A SaHil SS: Kismat - PART 4 ON PG10 20/12 - Page 2

This was so beautiful! I can't believe that this is your first story
- I must admit that you're really talented with capturing just the right words to make it more powerful :)

This was a lovely start with a lot of emotions between two brothers - two fallen souls craving to be with the person they love. <3
Beautiful start! I hope you'll update soon with the second part. Hopefully we'll see Sanam to make her enterence. :)

Please update soon, because you really got me hooked on this emotional ride :)

Originally posted by: ..Sakura..

Heyy 🤗

Wow absolutely brilliant 👏!!!

I love your current story arc so please continue with that

Glad to see Aahils misunderstandings finally cleared I'm super excited to read your next part ☺️

Also plz PM me when you write your next part 😳

HEY!

Thanks for the lovely comment! And I'm glad you like the story arc so far - hopefully you'll like what is to come!

I've sent a PM and a buddy request too so you'll be contacted whenever I update 😳

Again, thanks for the comment dear ,
Tannu x

Originally posted by: fauzmalik

Wow!! That was amazing!! I loved it. Are you sure its your first time writing?! :-) very well thought out and penned. The way you have described Ahil's emotions and his thought process, done very nicely :-) very apt. Not hard at all to imagine Ahil actually saying and thinking all that.
And finally someone has written about Rehan and his thoughts in detail as well.
I feel rehan is an important character in the show being Tanveers son and all. And I am glad so far from what i have read he is an important character here too! Its your story but please please please don't make him negative. He looks too cute to be negative , lol.

Can't wait to read more!

THANK YOU 🤗

I tried to make Aahil as realistic as possible, so I really appreicate you recognising that effort I made 😳

And I agree, Rehaan is a very important character. You'll see later on what he does 😉

Thanks again,
Tannu x

Originally posted by: bindasss

This was an absolutely amazing story!! I really really loved it! I cant wait to read the rest of it!! Please continue soon and could you pm me the next updates? Pwetty pwease? Lol

God, you make me blush! 😳

I'm so glad you like it so far - i've sent a buddy request and a PM regarding PART 2 - hope you enjoy it dude!

Thanks so much for the comment!

Tannu x

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

I can't wait to read more! Will Seher be in this story? What solution to her problems has Tanveer found? I love this and I really can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

So far I've replied to only a handful of people and I'm already smiling like a girl possessed hahaah! I am really pleased that you're liking it so far! Thank you so much for the enthusiasm, it really is encouraging!

I've updated PART 2 on page one (just scroll down)

ENJOY DEAR,
Tannu x

Originally posted by: _ZaaraKhan

love it! looking forward to the next part :)

THANK YOU!

I've updated PART 2 on PG 1, enjoy dear!

Tannu x

Originally posted by: sageflower7

Hello long lost twin sister !! 🤗 We've been having same jazbaati and brain waves this weekend !! 😆...

I think I'd be Seher i think, I actually made Aahil thrown the punch at Rehan... !! Haha... Sadistic 😉

Lovely story. I really liked the emotions felt by Aahil as he ruminated over Sanam's caring over him. I hope something huge happens next week !

Great OS, i enjoyed it a lot... CAn't wait for part 2 !

AHAHAHA, we have indeed been having the same brain waves! And I loved the fact that Aahil punched Rehaan - that was so LOL; I totally feel the sadism by the way 🤣

I too hope something huge happens! God I really need them to get closer already - I have had enough of their anguish, let's see some sexy SaHil moments 😉 I spent about ten mins going ga-ga over the spoiler pics - topless Aahil with Sanam just draped across his body and they're THIS close to one another. Excuse me whilst I drool.

Part 2 is up on pg 1 because everybody's comments - esp yours "Seher" 😃 - made me feel so loved.

Enjoy,

Tannu x

Please don't tell me that Razia's plan is to switch Sanam and Seher! Is Razia a good person in this story? Argh, so many questions but so few answers!!! I am absolutely in love with this story and I can't wait to read more. Update soon please!

Originally posted by: mahwash17

This was so beautiful! I can't believe that this is your first story
- I must admit that you're really talented with capturing just the right words to make it more powerful :)

This was a lovely start with a lot of emotions between two brothers - two fallen souls craving to be with the person they love. <3
Beautiful start! I hope you'll update soon with the second part. Hopefully we'll see Sanam to make her enterence. :)

Please update soon, because you really got me hooked on this emotional ride :)

Oh gosh, you can't imagine how many times I've read your comment! I've proably memorised it by now! Yup. I've checked - I've memorised it 😉

First of all, thank you so much for the huge compliment. I'm glad you find the story so powerful, I like to make sure that everything has an effect, and I know it's worth it when thoughful readers such as yourself really understand the signifcance of the words I choose.

I'm really impressed by your mature understanding of PART 1. I really want Aahil to pursue Sanam but I know he won't unless he's realeased by the guilt of betraying Rehaan. That's why I was inspired to start this SS after learning that Aahil will confront Rehaan - hopefully all of that misunderstanding is cleared on the show, I need some SaHil moments in my life!

Of course, now that Aahil is completely free of this burden, we'll see him pursue what he wants (PART 2 is up by the way on page 1). We'll also see Rehaan understand that him and Sanam are not meant to be *tear*.

And finally, I'm glad i've got you hooked! I've read so many OS's/SS/FF's that have just captivated me - to the point where I regularly check for updates like a manic, crazy addict. I can't express how warm and fuzzy I feel knowing that someone likes my SS that much! 😳

Thanks again and enjoy the ride 😉

Tannu x

Originally posted by: fanraya

Beautiful,love it.

Thank you for commenting dear, I really appriecate it!

Part 2 is up on PAGE 1.

ENJOY,

Tannu x