AsYa (KaBhi) ff Mujhse Dosti Karoge! (part 14- Updated pg54) - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

res for shano, affu, yashu, nino, gowtu, jas, aman, amu, hina, aashi,,abi bhai, mqggie n liyu...

koi reh gaya???


Aloo thanku🤗

I guess yeh bike rider Myrah ka bf Rehaan hoga jise usne Asad ko jelous karne ke liye bheja hai
Btw awesome updt
loved it😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
So asad asked abt mayrah but got diverted with talks abt a drunk and singing zoya
Love the song and dance
Oh the they chased each other
Oh who almost hit zoya and she knows him
She hugs him asad is like furious she is hugging him instead of beating him
She didn't even hug me her best friend
Oh love how he shouted zoya and wanting to kill the person if zoya was hurt
So who is the guy is it Rehan ?
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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*First of all thanx guys for giving me 30+ likes I really appreciate it.

*Sorry for the delay in the update as I'm writing Exams its very difficult for me to write and study my Exams are ending on 27 november so the updates will be up soon I know I didn't reply to the comments as I was really busy So here's AsYa wala Thanx for everyone who Liked and left comment my sister read all the lovely comments for me while I was busy studying and AsYa wali jhappi for everyone🤗

*And I know you ppl are getting bored from my bak bak so last but not the least I'm not introducing no New character...as per the new guy we all know him so chill out😃

The update will be up in 2 hours time update will be a bit short so bear with me...

Love Aarushiii
Edited by loveassh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello wonderful readers I'm back with another chapter I'm not gonna repeat my bak bak again as I already mentioned the reason behind my Late Update so ENJOY...

CHAPTER 9
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Asad- Zoyaaa
If anything happens to zoya I will kill that rider

Rider- miss are you ok

Zoya- Allah miyah what's wrong with...TUM

Rider- TUM!!

Asad- do they know each other (but the next thing he saw shocked him zoya was hugging that rider instead of beating him up ) how can she hug a guy who almost killed her she didn't even hug me her best friend and she's hugging that guy

Zoya- OMG I still can't believe my eyes mr rehan abbas quraishi!!!

Rehan- tum aaj bhi nahi badli haina aaj bhi sadak pay aankh band kar kay chalti ho

Zoya- woh sab chodo yeh batao tum bhopal kab aaye??

Rehan- kal raat ko

Zoya- tum kal raat ko aaye aur mujhe phone tak nahi karke bataya kay tum aarahe ho(she said with a pout)

Rehan- actually raat ko bohot der ho chuki ti isiliye inform nahi kiya

Zoya- ooh

(They started their random talks absolutely forgetting Asads presence Asad was Angry the word angry was not even a word to describe his anger, he saw them laughing hifing eachother just then rehan put an arm around zoya and side hugged her Asad got more Angry and started clearling his throat to get their attention but failed he again cleared his thorat this time a bit louder and it affected he got their attention)

Rehan- Zoee who is that?

Asad- (self thought) imraan kya kafi nahi tha jo yeh bhi usse zoee bula ney lag gaya

Zoya- how stupid of me bato bato mai tum dono ko introduce kara na hi bhool gayi
Rehan meet Asad my childhood best friend and Asad meet Rehan my best friend since High school

Both of them shake hands (Asad faking a smile) and (Rehan smirking)

Rehan- (self thought) aah Asad miya is jealous already this is going to b fun and all the credit goes to my sweetheart for coming up with this superb plan...
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(Flashback)
(Mumbai)

Mayrah- Rehan I spoke to humie like a while ago she said there is no difference zoya said she won't tell Asad that she wrote all those letters I came here so that those two idiots can come together and I know zoee very well she will prefer to stay quiet then to confess what's in her heart...

Rehan- baby don't worry everything will come alright remember how I confesses my Love for you...You were busy laughing like hyena with that zaid and talking to him and ignoring me that's when I realised that you mean a lot more to me then a friend... then I realised I can't loose my jhalli and I confessed my Love to you...Can I tell you something...
when you were spending time wth zaid I was so damn Jealous I couldn't think of anything but that monkey lingering around you I felt like punching the day lights out of him 😡

Mayrah- what did you say I laugh like an hyena haa (she said smacking him on his chest,when suddenly an idea popped up in her mind) rehan your'e the best I LOVE YOU you gave me an awesome Idea babes...😃

Rehan- wait what did I do😕

Mayrah- You gave an awesome Idea... 😃

Rehan- huh...what idea😕

Mayrah- oho my bhudhu tumhe aapne pyaar ka ehsaas tab hua jab tumne mujhse kissi aur kay sath time spend karte hui dekha isn't toh abb hum Asad ko bhi jealous feel kar waye gey zoya ko kissi aur kay sath time spend karte hui jab dekhe gaa tab usse ye ehsaas hoga that he Loves Zoya not me

Rehan- tumhari baat mai point toh hai par zoya Asad se pyaar karti hai woh kissi aur kay sath time kyun spend karegi aur koun humari madad karega aggar jiss ladke ko tum bhejo gi uss ney humari madad kar ney kay jagah sab kuch barbaad kar dia toh...

Mayrah- nahi woh plan barbaad nahi karega I TRUST HIM a Lot

Rehan- accha koun hai woh budhu jisspe itna Trust karti ho (sounding abit jealous)

Mayrah- Tum!!😃

Rehan- okay...after a pause he realised what mayrah said and he screamed WHAT!!😲

Mayrah- come on Rehan you will be perfect if you remember rehan zoya is your best friend if you go I will have nothing to worry about cause I know you will bring them closer look we can't send anyone else if you remember zoya was only comfortable around you and Imraan you both were the only boys she was comfortable with we can't tell this to imraan as he can't keep anything to himself and imraan was with zoya all these year so its obvious that woh usse bilkul bhi attention nahi dengi ... 3 saal pehle jab tum mumbai aye the zoya missed you a lot aur aggar tum jaate ho woh tumhe attention bhi dengi and woh tumhare aas pass safe bhi rahegi pleasee rehan manjao na plzzz (with an cute pout she asked)

Rehan- okay you know I can't refuse you now tell me mujhe karna kya hai

Mayrah- Oo Rehan Your'e the Best...tumhe kuch zayda nahi karna hai bass zoya kay pass reh kar Asad ko jealous kara na hai and usse dheere dheere yeh ehsaas dila na hai ki woh sare emails usse zoya ney bheje hai mai nai nahi

Rehan- okay done ho jaye ga..

With that she hugged him tightly and pecked his lips

Rehan- aggar yeh sab karne say itna accha gift milta toh mai pehle hi kar chuka hota😉

Mayrah- Reehaan 😳
Toh mai humaira ko phone karke sab kuch samjha dugi tum aaj shaam ki train se bhopal joa kal woh log sab family picnic lake side par jaa rahe hai so tum wahi khud ko introduced karana okay..

Rehan- okay boss anything else

Mayrah- noo its just that I will miss youu

Rehan- tum nahi aarahi ho

Mayrah- no aggar mai aayi toh asad mera piche ghume ga aur humara plan incomplete rahega so mai kuch dino baad aougi waise bhi mujhe abbhi tak auditions bhi deney hai

Rehan- auditions dey kay jaldi wapas aana I will wait for you

And he hugged her tightly not letting even a bit of Air pass through their bodies

END OF FLASHBACK
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Zoya- Rehan kaha kho gaye😕

Rehan- kahi nahi waise sab log kaha hai

Zoya- sab log lake kay pass hai chalo

Asad- chasmish yeh tumhara dost hai

Zoya- kamal karte ho tum bhi abhi introduce karvaya na kay he is also my best friend
Par woh tumhari tarha mujhe satata nahi hai

Asad- mera alewa tumhe koi aur sataiga bhi nahii

Zoya- kya!!

Asad- kuch nahi ( what am I saying kyun mujhe bura lag raha hai yeh jaan kar kay rehan zoya ka sabse accha dost hai)

They reach by the lake side where the youngsters are playing antakshari and elders are talking

Zoya- Ammi dekho koun ayaa hai

Rehan- Asalamualaikum Aunty kaise hai

Zainab- walaikum salaam Rehaaan tum mai theek hu tum kaise ho beta... itney saalo say na phone kiya na koi khat... kaha thei tum beta

Rehan- mai bilkul theek hu aunty aap janti hai na ammi ki tabiyat aachnak kharab hogai issiliye mumbai jana pada aur waha jaake itna busy tha kay time hi nahi mila

Humaira- (whispered to Rehan) would be jiju itna jhoot sirf mayrah aapi ko phone karne kay liye time tha na...waise bhi hum sab hai koun

Rehan- (whispere back to humie) tum chup karogi warna tumhare CRUSH kay bare mai sab ko bata dunga

Humaira- frowned and kept quiet

Zoya- kya khusr phusr kar rahe ho tum dono

Rehan&humaira- both said in union- KUCH BHI NAHII

Zainab- toh rehan kitne dino kay liye aaye ho beta

Rehan- pata nahi aunty ek bohot zaruri kaam se aaya hu aur woh pura nahi hota tab tak mai yahi tehra hu

Zoya- so tum farmhouse pay reh rahe ho

Rehan- filhal toh hotel mai tehra ho kyunki khalid chacha goan gaye hai aur rennovation ka kaam chal raha hai

Zoya- tum koi hotel mai nahi rahoge

Rehan- toh kya sadak pad rahu ga

Zainab- zoya ka matlab hai tum hamare ghar raho gay jab apna ghar hai woh bhi itna bada toh hotel mai rehne ki kya zaroorat hai

Humaira- ammi bilkul theek keh rahe rehan jij(she was about to say jiju) I mean bhaijaan aap humare saath rahege

No one noticed her slip of tounge except for Rehan, Najma and Ayaan.both najma and ayaan were shock as to why she was gonna call him jiju but they decided to ask later...

Zainab- woh toh accha hai kay Mayrah yaha nahi hai warna woh tumhe maar hi daal ti

Hearing Mayrah's name Asad's ears popped up

Zoya- yeh theek kaha aapne ammi mayrah hoti toh yaha itney saal baad aney kay liye aur phone nahi karne kay liye isse bohot peet ti

Rehan- woh toh woh already peet chuki hai he mumbeld
Loud enough for zoya to hear it

Zoya- kya tum mayrah se mil chuke ho kab mile usse?

Rehan- haan woh mai kal subah ussey mumbai audition house kay bahar mila tha aur milke bohot peeta uss jungli billi ney

Zoya- 😆 bohot accha kiya you deserve it...

Asad- Ek minute Mayrah Bhopal mai nahi hai

Zainab- lo kaal aaye aur yeh aab pouch rahe ho

Asad- mujhe laga woh aapne ghar pey hogi aur aaj ajeyegi milne

Zainab- uss kay ghar pey Asad tumhe nahi pata Mayrah humare sath reh rahi hai pichle 8 saal sey

Asad- KYAA??

Zainab- haan aur do din pehle hi woh mumbai gayi aapne Dance auditions kay liye

Asad- (self thought) mayrah mumbai gayi mujhse bina mile how can she just go like that hum 10 saal se ek dusre ko dekh ney kay liye taras gaye thei aur woh bina kuch bole mumbai chali gayi , kyun,

(Aggar mayrah 2 din pehle mumbai gayi toh kal subah woh gobbi kay parrathe kissne banaye, mera room mera according kissne set kiya jaise mujhe pasand hai sab woh sab kuch woh sari details jo maine mayrah ko email mai batai thi kay mai kiss type ka room prefer karta hu woh books, old songs collection dhoni ka poster and the dark blue giutar woh sab kissne kiya kyunki aunty ney saaf saaf kehdiya tha that she didn't do it koi mera intezaar mai subah jaldi utt kar woh sab kar raha tha koun tha wo)...
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Precap- Answers to Asad's question and A Welcome back party for the Khans, as rehan is about to take zoya's hand for a dance but Asad comes and takes her on the dance floor and dances with her on a romantic beat..

*Guys I guess the update was Long enough...

*If you people want you can suggest songs for the next sceen I will see whoever suggests the same song...I will use that song for the next update😃 hope you enjoyed reading the update

* Next update after 35+ likes and atleast 15 replies

Love Aarushii❤️
Edited by loveassh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey it was awesome
blossom
loved it a ton...
waiting for the romantic dance☺️
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

hey it was awesome

blossom
loved it a ton...
waiting for the romantic dance☺️
cont soon


Hii 😊
Thanx Glad you liked it😃
I will try and update the next part soon😊

Love Aarushii
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome :)
plzz update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
well its a pretty interesting update
&
I loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

awesome

plz update soon


Thanx😃
Will try and update soon😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ZoyaAsadKhan

awesome :)
plzz update soon :)


Thanx😊
Will update soon😃

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