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thank you for the pm ...wonderful and very nice update ...I love it ... Haider's prank was funny 🤣...your written is beautiful ...I can't wait to read more from you... pls update soon


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Originally posted by: ashiii333


awe sholly
yeh faisla bhi dusre thread pe hua tha😳
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at what time u will update
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Salam...
Hope all r fine...
i now i m late but plzzz understand me buddies...
i hate winters... phir bhi etna type kiya...
hope u like it...
P.S: i m getting less response so i will update till my requirement fulfills...
P.S.S: well i can update for my regular buddies soon 😉
Ashii...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Adhoori Mohabbat


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Part 21 A:

Asad was in his room with Aman... both were lying on the bed... Aman was sharing his some memories with him... he was hearing him out but his mind was wandering towards Zoya... yes his thoughts were occupied by his wife only... actually the point was that now they have to share a room... a bed... so he was worried for her... she hasn't come inside the room from evening... he understood her situation... she can't share a bed with him in 3 days... she needed dome time... and he was ready but at least she can come to him and discuss the matter... but no she was avoiding him so he was going crazy with these thoughts...
On the other hand, Zoya was sitting near the pool when ilsha came to her and placed a hand on her shoulder...
Zoya: app yahan...
Dilshad: tum room main kyun nahi gai...
Zoya: wo... main wo...
Dilshad: main janti hoon tum Asad k sath ek room main rehny ki vaja se pareshan ho...
Zoya: phupi... main boht waqt tak is ghar se or Asad se door rahi hoon or ab ek dum se ek hi room share karna I m feeling odd...
Dilshad: main manti hoon tum dono ne boht sa waqt alag guzara hai par beta is tarha yahan beth kar nervous hony se acha hai Asad se ja kar bat karo... wo bhi yehi soch raha hoga...
Zoya: phupi kya meri or Asad ki understanding thi???
Dilshad: understanding... jab tum dono mily thy na bacho ki tarha har bat pe larty thy... par jab tum don one ek dosry ko pasand kia... pyaar karny lagy to duniya ki sab bato ki parwah kiye bagair tum dono ne etni mushkilo k bad Nikah kia... par halaat ne tumhara sath nahi dia or tum dono alag ho gaye... she said remembering every moment...
Zoya: phupi... ab main wapis aa gai hoon na phir yeh aanso... she said wiping her tears...
Dilshad: janti ho Zoya... tumhary jaaney k bad Asad pehly ki tarha chup ho gaya tha na bolta tha or ghar bhi nahi ata tha... or main samjhti thi k us ne jo tumhary sath kiya us k aagy yeh sab boht kam hai... maa hony k bawajood mene usy nahi samjha par jab se wo Aman se mila phir se muskurany laga... wo jeeney laga tha Zoya... par wo nahi chahta tha k tumhy takleef ho is liye pehly kabhi Zoya ka zikar nahi kiya or aaj echo tum yahan ho Asad k pass... or tum dono ko sath laany main Aman madad kary ga... tum dono alag reh kar Aman ko dukhi nahi kar sakty or dekhna tum dono pehly ki tarha sath main ho gey... vohi Asad Zoya jo ek dosro ko deewano ki tarha chahty hain...
Zoya: lekin phupi ab wo mohabbat dobara kesy ho sakti hai... hum dono boht alag hain...
Dilshad: par tum dono k dil vohi hain jo ek dosry k bina nahi reh sakty... tum dekhna boht jald tum dono sath ho gey... In Sha Allah...
Zoya: In Sha Allah... phupi app bhi rest kejieye main room main jati hoon... and thanks for understanding me...
Dilshad: aaj etny saalo bad mene apni beti se bat ki or thanks bol k mjhy paraya mat karo...
Zoya: okay phupi... good night...
Dilshad: good night...
Zoya came in their room and found Asad and Aman still awake...
Zoya: Aman... its late shona... app soye kyun nahi...
Aman: mama aaj main papa k sath hoon no restrictions...
Asad: haan Zoya aaj se no restrictions...
Zoya: Asad... you are spoiling him...
Asad: beta hai mera I can spoil him... you don't remember but mene tumhy bhi boht spoil kiya hai...
Zoya: mjhy???
Asad: oh sorry... I just forgot about...
Zoya: never mind... now both of you go to sleep and no arguments...
Aman: that's not fair mama...
Asad: exactly... that's not fair Zoya...
Zoya: okay fine... I m going to sleep... she wanted to spend time with Aman but they didn't bother to involve her in their talks...
Zoya came to the other side of the bed and lay down... Aman was in the middle of the bed... she turned towards him and placed a hand on him... she closed her eyes but she was hearing their sweet talks of father-son... actually she wanted to talk with Asad but right now Aman was enjoying his company so she can wait till morning... Asad too wanted to be with her and talk with her but in front of Aman it was not possible so he too continued with Aman... he too turned towards Aman so he can look at her... after all she was there with him after a long time...
Tu Hi Hai Saanson Ka Humsafar
Ya Hai Zindagi Jo Jeenay Ko Kehti Hai Haan
Tu Hi Hai Wahi
Khushi Jo Chaah Gayi Ghamo Par
Ab Toh Har Kahin Jo Raunak Si Rehti Hai Haan
Tu Hi Hai Wahi
Tu Hai, Haan Woh Payr Main, Jis Ka Hoon Rasta
Main Toh Karoon Rab Se Dua
Mujhe De De Har Gham Tera
Meri Khushiyon Ka Vaasta
Mujhe De De Har Gham Tera
Asad starred at her face and remember their old times... he told Aman to sleep and he obliged happily... he was placed his arm under his head and kissed Aman... he looked at Zoya and creased her hair... he came forward and kissed her forehead... and she smiled in response... he too smiled at her response and drifted to sleep...
Next Morning, Aman was the first one to wake up... he found his parents at his both sides... he kissed them slowly and made his way downstairs... Zoya felt absence of Aman and moved her hand forward and found Asad... she reached near him and hugged him... he too hugged her by waist... after some minutes Asad felt her breath and opened his eyes... he was seeing her that close after ages... he placed her hair behind her ear and traced her face... she felt uneasy and opened her eyes to find Asad... he was starring at her and she too was looking in her eyes... he looked at her lips and then looked back in her eyes... she followed his gaze and understood his intention... but her eyes too went at his lips... he inched closer... she too came forward... both were close... too close... their noses were touching... lips were going to meet but a loud scream broke their moment and they sprang apart...
Aman: papa... yes Aman came there screaming for his papa...
Asad got up from the bed and came to Aman...
Asad: Aman... you fine... kya hua beta...
Aman: I m fine papa... wo Rabert Cahchu mere sath khel rahy thy to main app k pass aa gaya... I need my partner papa...
Asad sighed in relief and pulled Aman's nose...
Aman: papa... he said scratching his nose...
Asad: papa ko dara dia na...
Aman: acha ab chalo na... he dragged Asad with him...
Asad turned to look at Zoya but she was sitting on bed totally shocked... if Aman had not entered then they had kissed... she touched her lips and smiled at her thoughts...
Asad: Zoya... blushing session khatam ho gaya ho to tum fresh ho jao... main Aman k sath hoon...
Zoya: ji... she nodded and went in washroom...

Asad smiled at her behavior and went with Aman... Zoya got ready for the day and came downstairs... Aman, Asad, Ayan and Arman were in garden... Dilshad and Asma were in Kitchen... she wanted to help them but they were not allowing her...

Asma: Bhabi app rehny dejieye... sab ready hai...
Zoya: par mjh aisy acha nahi lagta Asma... I can't sit idol...
Dilshad: abhi Najma yaha nahi hai... wo tumhari bat sun leti to shock main chali jati...
Zoya: aisa kyun phupi...
Dilshad: kyun k tum Najma ki BFF ho... or tum kaam nahi karti thi dosro k kaam main interfere karti thi...
Zoya: Ya Allah... main etni badtamiz thi...
Ayan and Arman came there and side hugged her... she looked at her surprisingly...
Ayan: isy badtamizi nahi Art kehty hain... isi vaja se to hum dono crime partner thy Mona...
Zoya: lekin ab main aisi nahi hoon...
Arman: haan appi ab app vesi nahi hain... par ek bat hai app abhi bhi interfere karti hain...
Zoya: wo kesy???
Arman: pehly app masti k liye yeh sab karti thi or ab sabki help karny k liye...
Dilshad: Arman pehly bhi Zoya sabki help k liye hi aisa karti thi...

Asad, Aman and Arman too joined them and sat on dinning table...
Asad: haan ammi Zoya to hamesha se app k liye Bechari hai na...
Zoya: oh really Asad... becahri nahi hoon main...
Arman: appi???
Zoya: kya aapi... haan bechari hoon main...
Asad: mera matlab tha k...
Zoya: sab samjh aa raha hai mjhy jisy dekho mere past pe bol raha hai... or Aman yeh kya tareeka hai main kal se dekh rahi hoon you don't need me any more...
Asad: Zoya... aisa kuch nahi hai... or Aman...
Zoya: I m talking to my son... don't you dare to interfere...
Asma: Zoya... app kyun hyper ho rahi hain... it's not good for you...
Ayan: haan Mona...
Zoya: tum sab meri bat kyun nahi samjh rahy...
Aman: I m sorry mama... he left from there...

Asad: Zoya tumhy agar nahi pasand to mujh se bat mat karo par Aman k samny aisy behave karna theek nahi hai...
Zoya: yeh sab apki vaja se ho raha hai Asad...
Haider who was watching his Chutki, understood her point of view and came to her...
Haider: Zoya... I know its too difficult par Aman ki kya galti hai... us par gussa hony ki kya zaroorat thi... wo Asad k sath time spend kar raha hai to khush hony ki bajaye tum aisy kyun behave kar rahi ho...
Zoya: kyun k 5 saal tak wo mere sath raha hai... har din har raat... lekin kal usy kya chahieye tha... papa... I know usy Asad k sath time spend karna hai par wo mera beta hai Haider... kal wo mjhy aisy ignore kar raha tha jesy main ab uski life main matter hi nahi karti...
Arman: appi wo bas 5 saal ka hai... or app aisy kyun soch rahy ho... he wanted to be with his father that's it...
Zoya: haan to ab meri zaroorat nahi hai kya???
Asad: enough... Zoya tumhy jo karna hai karo par aj k bad Aman k samny aisy bat ki to...
Zoya: app zaida se zaida mjhy divorce dy dengy... just like before...
Asad: app bat ko kahan se kahan lekar ja rahi hain... Aman mera bhi beta hai... kya main us k sath time spend nahi kar sakta???
Zoya: main apko Aman k sath time spend karny se mana nahi kar rahi par app khud ko meri jaga rakh k sochieye... kitna bura lagy ga apko agar main apko ignore karon...
Asad: Zoya mjhy nahi pata app kyun... he stopped as Aman came back there...
Aman: I m sorry... mjhy yaha nahi aana chahieye tha par...
Asad: Aman app kabhi bhi kahi bhi aa sakty ho... you are my champ bacha...
Aman came towards Zoya and asked her to come at his level... Zoya sat in front of him...
Aman: mama... mjhy wapis jana hai... Mumbai...
Zoya: Mumbai???
Aman: haan kyun k mjhy sab se zaida time apni mama k sath spend karna hai...
Zoya: Aman I was just...
Aman: I know kal mene papa sath time spend kiya or apko bura laga... I m sorry mama... mjhy apko hurt nahi karna tha...
Zoya: shona app sorry kyun bol rahy ho... apko pata hai na mama aisy over react karti hain... she said wiping his tears...
Aman: nahi mama hum wapis ja rahy hain... papa I m sorry but I have to go... mere liye meri mama zaida important hain...
Asad was watching them with teary eyes... he wanted to be there with them but Zoya's words were ringing in his ears...
Zoya: Aman... I m sorry shona... mama sachii main sorry hai... I know you need your papa... hum yahi papa sath rahengy Aman...
Aman: phir app ne papa se aisy kyun bat ki... bad manners mama...
Zoya: mama sorry na... abhi papa se bhi sorry karni hai mama ko...
Asad: Zoya... you don't need to say sorry... shayad meri hi galti thi...
Zoya: nahi Asad... it's my fault... I was over reacting... but main apni insecurities ki vaja se Aman ko or apko hurt kar rahi thi which I don't want to do... I m sorry Asad...
Asad: Aman dekha na mama ko pata hai unki galti thi... ab app aaj k bad wapis jany ki bat nahi karogy...
Aman: okay papa...
Asad: promise me...
Aman/Zoya: Khans Promise...



Scroll down for next part...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Part 21 B:

Zoya too promised with Asad as she was genuinely sorry... she wiped Aman's tears and Asad's tears as well... she sang for her men... her Aman and Asad...


Apni aankhein khaali kar de
Kaash tu meri aankhein bhar de..
Kaash tu meri aankhein bhar de..

Zoya sat on the chair with Aman in her lap and started feeding him with her hands and continued her singing...


Mere yaara tere gham agar payenge
Humein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jayenge
Ho.. Mere yaara tere gham agar payenge
Humein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jayenge Do yeh saugaat tum, to zamane ki hum
Do yeh saugaat tum, to zamane ki hum
Har khushi se muhkar jaayenge

Zoya offered a morsel to Asad... he was hesitant but Aman too joined hand with Zoya so he has to take that morsel...

Hum mar jaayenge ho o o..
Hum mar jaayenge..
Mere yaara tere gham agar payenge
Humein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jayenge

Asad and Aman were near the pool when Zoya came with some snacks and sat beside them... she joined his back with Asad and continued her singing...

Tere kaandhe se hi lagke
Yaara beetein umar saari
Socho kaisi hogi kismat
Huaa yun to phir humaari
Saare aansoon to ho tere
Aur aankhein ho humaari

Aman was enjoying happy moments with his parents... he was about to fall in pool when Zoya catches him in time...

Tere dard hamein
Jo mile pyaar mein
Tere dard hamein
Jo mile pyaar mein
Hum khushi se yun bhar jaayenge Hum mar jaayenge ho o o..
Hum mar jaayenge..
Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge
Humein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jaayenge

Asad came in their room and found his cute little family... Zoya and Aman were busy in arranging their clothes in cupboard when Asad picked Aman in his arms and made his way towards bed... he placed Aman on the bed and started tickling him... Zoya too came there... Asad was looking at her and sang...

Chaahe dukh ho, chaahe sukh ho
Dil ne tujhko hi pukara
Tune humko hai banaya
Tune humko hai sanwara
Jahaan ko to rab ka hai
Humein tera hai sahara

Zoya was feeling uncomfortable under his intense gaze... she stood up and turned to go... but she felt a tug at her hand... she turned again an found Asad who was holding her hand... he continued his singing...

Bas tera saath ho
Chaahe jo baat ho
Bas tera saath ho
Chaahe jo baat ho
Tere kehne se kar jayenge..
Hum mar jaayenge ho o o..
Hum mar jaayenge..

Asad made her sat in front of her and held her hands... with his other hand he pulled Aman on his lap...

Hmm mere yaara tere gham agar payenge
Humein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jayenge

Zoya too came near him and placed her head on his shoulder... Asad placed his hand on her back and pulled her closer... Aman and Zoya both were in his arms... he sent a silent prayer and thanked Allah... Zoya continued...

Mere yaara tere gham agar payenge
Humein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jayenge...


Precap: AsYa Anniversary... Zoya's memory problem... AsYa in KV... Alone...


Sooo that's it...
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with love Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago

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