Beautiful Chaos Thread ll - Pt 6 (a), Pg 74

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Mine.

GAHHH!!!

OH GOODNESS GRACIOUS!

I know I basically went all "..." on Part 5A, coz really. SPEECHLESS THERE.

BUT NOT HERE.

HERE I HAVE THIS WHIRLWIND OF EMOTIONS AND THIS TORNADO LIKE THING AND i'M JUST GONNA EXPLODE!

DAMN!

Madame B!

Way to outdo even yourself!!

HOW EVEN!!!

I mean really...WHAT EVEN!

You go on giving us all that sexy and hotness and all well THAT...and then BANG BANG!

YOU TIED EVERYTHING BACK TOGETHER!

You did justice to the flow of the story!

And really, YOU SAID i SCREWED YOU...??? Mymy!

YOU'VE SCREWED US ALL.

And DADDY!??

Where the f**k did he come from.

Bloody original this is!

Liar you! SEXY LITTLE LIAR! You said it's all sex and cheese. DAMN!

THERE WAS CHOCOLATE AND ICE AND ALL THAT DARK CHOCOLATE!!

GAHHH!!!!

Take a bloody bow already Madame B.

Truly, you're the lady of the Manor.

You!

Only you.

And Sunehri stabbed Rehan! My God, in like just two paragraphs there was Rehan and...HOW IMPACTFUL!

Love love love!

Oh but you did put him in the hospital.

DEAD!!!!

Sudsie bruh.

Give it to us!

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jasminerose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#362

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*trying to recover from the after effects of this FANTASTIC update *

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 10 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: jasminerose
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*trying to recover from the after effects of this FANTASTIC update *

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After effects is about right.

BLOODY FANTASTIC.

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Anisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#364

Omg

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Wow Juliet !!

You really know how to send people on a heck of a rollercoaster ride !!

From where it started on 5a to the end of 5b!!!

Insane !!

Although I was initially a little miffed you totally cancelled out my emotional high point in Chapter 3...

*narrows eyes*hmmm...

But I got over that!! *grins*

But WOW !!

First I thought Ms Muffet was Tanveer, playing really psycho creepy with Aahil's mind causing really crazy hallucinations...

But his FATHER !?!

What a twist !!

And boy was that phone call creepy !!!!

You are a gifted storyteller my friend !!

You took a story, karate chopped it into pieces, and put it back together again totally different !!

Amazing stuff !!

Some of my favourite parts...:

" You listen to me Aahil. You hurt me Aahil. You are this gorgeous broken man, But you were mine. I thought I could mend you, But you broke me instead."

"Dark is punctured with something sharp, Sunlight seeps in through that hole, another puncture then another, many holes of light one after the other... Dark is sent away, Bright takes it's place.."

But you preferred to run and hide, I was responsible for hurting you, what I didn't know was I had changed you for worse."

" Sanam, Give me back what is mine. Come back to me... Because if you don't then I have nothing left to fight for." His eyes looked defeated and tired."

And I adore how you pieced everything together from all the updates !!

Sorry this is so late...

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sardeeeeeep

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Posted: 10 years ago

#365

Omfg

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I'll be back in a few hours

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 10 years ago

#366

Sudsie promise you'll come back!

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Nitya Suresh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#367

Ohh my God.. Seriously this was intense.. So damn good.. So Aahil was protecting Sanam.. Phew.. Him not trusting her would've been bad.. Ohh.. That bloody Billo.. :/
Seher stabbed Rehan..;( Nooo...
His father is back?? Godd!! What does he want.. :/