Asya SS 'Be With Me' II epilogue pg 37 [19/09] - Page 15

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salam all... i am here with last Part of my SS 😳😭, which specially dedicated to maggie, yashi,nino, affu,nidz,liyu,jas,heena and gowtu...btw maggie now happy😳😉

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'Qubool Nahe Hai' zoya looked up at him not believing what he just said

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Asad heart skipped a beat as he heard Azaan e isha, he knew that everything is officially over, he stood up and walked to the nearer Masjid, offered the Namaz behind Imam and after offering his prayers he raised his hand to pray to Allah, tears continuously rolling down his cheeks and he himself shivering with even that thought that she is nothing to him now 'Ya Allah!! I lost her at last, i don't know why all this happened even when we loved each other a lot but now i can do nothing, she can never be mine anymore, i can never love her the way i did, i have no rights on her anymore but Ya Allah!! It's my dua that she never ever face any problem later in her life, that her married life would be fill with love and happiness, that she never miss me, that she forget me and move on..' as he prayed his heart cried with him, wiping the tears he stood up and exited the Masjid..

He again made his way to her home, when his eyes fell on the name plate, he moved to it and caressed it which reads 'Zoya Farouqi' he remembered how he bought this house after she left and since than it was her home, asad froze as he felt her hugging him from behind, he closed his eyes sighing 'please zoya go away, you already had left me now please leave my memories too, i have no right on you anymore, sab khatam hogaya hai...' he whispered 'kuch khatam nahe hua asad..i am still your zoya' she said 'please zoya! Don't try to fool me, i don't know why i am still thinking that you are here with me even when the truth is that your's nikah had happened already...' he cried as he removed those hands and walked a little far and sat on the stairs with his head in his hands...

As he expected no one uttered anything after that and he accepted that he was just imagining her until he felt a hand on his, he looked up only to find her looking at him lovingly 'zoya please, don't do this, don't make it difficult for me..i already have to face a lot, don't do any addition..please leave ' he pleaded as he found difficult to console his heart anymore 'asad, you aren't dreaming, i am here for real touch me, feel me and u will know..' she requested while his eyes widened no , 'how can it be possible, you can't be here...your nikah was going to take place 25 minutes back..then..i mea..yo..yaseen..'

'i will tell you' they both looked ahead only to find yaseen

'bhaijan, what are you saying ' asked sara shocked, while ilyas and his wife not able to utter anything nodded repeating sara's question 'i am saying right only sara...ami, abu i don't want zoya to marry me when her hearts beat for someone else' replied yaseen and now everyone's eyes were no who was so numb to response, Ahmed Farouqi stood from his place and went to yaseen, holding his hand he started 'yaseen, i don't know what make you think that my daughter love someone else, neither i know why you are saying it now, but beta i being a father request you to not to leave my daughter hang between everyone like this, if u will deny for this nikah then who will marry her..please beta, don't do this i am begging t...' before he say further yaseen placed his on Ahmed's and nodded a no

'no uncle, never say it again, for me you both are my family and will always remain, and it's not like that i am doing deliberately but because i came to know how much selfless this girl is, that she for her family can sacrifice her love' yaseen chuckled saying this while zoya looked up to him with tears in her eyes, yaseen too looked back at her and walk towards her , cupping her face softly he said 'zoya since the day i came bhopal i knew that something isn't right but didn't never gave much importance to it until yesterday...zoya i saw you, i saw him, your pain, it hurt me..' he sighed

'zoya before becoming your fianc i was your friend, you could have shared all this to me the day i proposed you and i swear i had backed off, i never wanted to snatched your happiness ..' 'how could i yaseen...you wouldn't had understood, you said you loved me..'. 'why everyone close to me thinks that i can't understand there pain, there feelings, that's it better for them to hide it and sacrifice there happiness for me instead of sharing it with me?' asked yaseen eyeing aliza, while she looked down not able to stare back at him

'it's not like that, i just didn't wanted our relation to get sour..i wanted my family to be happy, i wanted my abu to be happy, i wanted everything fine..' 'although when u have to live your life engulfing pain...even when you knew that living a life without would be impossible...' he said while more tears spilled out from her eyes but yaseen wiped it quickly with his thumbs 'you know if you had said Qubool hai today and decided to move on thinking that the family is enough for you to spend the rest of your life then zoya u had regretted this decision the rest of your life...zoya you were hurting yourself, you were hurting him, and zoya his father committed a sin but it's not right to punish him for his deeds..asad was never at fault then why...then why...' zoya looked at him shocked 'how did you knew that?' 'hmm, good question but it's not the right time for it, right now you should go to him...he needs you'

'how can i? He don't even want to see me again, what i did to him, what i said to him, it had hurt him to the core' 'may be it did, but the moment you will go to him, he will forget everything, he loves you a lot zoya, and honestly i never had loved you the way he did...' zoya hugged him and cried 'you are an amazing friend yaseen, Allah should bless everyone with a friend like you' she said while he too placed his hand around her 'thank u thank u, acha now stop with this rona dhona, just go to him' zoya broke the hug and nodded smiling through her tears, as she turned to go, her eyes fell on her abu, her uncle and for a moment she lost all the guts to walk away from there but the as they started smiling indicating her to go, to do what her heart say, she smiled widely and move to the four who all the time stood silent witnessing the whole scene but no one can imagine how happy they were that moment

'where is he?' asked zoya as she came to them, at first najma pull her in a hug and then whisper to her 'there where you left him, with your memories and a lot of hopes..your home zoya' zoya hugged her back 'thank u najma..' as zoya broke the hug she ran to the exit and a while later was out of everyone's sight..'i will go with her...you guyz stop the guest..no one should go, the nikah will happen today only...' yaseen said them and went after her...the duo left but there was still a lot about which the rest aren't aware of, so aliza started from the beginning so that they could know everything


As yaseen filled up asad with everything he sat on his knees, crying, but this time the tears were of happiness, relief washed over him, after spending a ton days and restless he was finally his peace, his prayers had answered , he felt as if he is the happiest person in the world, he looked at the sky tha thanking Allah for his kindness, for returning him his life...zoya too sat beside him and cupped his face making him look at her 'asad, no one will separate us now, our problems are over now, now we will be together forever, i am so sorry for making you go through from so much pain and breaking your heart beyond repair but please forgive me and i promise you that i will be with you till my last breath' she said with a lot of emotions visible in her voice while he just took her in a hug, they cried with each other, remembering the worst from which they had gone through..

'Ohkay now stop you both, how much will you cry hmm? Happy days are back again, you both will stay together now so just be happy and let's go, everyone are waiting for us...' said yaseen forcing them to break there hug, and then with asya in one car and yaseen following them in the other...through out the drive asya stole glances of each other..and finally when they reached at the venue they met four highly excited and crazy peoples who were jumping like monkeys here and there in joy..it took both of them a good amount of minutes to calm them, aliza just took both of them in a friendly hug congratulating them

'asad beta' called out Ahmed, asad held zoya's hand and walked towards Ahmed, and as sat beside him and leaving zoya's hand he hold Ahmed's hand 'uncle i am sorry' 'sorry for what beta?' 'uncle i know that u wanted zoya and yaseen to get marry but uncle i love her a..' 'no beta..i should say sorry if i ever knew that my daughter loves someone else like you and that too more than herself then i never had ask her to say yes for the proposal, i would had wait until she build up the courage to face you all, until she knew that she is better than that person in every way...par beta whatever happen happened, it's time to look ahead and move on in your life...it's time for you both to give your love, your feelings a name...marry my daughter asad..' 'i will uncle, i have to but i need time..' 'why beta..why you want time?' it was ilyas who asked

'to become something uncle, uncle u now may know that i have nothing of my own, my so called father had disowned me or you can say that i myself left everything...uncle just give me one year, i will work hard so that i can proudly take her with me, just one year...' 'asad, why are you saying like this..whatever we have, it's yours too...' interrupted ayaan 'i know ayaan and i can't explain how much thankful i am of yours..but i have to make my own name...i know you guyz will help me whenever i will need you but i can't do it...' he replied 'i have to work on my own for zoya, for ami, for najma..i have a lot of responsibilities uncle and i have to prove myself in each and every responsibility..please trust me uncle, just one year..' he added turning to Ahmed 'i trust you beta and i will give you all the time you want...' replied Ahmed smiling placing his hand on asad's head, in this no one noticed aliza silently leaving from there except HIM

'matlab there is no wedding today' pouted najma and Sara..before ilyas could say a no they all heard yaseen 'no today is a wedding..' everyone eyed turned in his direction while yaseen was walking towards the exit and if they will look a little far there stood a nervous aliza with her head down , she stood still until yaseen reached to her and holding her hand took her where everyone were standing 'I want to marry aliza...' announced yaseen and other stared at him shocked 'but she is just your friend yaseen' said ilyas to yaseen while he looked at aliza chuckling while she gave ilyas a faint smile

Yaseen was so angry as aliza revealed everything to him, he witnessed whatever happened in the garden although he didn't did intentionally, it happened as his rooms windows opened in the garden..aliza came to him as she saw him when everyone left from the garden, she knew he would be broken as he really love zoya a lot 'yaseen' she called out placing her hand on his shoulder while he jerk it away 'please listen to me..' 'what should i listen, after knowing that the person i loved with all my might never ever had loved me, that she loves someone else...' 'yaseen i know you are hurt and broken..but it's the truth and you have to understand it..i know what are you feeling but no one can do nothing in this...asad and zoya loves each other a lot' 'but what about me...i love zoya...' 'i know yaseen, but u have to back off, i can feel your pain but this is the only option...' she whisper and yaseen looked at her with rage

'i should back off...i should forget zoya and look who is saying that she can feel my pain, how can u do that aliza when you never had gone through this, when you never had loved someone and than sacrificed your love for that person's happiness..you can never feel my pain until you go through the same...' he taunt her but what he failed to noticed was her pale face, which lost all colors as he spoke like that to her 'why?' she whisper as a tear role down her cheeks, although it was a mere whisper yaseen heard it and looked at her, her eyes were watery as she took a step backward, yaseen stood up cursing himself for saying all this to her, after all what's her fault in this.. 'aliza, i am sorry i didn't meant that at all' he apologized 'why yaseen? Why everyone thinks that they are the only person who's heart had broken, who can feel the pain when they didn't win there love ones..why can't they think that i may also had faced a heart break, that i may also had sacrificed my love for his happiness, that i too had gone through so much, that i too had cried a lot of nights over my incomplete love...why?' she asked, her voice held of emotions while yassen looked at her astonished 'al...aliza you loves someone' he said or rather asked while she let out a painful laugh

'yes yaseen i do, why? Can't i love someone? Can't i have the stamina to sacrifice it and moved on...? You tell me? What u think i am? Am i not a human? Don't i have a heart which can beat for someone?' she yelled 'aliza..you..you never told me then how would i know?' he stammered 'you were my best friend yaseen...you should knew what i feel...' she said hurt 'but what happen? Who is that person? Why you sacrificed your love? Did u ever tell that person?..' 'i tried but before me he told me that he loves zoya..' 'what how can he love someo...zo..zoya..? You love asad?' he asked shocked but she didn't reacted much and replied 'no i love you..i always did, from the time you asked me to be your best friend, from the time you shared your secrets with me, from the time we fight with others for each other, from the time i cried because i had to leave you and go away...i had always loved you only yaseen..but when i tried to confess you told me that you love zoya and i decided to back off..for your happiness' yaseen went numb hearing it..he never had imagined that aliza love him while she stood there for a while waiting for him to utter something but he was too numb to react so wiping away the tears she left...


'zoya i may had turned selfish and hadn't denied for the nikah if aliza hadn't told me what she felt for me...she was she is and always remain my best friend but how much she did for me, even she killed her love for my happiness, i guess i will be the luckiest person if she will come in my life...i had realized that we shouldn't live for those whom we love but for those who loves us..but don't apply this rule on yourself because in your case you both love each other while mine love was one sided' he added the last part giggling while asya just gave him a heartfelt smile

He turned to aliza and sat on his knees 'Aliya Aftab will you marry me??' he asked raising his hand in her direction while she blushed, the darkest shade of red and slipped her hand in his answering all his questions, he smiled widely and took her in a hug after standing up

Nikah took place in the presence of all the guest and family, najma requested everyone to stay as she called dilshaad and put it at speaker 'asad, zoya...' she said 'ji aunty' replied zoya 'beta najma told me everything and i am more than happy, i can't even explain what i am feeling right now and asad i am proud of you beta that you asked for a little time to become something and thank you so much zoya for supporting my son but beta as for now i want you both to get engage...' she mentioned her demand 'but ami, you aren't here then how can i?' 'yes aunty engagement will happen once your Iddah is completed ' added zoya 'no beta please..what if i am not there my blessings are with both of you, please fulfil my wish , imran will be there in sometime with the rings for you..' 'dislhaad bi, you don't worry, i am here and as a father it's my responsibility to get them engage right now..and han you can send ring for zoya, asad will wear the one i have' said ahmed taking phone from najma 'shukriya bhaisaab...' 'shukriya kaisa...it's about our children so no compromise..'

Asya got engaged and took blessings from all the elders, where zoya was ready to face everything to support in this one year journey asad was determined to achieve everything he had promised for...they intertwined there fingers and looked at each other assuring that now whatever happen they will be with each other on every way of life so the upcoming will be more beautiful

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so that's it..i hope you guyz liked it😃do share your views and yeah epilogue will be coming soon but there is a condition, as i had experienced a very bad response at the last part of my SS tu hi bat zindagi, i had learned a lesson from it, so please it's a request from all of you to not to ignore to hit like and do leave your feedback...please *making a puppy face*😳

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Yay i am on first number. Yippie.

Ok so inloved the update aaroo.
Yes i am happy now 😊 😳

Yay my guess was ryt yaseen himself said no.

But uh cheated on me uh didnt show their after marriage scenes and ended it. Katti 😭😭

Nyway thanks for the defication 😃

But that doesnt mean i am taking to uh.
Huh katti

Bye

Love you 😉
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Happy ending of a sad story 😆

Zoya farooqui ne kabhi ek baar main 'Qubool hai ' kaha hai jo aaj kehti 🤣

Kher Abh toh dono saath hai

Sirf engaged ??😲

Nikah epilouge main na ?😆
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