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Originally posted by: astonm

Res for Chapter 19, still editing!

So I just got off work and my phone has so many emails and stuff so I am going to update before I even eat, be thankful because I like my food LOL.

AND StonerGirL, uhmmm,no fight in this chapter, sorry? And kmh2lover, AARTI CAN YOU LIKE STOP TEXTING ME CUTE GIFS. LIKE SHTAP IT PLEASE. JUST SHTAP.




YAY IT WORKED. Last one, I promise.

RESSS!

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Unres!

The Zoya-Rashid relationship is so cute, oh em geee. I love all the Ahmed Khans tbh. Aw, Ayaan is busted, but it's the best.

ANJALI WHAT IS AIR, HOW DO YOU WRITE SUCH SEXY THINGS?

I should have stopped, I was only meaning to tease him, and at that point I had gotten what I wanted - him to squirm under my touch but I was enjoying this way too much. There was just something about undressing a hot man, actually, undressing your man. He was so sexy, his skin was so smooth and had a nice tan but the lines and indents of his body were so defined. I wanted to lick those beautiful abs and feel him shiver under my touch, I wanted to leave little bite marks on his skin...I wanted to please him, to see his eyes clench tightly together as he threw his head back, to hear his groans and moans between his labored breathing as I pushed him over the edge, not from outside a door but from right by him. I pressed kisses into the warm skin of his now heaving chest, grazing his nipple with my teeth eliciting a groan from him.

That's so hot, oh em geee. I love how you write Zoya, it's amazing! The mental image with that handjob killed me, SO HOT AHHH ANJALI YOU ARE KILLING ME. SO SO SO HOT!!!!!

And you know what I absolutely love, how they're sexy and do stuff like that and then they go back to being sweet. I feel like a lot of authors just lose that sweet aspect with the sexiness but it's perfect in this story.

Awww, Rehan is a sweetheart with the flowers and I love that Nikhat is happy in this and has Rehan in her life.

The wedding invitation slip was so perfect! I can fangirl over every little sentence you write to be honest, it's all so good!

AHHH! DILSHAD'S POV WAS SO PERFECT. OMG OMG OMG. I DIDN'T REALIZE THEY WENT THAT FAR BACK.

The rest of my kids were loud and outgoing, but he was calm and quiet, a recluse almost, even as a little kid. He preferred to play alone all the time, ordered his toys neatly and ignored any other kid. That was until little Zoya crawled her way into our lives, I think their unique relationship started when Asad was merely 2 and Zoya about 8 months old. Zainab had come over with her and she had just crawled towards a playing Asad and he had actually looked up and smiled at her before passing her toys to play with.

This is so sweet, I am going to cry. And then the sweetness overload when Dilshad calls and teases Asad is the best, omg Anjali. You're making me grin so wide right now. I probably look like Joker from Batman.

Oooh, I like that Humeira's getting away from the family, they're assholes anyways. But poor Ayaan, I love how Zoya is like an older sister to him.

I LOVE EVERY LITTLE THING ABOUT EVERYTHING YOU WRITE. I COULD LITERALLY JUST COPY AND PASTE AND FANGIRL OVER EVERY SENTENCE. PLEASE UPDATE SOON MY LOVE.

P.S: I feel like we're getting closer to the sex, so update soon, real soon. I am so besharam omg.

Edited by kmh2lover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it <3333
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
GOD ANJALI! This was just superb! Thank you :)
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Fantastic Anjali...loved Asya...family bonding...nok jhok...very well written
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Omg what an update
So hot sweet and wonderful
Aww love zoya and rashid relation now at lease she is cool with both parents
Aww Ayaan is sulking and now he is being teased
Can't believe Asad and Zoya did tht at his parents home
They just can't get enough of each other they r cute together and hot and sexy at the same time
Oh zoya u don't need a filter just be free with asad he never expected ur boldness
As nikhat said they r just oh so adorable
Love Rehan and nikhat they r a nice pair and he brought flowers for all except zoya
Asad knows everything abt her she like pink roses but would prefer chocolates
Love the invitations bit
Oh dilshad pov was wonderful where all her kids r concern she loves them but asad is special
And she was the first one he came to saying he is in love
Oh he and zoya went back a far way
Love the way she tease him when he went to take zoya home
Oh they all r so adorable
Love zoya being their for ayan telling him to follow Humi to London
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the Khan khandaan...you could just omit the rest and have the whole story in that household :-) All are so cute there...Ofcourse, just add Humeira and Rehaan! No need for those villains :-(
Love your writing...
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Heyy...Anjali...thanx for the P.M...well a very good and well written update...it was good that we even got Dilshaad's POV...to know...loved it...As Rehan pointed out ASAD & ZOYA are ADORABLE IN EVERYTHING ...Ayaan is going through almost the same feeling what Asad went through minus the fact that Asad didn't knew about Zoya's departure...and Ayaan knows that she is going to leave soon...that 2 yr old Asad and 8 months Zoya's part was Adorable...continue soon.
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Awesome and wow part
Khan family is really cool
Asya hot scene wow
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon

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