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Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#611

How could u stop there !!!!!
Awesomely awesome updt
I totally loved it

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#612

Awesome update Loved it <33 Thanks for the pm

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#613

Res😉

Unres

Love the update sorry for my lateness

But this story is so good I just keep reareading all the time

So love zoya just dwelling the the joy of her new found feelings

She is reminiscing all her time with asad trying to find from when she loves him

But their is so much she just don't know when

Love the SC always after all it is a part of zoya

So she decides to put her heart out there

She texted him again he replied love it it the maybe and perhaps

Omg she witness her Abu and bro truth they r so vile

But there is more I believed for her to learn

I love how asad is the first person she thinks of in distress

Aww he is shocked to see her he took care of her

Can't wait to read more

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spn2013

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Posted: 10 years ago

#614

Unpredictable update.
Did gafur killed her mother too. Zoya and Asad scene was just fabulous.

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StonerGirL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#615

WWWHHHAAATTT!!!!! NO WAYYY!!!!!

YOU ARE PURE EVIL MISSSYYY!!!!!

😭😭😭

LUVD the update THOUGH!!

PLZZZ UPDATE SOON! My heart might fail due to the suspense!

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aman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#616

awsome update.. totally loved it

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Tanya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#617

Oho why did u stop There ! such a cliff hanger.I want to know what happens next ! Plz give a quick update

cant wait to read the next part.I love this FF.And u write really well ! I could visualise everything :D Plzzz Update Fast ! I don't think I can wait much 😆

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Mitwaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#618

Amazing! Loved it! Asad is sooo sweet and I feel so bad for Zoya! Poor thing😭 at least she has Asad

Update soon please!!! Can't wait!

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#619

Anjali, I understand why this is your favorite chapter until now. I.JUST.LOVED.IT.

Finally Zoya realizes her feelings for Asad. It was so cute to read how she pinpointed the beginning of every emotion she felt for him but love... Love she realized had always been there like a dormant volcano ready to erupt any minute consuming her completely like it did now. Beautiful 👏

Aah so she now has proof and is witness to one of the 'great' deeds her father and brother have been into. Gosh I can't even imagine what she must be feeling listening to her father and brother and then to see her brother getting that girl killed.

Loved the care Asad showed towards her when she literally broke down the door to his building. He's the sweetest thing around and I want him 😳

But this was not the point where you should have stopped. I wanted her to tell him what she hears and saw. Rest what happens between them in the condition they are in will be a bonus but am not hoping much for all THAT as the circumstances are not aot for them to get carried away.

Look forward to the next update. Want it jaldi jaldi.

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rajsmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#620

Totally get this being your fav chapter...mine too!!

Ghosh!! What folks she has as her father and brother! I am sure the brother has been trained into this...Poor guy!

Asad is such a gem of a person! Loved how Zoya realized her love for him. Hope no one misses her at home. All hell will break loose otherwise, wont it? Guess its a huge house and so they wont miss her...

So looking forward to the next part :-)