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Posted: 10 years ago
Adhoori Mohabbat


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Part 20:

Next Morning, Aman was shifted in a private room as he was showing good signs... Zoya and Asad were inside with Aman as he can regain consciousness anytime... Zoya and Asad were sitting on opposite sides of Aman holding out his hands... Zoya was really tired as she was awake from last 2 nights... she was going through lot of stress... Aman was in hospital, her memory loss and her new found family was creating strange feelings in her... she was starring Aman when she too drifted to sleep... Asad was observing her how she fall asleep... he has told her to take rest last night but she refused politely... she didn't want to move an inch leaving Aman in that state... Asad silently moved out of the room so the mother-son can rest for a while... Asad was sitting on the bench while Ayan, Asma, Arman and Haider were also there as they wanted to be with AsYa...
Haider: Asad... I don't know Zoya kesy react kary gi but I m going to tell her about your divorce...
Asad: main usy sab bta chuka hoon Haider...
Haider: or us ne kuch nahi kaha???
Arman: aik mint... it means appi is divorced... bhaijan app ne mjhy kyun nahi btaya???
Asad: Arman... mene or Zoya ne divorce papers sign kiye thy par mene kabhi bhi wo papers submit krany ka nahi socha... she is still my legal wife...
Haier: haan par tummy divorce papers sign karwaye to thy na...
Arman: haan par Asad bhaijan keh rahy hain k papers submit nahi kraye so that papers are not valid... I m a lawyer and I know rule n regulations...
Asad: but the thing that is bothering me is that she didn't react... she was literally shocked but didn't ask any question regarding our relation...
Asma: bhaijan... mene app se kaha tha k is tarha btana acha nahi hoga... she accepted you... but she didn't react at all... it's not a good sign...
Asad: but Asma she told me that she is remembering some things...
Asma: I think humy kuch test karwany chahieye...
Arman: haan bhabi... yeh sahi rahy ga...
Asad: lekin Aman k theek ho jany k bad... she is already stressed or main nahi chahta k Zoya ko or tension ho...
Asma: lekin bhaijan it's for her safety...
Asad: I said na... Aman k theek hony k bad... saying so left from there and came back to his little family... he creased Zoya and Aman's hair respectively and sat beside them...
After sometime Zoya woke up with the slight movement of Aman's hand... she immediately looked at Asad and found him looking at Aman's other hand... both looked at each other and smiled... Aman again stirs and finally opens his eyes... he blinked his eyes for several times and AsYa gave him time so he can regain consciousness... Aman looked at his right side and found Zoya with teary smile... he smiled at his mother...
Aman: ma... mama... he whispered...
Zoya: Aman mama is here... app theek ho na... is it paining...
Asad was there too but he was witnessing their talk being a father for the first time...
Aman: I m fine mama... papa kahan hain???
Zoya: papa yahi hain... app k pass...
Asad: I m here Aman... he said kissing his left hand...
Aman: mjhy laga app chaly gaye...
Asad: papa Aman ko chor k kahi nahi jayengy... Khans promise...
Zoya: and Khans never break their promises... haina... she said kissing his forehead...
Aman: hmm... now give me a kiss... he said looking at Asad...
Asad kissed on his left cheek... Aman asked Zoya to kiss him on his right cheek... then he asked them to kiss him at the same time... AsYa obliged happily... Asad informed Asma about Aman... she came and checked Aman and declared him like a fresh flower... she told AsYa that Aman is fine but have to stay at hospital for 3 more days so he can recover soon... AsYa sent a silent prayer for thanking Allah...
Next 3 days went in a blur... Zoya was busy with Aman and Asad again came back in his overprotective self... not for only Aman but for Zoya too... she was staying at hospital but she was not caring about herself so Asad was there for her... Arman was happy as Asad was taking care of Aman as well as Zoya... he was really happy for his aapi...
In SM, all were happy and doing some preparation to welcome Aman... no actually they were eager to welcome Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan and Aman Asad Ahmad Khan... Dilshad was the happiest one as she was going to meet his 1st grandchild that too for the 1st time... Aman was with them earlier but now he is the family... actually the most important family member...
AsYa along with Aman took their leave from the hospital and came at Dargah... actually Asad wanted to come at Dargah with his family as AsYa started their journey from the Dargah only... now he wanted to start a new life with his family with the blessings of Allah... AsYa offered their dua's and tied a thread for Aman's well being and left from their...
At SM, Aman and Zoya were surprised to see the decorations... Asad entered with Aman is his arms and Zoya came along with her men... her son and her hubby... Zoya knew that all were happy at their return but the preparations and special arrangements overwhelmed her and she shed some tears...
Dilshad: Zoya aaj etny saalo k bad is ghar main khushiyan aayi hain or yeh aanso...
Zoya: Aman ko hamesha se family chahieye thi par main usy kabhi yeh sab khushiyan nahi dy pai... lekin aaj mere Aman ki bhi family hai... thank you so much aunty...
Dilshad: yeh family tumhari bhi hai... or aunty kaun hai... tum mjhy ammi bulati thi???
Zoya: aunty main etna jaldi yeh sab... it's difficult for me... sab kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai or...
Dilshad: Zoya you need to stress... call me phupi... jesytum pehlu phupi kehti thi ab bhi kaho...
Zoya: phupi matlab app mere abbu ki behn hain??? Asad ne mjhy hum dono k bary main btaya tha par baqi sab ko phir se intro karana hoga... she said looing at Khan Siblings...
Ayan: Mona... I m your crime partner Rabert or yeh Asma hai tumhy pata to hai... well he is Haider your bro... Humaira your sis... Najma to sab k liye Tamater hi hai... he said pulling her cheeks...
Arman: or haan main Arman hoon... Nuzhat's hubby... he said teasingly...
Zoya: OMG... Arman Malik... I don't remember you at all... noce to meet you...
Arman: aapi???
Zoya: aapi kyun... Nuzhat k husband ho to bhabi kaho na...
Arman: okay... okay... I m sorry... or haan en logo ne tang kia na to mjhy btana...
Ayan: Arman tum humy dhamki dy rahy ho???
Arman: haan bhaijan... agar meri aapi ko koi problem hui to dekhna...
Zoya: stop threatening him... Ayan yeh aisa kuch nahi kary ga...
Ayan: thank God... Mona wapis aa gai... ab meri team zaida solid hai...
Meanwhile, long lost father-son were busy enjoying their silly talks... Dilshad wanted to be with Asad and Aman but she was hesitating... Asad observed her dilemma and placed Aman on her lap...
Asad: ammi... apko haq hai... I know you were angry but now you are a grand-mother... take care of him...
Dilshad: or mera beta???
Asad: apka beta bhi app k pass hai... he kneeled down before her and kissed on her hand...
Dilshad: I m sorry Asad... mjhy...
Asad: no sorry ammi... plzzz... aaj Zoya wapis aayi hai wo bhi Aman k sath...
Aman: haan dadi... ab to sab acha acha hoga...
Dilshad: haan ab dadi k pass Aman bhi hai or Aman k papa bhi... she kissed her sons...
Haider was avoiding Zoya and she noticed him...
Zoya: Haider... Ayan keh raha tha you are my brother right???
Haider: haan... tum meri Chutki ho... he said creasing her hair...
Zoya: phir mjhy aisa kyun lag raha hai k tum mjhy kuch kehna chahty ho...
Haider: tum hamesha mere dil ki bat jaan leti ho...
Zoya: bat kya hai... anything serious...
Haider: haan mjhy Asad k bary main bat karni thi... he said eyeing at Asad...
Zoya: Asad... koi aisa bat hai kya jo mjhy nahi btayi gai to plzzz mjhy btao... she said with panic visible in her voice...
Haider: tum aram se betho main btata hoon... he said making her sit on the sofa...
Zoya: nahi tum mjhy btao???
Asad came to her and asked what happened... Arman also sat beside her...
Zoya: Asad... he wanted to say something about you... I swear if you had hid something from me I will kill you... she shouted...
Arman: aapi relax... I m here... kuch nahi hua... he tried to calm her down...
Zoya: how can I relax Arman... mjhy Asad ne kaha k main Zoya hoon...? I agreed... I accepted him... or ab Haider...
Asad: Zoya... mene tumhy sab sach btaya tha... or Haider mene kaha than a hum baad main bat karengy...
Zoya: baad main kyun... Haider jo kehna hai abhi kaho...
Asad: for God sake Haider... mene kaha tha Zoya ko sab kuch abhi btana zaroori nahi hai...
Zoya: ab app decide karengy k mjhy kon kya btaye ga or kya nahi... Mr. Asad Ahmad Khan... I m a single mother and I can handle myself and my child... I don't need your support at all... she shouted at him...
Arman: aapi app kyun panic ho rahi hain...
Asma: Zoya... relax... aisy tumhary brain pe stress ayega or...
Zoya: stop fooling me... Haider kya btana hai tumhy tell me now... she said turning towards Haider...
Haider: Chutki wo...
Asad: agar Zoya ko kuch hua na Haider I swear I will kill you... he said glaring at Haier...
Zoya: oh really... app kya samjhty hain har koi app se darta hai... Haider just ignore him and tell me the truth...
Haider: tumhy Asad ne btaya k tum Asad ki biwi ho or Aman uska beta hai...
Zoya: just cut the crap Haider...
Haider: jab tum yahan nahi thi to...
Asad: mene Zoya k peachy koi galat kaam nahi kiya???
Zoya: Asad... I m warning you... let him finish...
Haider: Zoya... Asad tumsey boht pyar karta hai... he really loves you... he stated controlling his laughter...
Asad was shocked by hearing this... he knew that Haider was angry at him but suddenly he decided to take his side but why???
Zoya: what did you say???
Haider: Asad loves you...
Zoya was mad at Haider and Khan Siblings... she just glared at them and left from there... Haider rushed towards her and grabbed her hand but she freed herself and went outside the SM...
Asad asked Dilshad to take care of Aman and he warned Haider and his Siblings not to play such pranks in future and he went outside...
Arman: app sab hamesha aisy karty ho kya... aapi ka gussa boht bura hai... mjhy pata hai last time to...
Ayan: Mona etna hyper ho jaye gi mjhy nahi pata tha...
Haider: Chutki aisi to nahi thi... main to bas bta raha tha Asad us se pyaar karta hai...
Asma: app logo ko aisa nahi karna chahieye tha...
Ayan: come on Asma... she is fine... but I m worried pehly sirf Asad Bhaijan ka gussa bear karna parta tha or ab...
Haider: well... Mrs. AAK is back with a bang...
Ayan and Haider hi-fived and other too agreed but Arman was actually worried for his aapi so he too came outside and witnessed a beautiful sight... AsYa in each other's arms... Asad had calmed her down and hugged her to assure her that he had not hi anything from her... Arman was happy for his happy... now he can move back to his house with Nuzhat... he left from there...
Zoya broke the hug and spoke...
Zoya: I m sorry Asad... mjhy aisy react nahi karna chahieye tha...
Asad: its okay Zoya... or aaj k baad tumhy koi pareshan nahi kary ga... I promise...
Zoya: Khans promise...
Asad: Khans promise... ab chalen Aman is waiting for us...
AsYa came inside and joined there family and enjoyed the family time...
Precap: AsYa in same room...
Nervous Zoya...
Confused Asad...
AsYa and Aman moments...


Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes plzzz...
hit like n leave ur replies...
with love Ashii...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 4 aarzoo, jas, amu, aroo, nilu, niya, sasir, abi, asif, anopama, mayur, yumi, hena
sorry if i forgor some1 😳
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
UnRes..
Salaam Ashiii...
Thanx for the P.M and Res'...
Well a well written update...Ashii...
But if iam not wrong...i have never read anything about divorce papers in last update...
Or in that case in the story...but i may miss it...but it is still not revealed to Zoya ...will that one thing will be a huge hurdle for ASYA in future... Zoya's reaction to Haider's part was a cause for worry in future... I don't want them to face any more problem now or in future...
Aman is all ok and as per his wish got his both father and mother by his bedside while opening his eyes...it was just like a old film scene...hahaha...don't get e wrong...but it was kinda of...like imagine Aman making movements and ASYA getting up with the sync...
Sorry if i have gone overboard...
And actually it was logical that Zoya didn't accepted everything as they came...she will take her time to adjusts with everything...
Liked the update...
Continue soon...
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow update is here
Awesome part loved it
Finally everything is fine
Wow asya and aman in sm
Haider's prank is gr8
Excited for next part
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you so much for res
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashiii333

res 4 aarzoo, jas, amu, aroo, nilu, niya, sasir, abi, asif, anopama, mayur, yumi, hena

sorry if i forgor some1😳


Shukhriya Ashii...
Have ReS' on Pg 113..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

UnRes..
Salaam Ashiii...
Thanx for the P.M and Res'...
Well a well written update...Ashii...
But if iam not wrong...i have never read anything about divorce papers in last update...
Or in that case in the story...but i may miss it...but it is still not revealed to Zoya ...will that one thing will be a huge hurdle for ASYA in future... Zoya's reaction to Haider's part was a cause for worry in future... I don't want them to face any more problem now or in future...
Aman is all ok and as per his wish got his both father and mother by his bedside while opening his eyes...it was just like a old film scene...hahaha...don't get e wrong...but it was kinda of...like imagine Aman making movements and ASYA getting up with the sync...
Sorry if i have gone overboard...
And actually it was logical that Zoya didn't accepted everything as they came...she will take her time to adjusts with everything...
Liked the update...
Continue soon...


w. salam...
actually asad had signed the papers and asked zoe to do so...
but he nevr submitted that pprz...
so its just haider's insecurity...
nothing moreee...
relaxxx...
or haan i winded up asya conversation in previous update lyk asad told her evrything nd that was also included...
hope u got my point...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update! Happy to know that both Aman and Zoya are fine. Loved the family time. Thanks for the pm. Do continue soon dear.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashiii333



w. salam...
actually asad had signed the papers and asked zoe to do so...
but he nevr submitted that pprz...
so its just haider's insecurity...
nothing moreee...
relaxxx...
or haan i winded up asya conversation in previous update lyk asad told her evrything nd that was also included...
hope u got my point...


NOPEee...
I still didn't got the gist...
But will read the last 2 updates again and then going to see where i missed...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part. I really like your story, it's pace, the writing style.
Now looking forward to sme light moments between asya

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