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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#441

Wow tis is a really hawt...
fabulous...
😳
best of luck fr ur exams...
willbe waiting fr the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#442

Res unres on pg 74
Update soon

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malar3

@malar3

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Ok wat an awesome hot update..the love making scene was jus like them..intense and hot..and I absolutely loved the after morning sunrise scene and asad worried about the pregnancy was so funny..so I think the next update they are gonna be back to the normal life and case Is gonna be back..can't wait to read wat zoya hav decided..thanks for the pm and can't wait for next update already

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: astonm

@bold: A lot of women actually go on birth control to regulate their periods, control acne and keep their hormones in balance even if they aren't sexually active. Unless it's a North America thing? But a lot of women decide to go on BC when they turn 18 because they want regular periods or their periods cause them a lot of pain and stuff like that.

And thank you! I am glad you liked in and LOL, you are an achi bachi ;)

thanku 4 clearing it i was aware of this thing but didn't realize that moment😳

Yes i loved it. Achi bachi is happy😃😆

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#445

I have spontaneously combusted and gone to heaven. That was amazing Anjali! It was so romantic yet sexy at the same time and so so wonderful.

"He didn't move though, a small smile was on his face as he looked down at me. "What?" I whispered looking at him, the moonlight hit his face perfectly, making his already angular features seem more angular. He just shook his head and brushed my hair away from my face and caressed my cheek, my head moved towards his hand on its own accord, nuzzling his hand. He moved in closer then and pecked my lips before trailing his kisses down my neck, sending inexplicable currents all the way down to my toes."

I live for this sappy and romantic stuff. I literally said "AWW" out loud when I read that part. It's just so cute and I can imagine it in my head.

LOL ZOYA KILLS ME WITH THE THINGS SHE SAYS. She would ask him that, but he loves her for it and they're adorable and I love you for writing this story. Awww, they talked about kids, HOW CUTE.

I am going to be reading this a lot, and sexually frustrating myself LOL. But this is so beautiful Anjali, especially all the little details and movements. Take a bow sweetheart! :) And good luck on your exams.

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#446

Beautiful update...a very memorable first time for them both!

Loved the cute dialogues, the sunshine...everything!

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@ChamakChallo91

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#447

Comment updated on page 73 :)

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Hi Anjali... It's been long since i have commented on your story.. Had been very busy in what everyone calls a 'life' 😆

but i thought it's better to comment later rather than reserving a spot and then not unres it soon.. N i guess u can guess the reason for my lack of response to your updates by now😆

Now, i dont want to start with by how amazing a writer you are, coz you should be pretty well knowing that by now... 😉😳

so i would directly jump into the previous updates which i had read and liked long back!!!!

i love reading fluff..

and mind you, i am not a teenager 😆

but as much as i enjoy reading other stuffs, i love reading fluff too.. The ones which are adorned with so much love 😳

your Asad and Zoya are perfect!!!! They make a deadly couple!!!! When they are together, they take me to a different land of fairytale and when they are not together, they still stand as two strong independent characters which are dependent on the ones they love!!!

that's absolutely brilliant!! 👏

and the credit goes to you, and the way you portray them to your readers!! Truly commendable!!! 👏

willing to know how zoya deals with the situation of going against her own family in order to stand with the truth and bringing justice to Mariam...

and the last update!!! Damn!!! That was super hot!!!! ☺️

you didnt disappoint at all, infact you did make their first time so much beautiful that i had read the update twice back to back!!!

i was not reading just sex... I was reading about the love between two people., even when things were very hot and sexy, i still found it sweet and simple...

be that Asad's gestures towards zoya, or her words with no filter at all 😆

it was all so adorable...😳

waiting to read more...

update soon..

and hopefully your exams are going well... All the best!!! 😛

P.S... it's almost 6 am in India now 😲

and I believe it's time for me to grab some sleep now 🥱😆