AsYa (KaBhi) ff Mujhse Dosti Karoge! (part 14- Updated pg54)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Good more info... 👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Lovely prologue...
interesting...
u no what i did not get a chance to watch this movie...
your story going to be treat for me..

continue soon...and pm me

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Posted: 10 years ago

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thanks for the pm...👍🏼

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ayesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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awsomeee I wanna read da next chapter hmm nyc but myrah dsnt lyk asad so I think dey will be a twist

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wow its very interesting 👏
I have seen the film ... It's nice ... Hope like film,asya will be together
Plss continue I want to read further 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: aman1605
Firstly what's ur name?😳😆
Second i just love ur DP Shraddha #girlcrush😆
Coming to the update it was fab😃
Loved it❤️
Poor Asad Mayra doesn't care abt him🥺
Loved the part when they were sending to each other emails😳
Will wait 4 the next part so excited
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️

First my name is aarushi 😊

Thanx

Pleasure

And will update chapter1 soon

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loveassh

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: oldooz
loved the prologue but i find something weird which is how come a professor' s daughter weak in her studies?
waiting to read ur ff
@aman thanks for pming me

Firstly Mayrah is weak in her studies bcoz she is more interested in dancing so dat is Y she is weak in her studeis😃

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loveassh

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ChocoBerry
Hey I read the prologue n liked it too 😃

But the storyline sounds similar to the movie by the same name. It starred Hritik, Kareena and Rani. I'd loved the movie too😃

*Yes dear this ff is similiar to the movie and little bit of my imagination😃

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Guyz thanx 4 the lovely comments and will update chapter 1 soon and want to make one thing clear dat this ff is similar to MSDK and bit of my imagination and MSDK is my favr8 movie so whoever has watched it enjoy AsYa version in it

Love @arushi😃

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guyz so sorry 4 the late udate was a bit busy

Chapter1

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Bhopal,farooqi house...

Zoya was happy as asad was coming and sad coz she was worried for asad's reaction on the emails.

Zoya- I think i should tell Mayrah about all this and ask for help, now only she can help me (zoya tought) and she leaves from their.

Bhopal collage Dance Class Room

A girl in her mid twenty long brown silky hair wearing a red crop top and track pants practising her dance wid headphone in her ears MAYRAAH somebody shouted from back Mayraah

Mayrah- who is disturbing ME during MY DANCE practise Eishh she said to herself and turned around to see her best friend standing there with her hands on her hips.Zoee

Zoya- I'm shouting from soo long mayrah for heavens sake atleast don't put those stupid headphones in your ears

Mayrah- zoya chill I do this every single day tum toh janti ho what's wrong zoee

Zoya- sorry yaar tumhe tumhari practise time par disturb kiya sorry.

Mayrah- its ok buddy abb bata mood kyun itne tense hai.

Zoya- chal raste mein batati hoon.

In the Park

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Mayrah- yeh le teri favorite choc pie ice-cream abb bata kya baat hai

Zoya- Asad aaraha hai

Mayrah- abb yeh Asad koun hai tumhara boyfriend hai OMG Zoe tumhara Boyfriend hai aaraha hai aur tum mujhe abb bata rahi ho I thought we BFFs.

Zoya- Allah miya what's wrong with you tum asad ko bhool gayi wo humare bachpan ka dost hai we were no we are best friends.

Mayrah- ooh wo asad, asad ahmed khan rite dilshad phupi ka beta haina

Zoya- yess madam

Mayrah- toh iss may problem kya hai tu ittni tense kyun hai u know mai sab kuch dekh sakti hu but can't see you tense

Zoya- problem yeh hai ki (she tells her everything about the emails and staff) yeh hai problem abb tujhe meri help karni hai.

Mayrah-WHAT(she yelled) zoee how could you tumne mera naam se usse 10 saal tak emails kiye aur mujhe abb bata rahi hai , why did u email him using my name instead of yours

Zoya- woh actually..uss ne tumhe email karne kaha tha mujhe nahii jab tumne email karne se mana kiya toh mujhe laga asad ko bura lage ga issliye maine emails tumhare naam se kiye sorry...

Mayrah- tum ne jo consfusion create kari usse tum he solve karo aur mai iss may tumhari koi madat nahi kar sakti...

Zoya- mayrah plzz meri madat karo sirf 3 weeks kay liye...maine tumhari kitni madat ki hai tumhara homework projects sab kuch kiya tum mera wajase pass hui ho aur tum (making an crying face😭).

Mayrah- Huh Fine mai tumhari help karungi mai usse khungi kay woh letters maine likhe hai tumne nahi theek hai.

Zoya- THANK YOU sooo much woh do din baad aaraha hai

Mayrah- aacha zoya ek baat bato woh dikta kaisa hai

Zoya- woh aandheka anjana hai pagla aur deewana hai bass itna hi pata hai maine usse kabhi nahi dekha sirf usse mails mai baat ki hi she said while thinking about their conversations on emails and blushed😳.

Precap- Asad's introduction and A song sequence😃

That's it guyz plzzz like and comment I updated Index on pg 1 Enjoy😊