The Perfect Misfit #5: Chapter 56 Pg 97

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Am here with the 5th thread of The Perfect Misfit

Thank you so so much to each and everyone of you who have followed this story and showered it with so much love.

A special shout out to ChocoBerry And Nim (Rarepearl) love you guys so much 🤗

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Prashni, Anopama, Bano, Aroo, Pinks, Aman, Anee, Gowtu, Sasir, Asif, Aseela, Rajsmi, Mayur and Jas


Hope you will like the remaining parts of the story

Lots of love to you All

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Index
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Chapter 38 & 39 - Page 1
Chapter 40 - Page 11
Chapter 41 - Page 16
Chapter 42 - Page 20
Chapter 43 - Page 26
Chapter 44 - Page 30
Chapter 45 & 46 - Page 41
Chapter 47 & 48 - Page 48
Chapter 49 & 50 - Page 55
Chapter 51 - Page 63
Chapter 52 & 53 - Page 76
Chapter 54 - Page 82
Chapter 55 - Page 90
Chapter 56 - Page 97
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Chapter 38

Zoya ran up to Zack and hugged him as hard as she could 'how is my sister doing?' 'A lot better now that I have finally met you...how are you...gosh I have missed you so much' Zack put his arm around Zoya's shoulder and held her close placing a kiss on her head.

'Abdul's flight should be landing soon; we can go and get a coffee'. Zoya sat at the table waiting for Zack to come back with their drinks 'here you go' he said as he placed her coffee in front of her 'how was Aliza did she reach ok, I haven't had a chance to speak to her' 'she is totally fine, she called me this morning. She is starting her classes on Monday; I suppose the same as you. Once you have settled into your accommodation mum and dad have asked for you to come and spend the weekend with us...and we are not taking no for an answer' Zoya started laughing, she had to admit she was nervous about meeting his parents 'sure I'd love to'.

After three more cups of coffee and a long conversation Abdul's flight had finally landed. Abdul helped Zack load up the car before he drove them to their university campus. Abdul and Zoya were going to complete their final year at Queen's Mary University, which was based in the heart of East London, as international students they were given accommodation on site. Unlike the segregation in India the accommodation here was mixed Zoya was based on the second floor and Abdul on the third.

'Zoya I will come and pick you up once you have finished with your registration and other formalities that need to be completed' 'Zack what about Abdul?' Zack looked at Abdul 'don't worry about me guys, I have a few friends here that I want to catch up with before life becomes hectic' 'Abdul you sure?' Zoya asked feeling a little bad that he was going to be left on his own 'totally Zoya...once we finish with the whole induction process tomorrow we only really have the weekend free to do what we want before we start on Monday so its best we catch up with what we want to do'.

The university campus was spaced out along a main road, it was really nice, Zoya and Abdul walked along the road towards the medical faculty which was based towards the end. Zoya took in the sights as they walked, the road was busy with early morning traffic she hadn't really expected to see so many Asian people around. Abdul told her that the residence of this part of East London were predominantly people from south east Asia especially Bangladesh. The university itself was diverse with people of all nationals, the one thing that Zoya didn't fail to notice was the number of girls that wore the hijab, something lit up inside her for once she didn't feel like she was the odd one out, what made her fill up with even more happiness was that a lot of the girls who walked past greeted her with a salaam, Zoya couldn't help smile, she was sure she looked stupid but at this moment in time she didn't really care.

After registration students were asked to attend an induction seminar, where they were given their time tables and various other instructions. In total there were thirty students, Zoya and Abdul looked out if they could recognise anyone else from their college but they couldn't see anyone that looked familiar. By the time they had finished it was nearly two in the afternoon 'I'll call Zack he can come to pick me up, what time you going to meet your friends?' 'Not until six, that's when most of them finish work'. Zoya said bye to Abdul and jumped in the car with Zack, on the way back from campus Zoya and Abdul ventured out a little further to see what was around their local area it was then she came across a small florist and had bought Zack's mum a beautiful bouquet of flowers.

'You know you really didn't have to' Zack said as he admired the arrangement 'yes I did...how could I go and see them empty handed...plus I am meeting her for the first time...how was Ally? Bet you she was a nervous wreck'. Zack gave her a lopsided smile 'in the beginning yes she was but quickly warmed up to them, you know my mum actually spoke to hers' Zoya looked at him wide eyed 'really...hang on does that mean that this thing may be turning into something more special?' Zoya turned towards him in excitement as she waited for him to answer. Zack had a soft smile plastered on his face and if she wasn't wrong his cheeks had almost turned pink 'Bhaijaan are you really going to...come you're not even going to tell me?' Zack pulled up the car and turned to face her 'yes I am going to propose to her...' Zoya didn't let him finish she started screaming and jumped forward to hug him 'Ya Allah thank you so much...I can't believe it...oh my gosh this is so cool...I can't tell you how happy I am'

Zack pulled his crazy sister back and made her sit down 'I haven't as yet and she doesn't know about it, I have spoken to mum and dad who have both agreed, it is why mum spoke to hers...I am going to propose on New Year's eve...hopefully she will say yes and if she does we can get married after she graduates or after her house training' 'Zack this is the best news I have ever had...really I am so happy for you' she placed her hand on his cheek 'form this day onwards I will pray to Allah every day asking him to bless my brother with every happiness...oh man...do you even know how far New Years is...I have to wait that long' Zoya started pouting making Zack shake his head and roll his eyes, the child in Dr. Farooqui never failed to surface no matter how old she was.

Zoya walked in behind Zack, he showed her to the living room and then went to call his mum. The house was beautifully decorated, it was elegant in style but had the warmth of a home. 'Mum this is Zoya my adopted sister and Zoya this is my mum Asha' 'Assalam O Alaikum Aunty' Zoya stepped forward to greet her. Asha hugged Zoya and then placed a soft kiss on her forehead 'Welcome to our home beta, it is so lovely to have finally met you Zack never stops talking about you all, and especially how you look after him' 'Zack actually takes more care of me than I do of him, he is the best brother anyone can really ask for' Zack felt his heart fill up with warmth he put his arm around her shoulder 'and you are the best sister' he said tapping his head against hers. Asha looked at the two of them 'well in that case no calling me aunty you can call me mum too' Zoya felt her eyes moisten 'really?' 'Yes really' Zoya smiled and hugged Asha tightly.

The weekend seemed to be over as soon as it started, but Zoya made sure she enjoyed every minute. Zack's parents had welcomed her with open arms and were so loving towards her, Asha made her promise that she would come and stay with them as much as she could after Zack went back to India.

As Zack drove Zoya back to her university he spoke to her about Karan and what they had planned for the future 'we haven't really spoken about it in great detail, I guess we just take each day as it come' Zoya said honestly. 'And you have never thought about it?' 'Of course I have, what more would I want than to be with him forever and that too as his wife, but I also know that it's a long way off...I am not sure it will be so simple'.

Zack agreed with her but didn't voice his opinion, he knew Karan's father only too well and he also knew Indu and her father. They had been able to keep the depth of their relationship a secret for a long time now but as soon as any of them got to know the truth things would start to get nasty. The one think Zack did know was that no matter what he would always be there for his brother and best friend and now for his sister too. He thought about telling his parents especially his mum as he felt she would be able to support Zoya but then held back thinking that it was only Zoya who had the right to disclose any parts of her personal life.
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Zoya spent Sunday night catching up with Zaynah and Karan her heavy schedule and the time difference meant that her communication with Karan was going to be few and far between, Karan was ok as long as she kept on texting him throughout the day he was satisfied.

The first week kicked off and all thirty students were made to dive in to their books and work straight away. Zoya didn't mind the pressure she had five years' experience of working under stressful working conditions. Zoya and Abdul started to make new friends as the weeks progressed Zoya felt more and more comfortable with her surroundings she had fitted herself into quite a routine, she would always meet with some of her new found friends and go and pray with them in the designated prayer room, she would always make a point of having lunch with Abdul every so often but the one thing they definitely did do together was walk back to halls after each day came to an end.

In the October students were given reading week as opposed to a week off, Zoya spent most of her time in the library and the rest talking to Karan. 'Zoya you want to get a bite to eat...I don't think my stomach will let me carryon unless I feed it' Abdul said rubbing his stomach 'no you go ahead I want to finish this chapter on Rheumatology otherwise I will never finish it...and I have that blasted medical history paper to write...ugggh so much to do' Zoya lightly banged her head against the book she was holding 'drama queen...fine I'll bring you back a sandwich then' he said leaving her smiling and battering her eyelids.

As Abdul left a few girls from Zoya's year came and sat with her 'is that your boyfriend?'one of them asked with a serious face. Zoya looked at her as she choked on the air she had just inhaled 'n...no...no Abdul is just a very good friend, we have known each other for five years, we came here from the same college' 'oh...it's just that you seem quite close, which isn't really normal is it?' Zoya looked at her confused 'why wouldn't it be normal...is it not normal for a girl and a boy to be friends?' she asked 'well no...for a practicing Muslim girl it is not right to have just close relationships with men who are not family' Zoya looked at her as though she was alien 'is this girl for real?' she thought to herself. 'Oh... I don't see what being practicing has got anything to do with being friends with someone?' 'Well if that's how you feel...' the girl stood up and walked off without looking at Zoya 'how rude' she thought to herself, Zoya looked at the other girl who came with her she gave her an embarrassed smile 'don't mind her she is a little extreme with her views, you will find that a lot here people have different beliefs different ways of seeing and accepting things but it doesn't mean that they are right and you are wrong...um I'll see you later'. Zoya let out a sigh as she closed her book she wondered what the girl would have said to her if she found out that she was in a relationship with a boy who wasn't even the same religion as her.

Zack was leaving to go back to India, Zoya spend the last weekend before he flew out with him and his parents. It was during that time that Zoya spoke to Asha about her and Karan, she made Zack sit with her for moral support. Asha didn't give much away her expressions and body language was as calm and collective as you could get 'mum are you not going to say anything?' Zack questioned her after a silence that was becoming a little testing. Asha looked at Zoya she moved forward and took her hand in hers, Zoya felt her heart jump she gave Zack a worried look before she turned around to meet Asha's eyes Mum, what is it?'

Asha took a deep breath 'Zoya...beta I am going to be honest with you...as much as you will have the support of me. Zack, his dad, Karan's mum and that of your own family Vickram Oberoi will never let this happen. We have known him for nearly thirty years and I know he will move heaven and earth to make sure that this doesn't happen...' Zoya closed her eyes and swallowed the lump that had built up in her throat. Asha cupped her face 'Zoya you have to be more than a hundred percent sure that this is what you want because you will be fighting a long uphill battle and every step you take will only become harder and harder...if you are with Karan and want to be with him you have to be ready to fight...and not just you Karan too'.

Zoya tried to speak without her voice breaking the few tears that she had fought started to trickle down 'Mum me and Karan have been through a lot already and have managed to stay together for so many years...I really can't imagine my life without him...ask Zack...he will tell you...but...Mum I would never want Karan to do anything against his parents, I will not make him chose between me and his family I can't do that...I can only pray that Allah helps us as He has always done, and makes our coming life easy'. 'Zoya Karan is like my son too and if I know him I assure you he would be willing to leave the whole world behind for you...whatever you do make sure you do it as one, as a team and do what is always right for you...we will always be with you beta'. Asha pulled Zoya towards her and let her head rest against her shoulder.

Zoya hugged Zack 'give Karan a big hug from me and tell him that I am ok, I know he worries too much...and make sure you keep me filled in with what happened with Aliza...oh and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year too' Zack started to laugh Zoya its still November' 'I know but I won't see you to personally wish you so am doing it in advance...now go before I start crying again' Zack kissed her forehead and waved goodbye to her and his family as he walked towards the departure lounge.

As the weeks passed Zoya started to go out a lot more the more she ventured out the more she fell in love with London. A place that was so multi-cultural so diverse and so unique in every way she could think of. Zoya walked the streets of central London enjoying the rush of shoppers cramming in their last minute Christmas shopping, she walked through the crowds admiring what she saw. She hadn't travelled much so had nothing to compare her experiences to but she was sure that this is what it must be like in the western world. In her country, culture and even religion for the majority to marry anyone outside of your own was not only unacceptable but almost unforgivable and here you saw people of all races mixed with each other, she saw a Chinese lady with a Caucasian man, a black African man with a Caucasian lady in a hijab. She thought back to her and Karan, all her life she felt like a misfit someone who would never be able to fit into the world around her, she only just realised how small her world was. She considered her and Karan a misfit, how would two people from two different worlds unite but they did, it was then that Zoya decided that no matter what happened she would do everything in her power to be with Karan, there was no letting him go because now they were they were no longer just misfits they were The Perfect Misfit.

Zoya sat outside a small caf situated in Leicester Square she pulled out her phone and called Karan she had not heard from him for two days and every time she called his phone was switched off. She then called Zaynah 'have you spoken to Karan, I have been trying to get hold of him...can you please call Avantika aunty and tell her to pass on the message' 'the last I spoke to him was Friday when he popped by...will definitely pass on your message, have you tried Zack?' 'No Zack has gone to Malaysia to see Aliza he won't be back until after the New Year'.
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Sis first congrats for the new thread and am so sorry for the late unres.


Sis these chapters were so light, I liked them. No tension at all for anyone.

Am happy to see at least one couple moving towards matrimony and am super excited.

I liked how Zack's mum accepted Karan and Zoya's relationship but didn't hide the fact that Vikram Oberoi will not be easy on them. Am happy she has prepared Zoya for what is to come later.


I loved the confidence Zoya has gained by being alone in London. How she now doesn't find herself as a misfit and actually called herself and Karan THE PERFECT MISFIT.


where is Karan? I guess I know 😆


So looking forward to the next part 😉
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CONGRATULATIONS FOR THE VERY WELL-DESERVED NEW THREAD OF THE PERFECT MISFIT ! 🥳 🤗

Unres 😉

Awww loved the bonding between Zoya and Zack, they really look like siblings !!! 😃
So sweet how Zoya has been invited by Zack's family, Asha is really sweet !!! And now Zoya zven got a mum ! ❤️
Wow !' So Zack is gonna propose Aliza ?! 🥳
So university started for Zoya and Abdul !! 😃 it was so nice to see taht Zoya felt at her place and i agree that even on the high-school where i go, there r Arabians girls, Black girls, Pakistani girls and all origins of Muslims who r either wearing the hijab (like me) or there r even girls who wear the burqa but from their eyes to mouth (burqa is against law in France 😳 )
Itq good to see Zoya so much at ease !! 😃
So finally Asha came to know about Zoya and Karan 😕 Aapi, seriously consider my request to get Indu and Vikram married ! 🤢
Awww Zoya finally realizes that Karan and her r not the only ines who r in love and different religion and she's finally ready to fight for themselves !! 👏
Why am i feeling like Karan andIndu r getting engaged ?! And Karan is being forced ?! Vikram has taken his phone thats why its switched off !! 😲
Please dont let that happen Aapi !! ❤️

My Aapi rocked it as usual because she's the best !! 🤗 love u Aapi !! ❤️
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Congratulations for new thread sister
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Awesome updates
Zoya reached London & started college. She was overwhelmed by Zak family. She got brother & now mother as well. Sack told her that he will propose Ally on new year. Zoya saw different culture & people together & realised that she is not misfit. She wanted to do anything for karan & her. She told Asha everything abt karan & her. She said that it is tough but she will be with her always. Karan phone switched off do some type of twist coming in next update. Hope it is not much shocking. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Congrats Appi 4 the fifth thread🤗🥳🥳

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