaar nahi karti thi but dosti wala pyaar bhi toh hota hai uska kya apna pyaar pake kya aap use bhol jaoge. this is what happened wid her she was so blind in her new found love & happiness ki she didn't noticed 4 a sec why Asad is so distant or is not behaving d same. Uska apna behaviour bhi kitna badal gaya tha joh Asad ne diary main likha tha. Based on this in my POV ab uska pyaar compromise lagega but that's my view jaruri nahi main sahi hun.

Btw 2nd love is not impossible it happens but at this stage here i think it will look forced ki Zoya guilt main aake & knowing she hurt Asad usse khush karne ke liye usse pyaar karne lage.

Remeber Haseena ki bate sun ke woh Asad ke kamre main shift ho gayi yeh baat uske dimag main pehle khud kyun nahi ayi jab tak kisi ne point out nahi kiya.


mai story line change nahe kr sakte...i m already over loaded eith so much k isse bilkul ek new track pe lekar chalna difficult hoga..maine is forum pr is type ki bht stories parhi isiliye is kind ka concept mere mind mai aya...u knw maine sab plan kya hua hai tht how to write n what to write...wht kind of song sequence and what would be the end including epilogue...par mai phr bhe dar rhe hn...
i knw it would look like a compromise but there would br some points jahan ye show hoga tht she really is falling for him moreover maine kch aese stroies bhr parhi hai in whch asad fall in love for someone and later zoya and her care turned his heart towards her...i knw aesa hota hai...
mjhe bx ajeeb sa lag raha hai...ye kaahni change to nhe hosakte...kyun k tlnd n pol to phr bhe mai viewers k comments ko understand krke type krte the but yahan to maine already ek summary banae hue hai...
mai bx yd share krna cha rhe hn k agr readers ko end acha nahe laga so i will be very disheartened or agr mai khd se disappoint hogaye then i won't ever right anything anymore
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: jas91


Awe mera Aloo take this huggi 1stšŸ¤—
don't b so scared so far u wrote wonderful stories buddy so don't b sared. Come on smile😊

That's what i said sab pata chalne aur Hammad se baat karke jo sach pata chala she can feel guilty & her respect 4 Asad can also increse but is wajah se usse pyaar karne lage that's unrealistic.

Agar koi mujhe kahe main tujhe pyaar karta hun but i don't love him back uski baat say main usse pyaar thodi karne lagungi. Han use politely samjhaungi aur uski feelings ki respect karungi but pyaar nahi


u knw maine is same point ko pehle thoroughly samjha hai, i knw she can't just fall in love isiliye i iwll add some incidents and some moments whch can change there life which cna make zoyas heart turning for asad in the other way...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
WEll Aloo agar tune sab kuch plan kar rakha hai than just go 4 it yaar i know story beech main change nahi ki ja sakti & tune toh already sab plan kar rakha hai so don't b scared.
If u r sure what u r writing than don't get effected zaroori nahi hai sabko yeh baat samjh aaye. & in my case kuch baar mere saath bhi hua hai ki koi unexpected turn se main completely shock ho gayi hun but jab story aage badti hai toh realize hota hai ki woh twist sahi tha.

About me i m still little skeptical cuz is point pe Zoya ke dil main Asad ke liye pyaar mujhe ajeeb lagega mayb jab story aage badegi i might say it was corrcet. Right now i m also not totally convinced.

But as i said agar tune sari story itni detail main soch rakhi hai toh simply continue rakh. & don'et get scared. Trust urself if u know what u writting i s correct khud sure nahi hogi toh hume kya samjhaigi.

B confident yaar. & Smile😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
last chapter pe mostly viewers ke kya revies the they still wish Zoya 2 b wid him or not
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: jas91

WEll Aloo agar tune sab kuch plan kar rakha hai than just go 4 it yaar i know story beech main change nahi ki ja sakti & tune toh already sab plan kar rakha hai so don't b scared.

If u r sure what u r writing than don't get effected zaroori nahi hai sabko yeh baat samjh aaye. & in my case kuch baar mere saath bhi hua hai ki koi unexpected turn se main completely shock ho gayi hun but jab story aage badti hai toh realize hota hai ki woh twist sahi tha.

About me i m still little skeptical cuz is point pe Zoya ke dil main Asad ke liye pyaar mujhe ajeeb lagega mayb jab story aage badegi i might say it was corrcet. Right now i m also not totally convinced.

But as i said agar tune sari story itni detail main soch rakhi hai toh simply continue rakh. & don'et get scared. Trust urself if u know what u writting i s correct khud sure nahi hogi toh hume kya samjhaigi.

B confident yaar. & Smile😊


i will ty my hest k apko mai isstory se happy krn or disappoint nhe...u knw jab kai ye soch rhe to firdt name mere mind mai apka hi aya...
i really felt tht u can understand it!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: jas91

last chapter pe mostly viewers ke kya revies the they still wish Zoya 2 b wid him or not


they were sad but Otherthan tht many said tht make zoya fall for asad soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover


i will ty my hest k apko mai isstory se happy krn or disappoint nhe...u knw jab kai ye soch rhe to firdt name mere mind mai apka hi aya...
i really felt tht u can understand it!!


awe no need 2 make me happy Aloo tu mere baare main sochti hai that's enough 4 me.šŸ¤—
& as i said just have faith in urself if u r sure about it😊

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